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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_
Omg
Thats really beyond words...cant find any to describe it
Wonderfully penned

Thanks Dipsi 😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: sweetiecuckoo
nicely written.

thanks dear 😊

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

hmm beautifully written indeed👏⭐️
i could feel the passion☺️
u should write more along these lines... only not a drabble but something much longer

take care

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan
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whatever happened to those dislaimers ??? 😆 I am glad I am working from home today, so no one has to see the colour spreading on my cheeks 😳

Oops Sorry forgot about that one 😳

Only one word i can give this piece of yours Aani... SENSUOUS

although its a drabble, you've managed to make it so visual and descriptive. and that is so hard to do when you dont want to write with a lot of words👏

thanks Lucky... lets just say it was a personal challenge for someone like me - like you said I didn't wanna use a lot of words... but still they had to .. convey the idea, thanks for calling this sensuous, cos this might be my most explicit yet subtle work ever ☺️

"How blest am I in this discovering thee!
To enter in these bonds is to be free;
Then where my hand is set, my seal shall be.
Full nakedness! All joys are due to thee,
As souls unbodied, bodies unclothed must be" - John Donne

such gorgeous lines Thank you Lucky

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Dr.Tinni
Superb...

thanks dear 😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: dreamy-sa
it was awesome...u have penned down beautifully😳

thanks dreamy 😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: happenstance
Aani this is incredibly beautiful. I know it really should appeal to the KK girl in me but honestly after the initial few words I was just mesmerised, the beauty of it and the way you conveyed such an intimate moment between them, that I wasn't even thinking KK thoughts. Wow- simply beautiful.

Hey Uz thank you so much I swear your comment means a lot to me, cos that is what I was aiming for you know, describing the passion, the desire but not make it come across as mere lust... as only a physical act, while that is what this piece was about - kinda a meta thing 😳 so thank you so much for these words 🤗

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: DivAniTanni
Lovely...you write so beautifully just like a professional. A great piece of writing indeed Aani.

Thanks Tanni 😃 that's really sweet of ya to say

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety
omg, that was sooo amazingly written.👏
love it...please write an OS on this 😳. I am bored of writing mature OS on IshRa😆. More intrested in reading😆 and that too when you write😳. Please do consider my request 😊

Thanks dear as of now I don't think I can write any OS on a similar theme I don't find myself there yet, cant say anything about the future though - my motto is never say never 😳 so maybe some other time if I think I can pull it off and be inspired enough😳