Ecstasy - IshRa Drabble - Page 4

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_

Omg

Thats really beyond words...cant find any to describe it

Wonderfully penned

Originally posted by: sweetiecuckoo

nicely written.

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

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whatever happened to those dislaimers ??? 😆 I am glad I am working from home today, so no one has to see the colour spreading on my cheeks 😳

Oops Sorry forgot about that one 😳

Only one word i can give this piece of yours Aani... SENSUOUS

although its a drabble, you've managed to make it so visual and descriptive. and that is so hard to do when you dont want to write with a lot of words👏

thanks Lucky... lets just say it was a personal challenge for someone like me - like you said I didn't wanna use a lot of words... but still they had to .. convey the idea, thanks for calling this sensuous, cos this might be my most explicit yet subtle work ever ☺️

"How blest am I in this discovering thee!
To enter in these bonds is to be free;
Then where my hand is set, my seal shall be.
Full nakedness! All joys are due to thee,
As souls unbodied, bodies unclothed must be" - John Donne

such gorgeous lines Thank you Lucky

Originally posted by: Dr.Tinni

Superb...

Originally posted by: dreamy-sa

it was awesome...u have penned down beautifully😳

Originally posted by: happenstance

Aani this is incredibly beautiful. I know it really should appeal to the KK girl in me but honestly after the initial few words I was just mesmerised, the beauty of it and the way you conveyed such an intimate moment between them, that I wasn't even thinking KK thoughts. Wow- simply beautiful.

Originally posted by: DivAniTanni

Lovely...you write so beautifully just like a professional. A great piece of writing indeed Aani.

Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety

omg, that was sooo amazingly written.👏

love it...please write an OS on this 😳. I am bored of writing mature OS on IshRa😆. More intrested in reading😆 and that too when you write😳. Please do consider my request 😊