OS:Chahun main ya Na! part4 pg13 (21/7)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I loved it ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Eeeks again i enjoyed readng it
Thanks for the pm and continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part-3
**not proof read. Apologies for any spelling/grammatical errors**

Next day, Ishita wakes everyone up at 4am, except Raman and Ruhi.
She tells everyone about the family picnic and says it's a surprize from Raman.
The whole Bhalla and Iyer family is shocked but happy that Raman had planned this for them.
As they all get ready, Raman wakes up to the noise of laughter and excitment from the living room. He walks into the living room to find everyone ready and Ishita packing food, some other stuff and drinks.
The Iyers along with Bala, Vandu and shravan also arrive at the Bhalla's residence.
Seeing Raman, everyone starts praising him for planning this surprize and how everyone will enjoy this day.
Raman is perplexed at the turn of events. He holds his head dejectedly, now realising why his jhansi ki rani so easily agreed for the picnic!
Main to sirf ishita aur mere ghoomne ki baat kar raha tha par lagta hai ishita ko laga hum purey family ke saath ja rahe hai..ab kya karun?
Sabko le bhi jaun to kaise? Resort to sirf do logon ke liye book kiya tha. Shit yaar!
Mihir ko call karta hu.

He stares at Ishita who notices Raman is disturbed and wonders why.

Mihika calls Mihir telling about the Raman's family picnic plan and asks him to come soon.
Mihir who was still in sleepy mode, wide awakens with a shock on learning this. Meanwhile Mihir gets Raman's call hence he tells Mihika that he'll call back later and cuts her call.

Mihir asks Raman "Bhai! Ye mihika se kya sun raha hu? Aap sabko le ja rahe ho picnic pe? Aur mujhe laga ki aap bhabhi ke saath akele time spend karna chahte the! Kya kiya bhai!"

Raman gets angry "abey o bhabhi ke dulhaare! Tujhe bhi tere bhabhi ki tarah bina kuch soche samjhe lecture dene ki adat lag gayi hai?. Pehle meri baat sun."

He explains the entire misunderstanding that happened. Mihir bursts out into laughter on learning this as he says "bhai! Aap bhi na... aapko bhabhi se bolna chahiye tha ki sirf aap unke saath jana chahte ho. Humesha jo baat zaroori hoti hai usko chodke baaki sab bolte ho aap!"

Raman fumes shouting at him "tu mere haat se thappad khayega ya jhooton se?"

"Acha acha sorry bhai! Gussa kyu ho rahe ho. Ek idea hai."

Raman calms down and asks "kya?"

Mihir says "main sabko sambhal lunga. Main aur mihika sabko dusri resort leke jayenge. Aap apna program jaise plan kiya tha waise hi karo. Mai abhi aata hu wahan. Aap bhabhi ko kuch na kuch kaam deke busy rakho. Mai sabko leke nikal jaunga. Fir aap dono saath me chale jana resort. "

Raman replies "haan ye theek rahega. Thanks mihir!" He ends the call and feels relieved.

Mihir calls Mihika and ezplains her the entire plan. Mihika laughs at her sister's innocence that she couldn't understand Raman planned this for only her.
Mihika appreciates Mihir and says "dont worry, main ghar pe sabko samjhadungi."

Ruhi asks Raman "papa, hum sab picnic pe bahut enjoy karenge. Haina?"

Raman takes Ruhi to their room and closes the door so that Ishita doesn't hear them.

He kneels infront of Ruhi and holds her hand saying "beta, actually aapke papa aapki ishima ko surprize dena chahte the. Unke saath thodi der time spend karne. But aapki ishima samajhti hi nahi."

Ruhi innocently asks "toh aap mujhe saath nahi le jaoge aapke saath?"

Raman feels sad to leave her and go but he manages to make her understand saying "Ruhi beta, aap bhi chahte ho na ki apke ishima aur papa saath saath rahe? Toh aaj sirf hum dono ja rahe hai par agli baar promise aapke saath hum dono ghoomne jayenge."

Ruhi feels excited that her parents are going out for the first time. She happily agrees.
Raman kisses her on forehead and says "thank you beta. Papa loves you. Aur haan, aaj aap sravan aur baaki sab ke saath picnic pe enjoy karna. Next time pakka sirf aap, main aur ishima jayenge. Ok?"

Ruhi claps happily and says "ok papa. Enjoy karna ishima ke saath. Aur bahut sare photos lena. Mujhe dekhna hai."

Raman promises the same to her.
As Ishita is busy in the kitchen, mihika whispers Raman's surprize for Ishita and about mihir's plan to take them all to the picnic and let Raman and Ishita be alone.
Everyone tries to control laughter on the entire misunderstanding and agrees to the plan.

Raman gets ready, walks into the living room to see Mihir and everyone controlling their laughter. Raman tries to look away not wanting to be teased by anyone.

Ishita finishes her work and says she's all done. Mihir gestures Raman through eyes to make an excuse to stay back with Ishita.

Raman tells her "areh Ishita, woh mujhe kuch kaam tha, tum ek min andar aao kamre me."

Ishita smells something fishy by his behaviour but goes with him to their room.
Meanwhile Mihir and rest of the members leave for their picnic sans Raman and ishita.

Raman asks ishita to find his wallet. She gives it to him saying "bed pe maine nikaal ke to rakha tha Raman jaise roz rakhti hu."

Raman is nervous thinking what will she think of him once she gets to know that everyone left and only they both will be going to the resort.

Ishita leaves the room saying "ab late nahi ho raha kya? Sab bahar wait kar rahe honge. Mai ja rahi hu, aap jaldi aajao."

She sees that nobody is at home except they both. Raman enters the living room behind her and scratches his head thinking what to say.

She gives him a suspicious look. "Sab kaha gaye hai Raman? Kya ho raha hai yahan?"

He finally tells her the truth " ishita, kal main jab picnic pe jane ki baat kar raha tha, mera matlab hum dono ka tha...purey parivaar ke saath jaane ki nahi!"

Ishita understood his plan and felt bad that she spoiled it by involving both the family members to join them.

Raman continued "dekho...mujhe galat mat samajhna... main sirf tumhare saath kuch waqt bitana chahta tha. Tumne mujhe maaf kardiya ho par mai jaanta hu kitni takleef hui tumhe itne din iss accident, shagun aur adi ko lekar. Mai sirf genuinely tumhare liye kuch karna chahta tha...par..."

He stopped as he noticed a teary eyed Ishita staring at him.

"I'm sorry ishita, agar tum mere saath nahi jana chahti then its ok. Mai resort me call karke booking cancel karwa dunga"

Ishita shook her head smiling and wiped her tears.
She looked into his eyes and held her ears cutely saying "I'm sorry. Mujhe laga hi nahi ki aap mujhe le jana chahte the. Kaan pakarkar sorry"

Raman laughed at her innocence. Ishita asked him "par ab sab kaha gaye? Aur Ruhi? Wo to excited thi ki hum dono aur wo saath me picnic enjoy karenge sab ke saath?"

Raman explains her about Mihir's plan and that he already explained Ruhi about this.

Ishita is impressed that he has learnt to handle Ruhi in a gentle way.

Raman says "ab late nahi ho raha? Chale agar aapki permission ho toh!"

Ishita smiles and says "chalo"

As they are on the way, both are sitting silently. Ishita keeps staring outside the window while Raman is driving.

Both looks at each other without the other knowing.

Ishita asks Raman to switch on the radio to reduce the awkward silence between them.

As soon as raman turns the radio on, the song starts playing - 'mai tenu samjhava ki, na tere bin lagda jee,
Tu ki jane pyaar mera,
Mai karu intezaar tera...'

Both Raman and Ishita look at each other and blush.
Ishita quickly changes the channel to avoid more awkwardness.

But it only makes them blush more as the song plays- "tu hi ye mujhko bata de...chahun main ya na,
Apne to dil ka pata de...chahun main ya na..."

Both have a short eyelock. ishita is about to switch off the radio but Raman puts his hand over hers to stop her.

She looks at him. He says "rehne do na ishita. Waise songs to ache hai na..."

Ishita smiles and nods.
After sometime, they finally reach the resort.

Both walk towarss the reception who greet them.and give Ishta a bouquet saying "welcome to our resort Mrs..."

Raman helps the receptionist by saying "Mrs.Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla"

Ishita looks at him shyly as he returns her a smile too.

Raman takes the room key and leaves with Ishita while ordering the staff to send their luggage to their room.

As soon as they enter the room and switch on the lights, both are shocked to see the room decorated with aromatic candles and rose petals on the bed shaped into a red heart.

Ishita's jaw drops in astonishment wondering if Raman brought her here to get physically intimate with her?

She gets angry thinking- Raman aisa kaise soch sakte hai? Kya wo mujhse pyaar... nahi nahi...wo care to karte hai but pyaar?

She looks at Raman angrily who himself is unwlaware of all these arrangements.

He tries to explain ishita saying "ishita...I know tumhe lag raha hai ki maine ye sab kiya par trust me...I have no idea. Mai...mai...ye sab nahi chahta...I mean I didnt mean...I...I..."

He struggles to clarify her as he himself don't know what to say.
He understood this must be mihir's plan to get them close.
Though he knew they can't be physically intimate, yet somewhere in his heart he wondered if he wanted this.

Ishita understood even raman is unaware of this arrangement. Both look at each other awkwardly and then look away.

Raman manages to speak up "main...main housekeeping ko bulaake saaf karwadeta hu ye sab."

As he is about to dial the staff, she stops him saying "rehne do Raman. Waise room bahut acha hai." She smiles at him trying to remain normal.

He feels relaxed that she didn't misunderstand him. He smiles back at her and says "tum fresh hojao pehle. Fir hum bahar chalenge.".she agrees and goes to freshenup.

Raman clears the bed off the rose petals and lies down watching tv.

Ishita comes out of washroom wearing the blue anarkali that Raman selected for her.
Raman's eyes are wide open and his jaw droos as he checks her out from top to bottom. She blushes and looks down. He continues to stare at her without blinking.

She asks him "kaisi lag rahi hu?"

He comes back to his senses and replies "bahut achi".

Ishita blushes more and moves towards the dressing table which was opposite to their bed to get ready.

As ishita sat down infront of the mirror, she could see Raman staring at her. She ignored him and continued to wear her jewelry. As she started combing her hair and tying it up, he interrupted her looking at her face in mirror saying "ishita...tum khulle baalon me zyada achi lagti ho."

She looked at his mirror image shyly and they both exchanged an eye lock.

He got up to avoid more awkwardness and went to washroom to freshenup.

Ishita smiled to herself thinking his words and as he said, she left her hair open by taking a side parting.

Raman got ready and turned to ishita as he said "ab chale?"
He looked at her who was touching her hair. He smiled seeing that she left her hair open as he liked it.

Both left the room making their way towards the lobby.
Raman broke their silence by saying "thanks."

Ishita is surprised n asks "kis liye?"

Raman replies "hmm...kapde ki thaan me khud ko na lapetne ke liye aur...aur...baal khulla chodne ke liye..."

Ishita smiles blushingly.
They both visit amusement park enjoying the greenery around.

Ishita is elated and is admiring the nature while Raman is happy to see her happy.

After sometime, tgey settle down on a bench to rest for a while.

Ishita notices Raman covering his face with hand to avoid the direct sun rays falling on him.

Ishita takes her dupatta and pulls it over his head to protect him from the heat.
Raman notices it and stares at her in amusement.

Ishita quickly removes her dupatta realising what she did and says " ab hume chalna chahiye. Bahut bhook lag rahi hai. Lunch karle?"

Raman agreed and both went to a restaurant. Raman asked ishita to order for them.

Ishita ordered for palak paneer and veg pulao for both of them which are Raman's fave.

Raman asked "par tumhe to paneer pasand nahi na? Fir kyun order kiya?"

Ishita replied "jab aap mere liye veg kha sakte ho, to main aapke luye liye paneer nahi kha sakti kya?"

Raman blushed at that. They finished their lunch and decided to rest for sometime in the room since it was too hot outside.

Ishita wanted to call Mihika and ask about Ruhi but Raman stopped her. Ishita was sad.
"Mujhe Ruhi ki fikar ho rahi hai. Hope wo dhoop me na ghoom rahi ho. Usne khana khaya hoga ya nahi. Kahin wo kisiko pareshaan to nahi kar rahi hogi na."

Ishita's worries seemed never ending. Raman said "ishita, ruhi ke saath hum dono ka pura parivaar hai saath. Aur ruhi tumhari beti hai. Wo kisi ko tang nahi karegi. Relax."

Hearing that, ishita relaxed a bit as a smile appeared on her face.

Raman teased her by saying "tum kitna tension leti ho yaar. Tension tumse pehle paida hui thi ya tum tension ke saath paida hui thi?"

Ishita gets angry and replies "ye joke tha? Agar tha to bhi bakwaas tha! Oneliners kya out of stock hogaye jo sada hua line phek rahe ho!"

Raman sarcastically says "sada hua to tumhare lectures hai...jo bin mausam barsaat ki tarah kabhi bhi kahin bhi tapak padte hai!"

"Oh really? Waise barsaat dharti pe pade dhool ko saaf karti hai. Jaise mere lectures aapki galtiyon ko sudharti hai! ...ya atleast sudharne ki koshish!"

"Rehne do tum! Baarish zyada tez hojaye to tufaan ban jaati hai jo kisi ka bhala nahi karti. Tumhare lectures ki tarah!"

Ishita loses her patience as she says "to kyun reh rahe ho is tufaan ke saath?. Raho akele iss resort me. Main ja rahi hu ghar waapis!" She gets up angrily packing her luggage.

Raman holds her hand to stop her and says "areh...mai mazak kar raha tha yaar... har baar chodke jane ki dhamki kyun deti ho?"

Ishita sensed pain in his voice. He smiled and said "waise mujhe ye tufaan bhi bahut acha lagta hai." He winked.

Ishita smiled and said "aapke paas aur koi choice bhi nahi hai. Iss tufaan ko to aapko zindagi bhar jhelna padega."

Raman faked a sad face as he said "matlab bachi kuch life bhi patni ke lectures me shaheed hojayegi!"

Ishita laughed at that while Raman smiles staring at her laughing innocently.

Precap- couple dance competition in the resort. Raman dancing with a random girl. Ishita furious and dances with another random tall guy making raman angry and jealous.

Edited by ishra4ever - 11 years ago

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ishra4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: PriyaKabhi
Thanks for Pm.
It was so cute and Nice OS.
The title to this os was so nice.
The conversation of Ishra was so cute.😊
In part-1."meri jaan car me nahi...kisi aur me basti hai. Aur rahi baat car ki, toh, tumne meri zindagi, mera ghar sambhala hai...toh ye car bhi sambhaal hi logi"I Like this line very much.😳
In part-2,The picnic concept was so cute.😊
Percap was very interesting,Please continue soon.

Thanks a lot dear for liking it. ...updated part 3. Hope u enjoy this part too 😳

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ishra4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: whitelily
amazing update😊

Thanks a lot dear

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ishra4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: RekhaDayan5
luvly...😛

Thank you...

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ishra4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: lourel24
nyc update.Sometime kids r so dangerous. 😊

Thank you dear. Yes kids can be dangerous but they are innocent souls...except kids like adi...but he too is not a bad kid...just misguided kid by his bad mom lol