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Hi friends,
I'm back with an OS after a short interval.
It's based on spoilers but not a total copy of spoilers.
Hope you all like it.
**not proof read**
Self thoughts will be in bold.
Adi was angry over Raman for sending him to remand home but was relieved when the court released him on humanitarian grounds. He was happy that now he won't get separated from his mother, Shagun.
As they came out of courtroom, Raman tried to speak with his son but Adi had not even a little bit of guilt or repentance on what he did. He warned Raman to stay away from him and Shagun.
Shagun instigated Adi more with her false tears as she blamed how Raman had put him in danger being his own father.
Raman stood there helpless, trying to hold back his tears for the worat that he expected had arrived. He knew his son might hate him forever after this, but he had to do what was right so that Adi doesn't turn into an careless and irresponsible adult.
The whole bhalla and iyer family felt bad seeing Raman in this condition but they thought to leave him alone for a while knowing that Ishita will take better care of him as always.
Ishita stood next to him with tears in her eyes as she saw Raman depressed over his son's hatred.
Ashok comes there with a 5 carat diamond ring and proposes to shagun. Raman and ishita look on as shagun agrees to marry, not for the sake of Ashok's love but to make Raman jealous.
Adi hugs Ashok addressing him as dad. All 3 give a cold stare at Raman and ishita. Raman suddenly shifts his gaze to Ishita when he feels her fingers intertwining between his. She gives him a genuine smile as she tightens her hold on him. He has a relaxed expression on his face as he looks into her eyes which speaks volumes without the need of words. He knew that no matter what, she'll always be with him, holding his hand in the journey of their life.
Ishita tells Raman that slowly together they'll dissolve Adi's hatred with their pure love and oneday, Adi will respect and value Raman's love for him.
Raman doesn't believe that day would ever come in his life but he's proud that he has got Ishita who has only love for everyone in her heart.
As the trio leave, Raman and Ishita too start for home. This time, Raman himself gives his car keys to her, asking her to drive as he seats himself in the passenger seat.
She is at first amused when he asks her to drive. Later, as she is driving, she asks him in a teasing voice - "aaj aapne apne aap mujhe drive karne diya? Wo bhi aapki jaan...I mean aapki car ko? Car ki chinta nahi ho rahi kya?"
He smiles at her as he replies "meri jaan car me nahi...kisi aur me basti hai. Aur rahi baat car ki, toh, tumne meri zindagi, mera ghar sambhala hai...toh ye car bhi sambhaal hi logi."
Ishita feels happy on hearing Raman praise her genuinely for the first time, that too in his full senses. She blushes a little which he notices too and continues to drive
Raman sees a florist shop on the way and asks ishita to stop.
"Kya hua Raman? Yahan beech raste me gaadi kyu rokne ko kaha? "
"Gaadi rokdi...par apni zubaan par break kab lagaogi jhansi ki rani!"
Ishita gives him an angry-cute look. He smiles at that since he was so missing her taunts and her cute expressions whenever he teases her.
He leaves the car while ordering her to remain seated in the car.
Ishita thinks- abhi abhi ek tension khatam hua nahi ki ye ravan kumar fir se shuru hogaye apne oneliners ke saath mujhe tang karne! Ayoo murgan! Give me a break!
Raman returns and sits back in the car.He gives her flower bouquet and says thank you.
Ishita is pleasantly surprized at that gesture. She takes the bouquet, closes her eyes as she smells the fragrance of fresh roses. A wide smile appear on ishita's face. Raman feels happy to see her happy.
He asks "tumhe pasand aaya?"
She looks at him smiling and says "bahut! Par ye sab kisliye?"
Raman replied "thank you...for being there with me always."
He blushed a little and looked away. Ishita noticed this. She kept staring at him lovingly.
He met her gaze and he wished he could drown in her love filled eyes. Her gaze was so powerful that he couldn't have controlled his senses if he didn't distract himself from her thoughts.
He got into teasing mode "oh hello madrasan! Puri zindagi padi hai...jee bhar ke dheklena mujhe...filhaal car chalane ka kasht karogi? Mujhe ghar aaj jaana hai...agle hafte nahi!"
His voice made her return to her senses. She couldn't stop blushing at his words while trying to give back to him "kuch bhi bakwas huh? Aap Sid(malhotra) nahi ho jo mai dekhu!"
He got jealous as she compared him with Siddharth. Rest of the way, he kept silent being self conscious of his looks. He touches his beard and thinks he needs a shave and a new haircut!
Ishita observes him silently without his knowledge as she continues to drive. For a change, she likes this angry jealous Raman kumar Bhalla, who is posessive about his wife and who is jealous if she speaks in favour of any other man.
She shakes her head and tells Raman in her thoughts - Raman, aap chahe jaise bhi ho...mujhe sabse zyada aap hi pasand ho.
She smiles to herself at that.
Raman notices it and wonders if she's thinking about her meet with Sid and smiling?
Nah! Ishita mere hi baare me soch rahi hogi. Wait...agar koi aur uske thoughts me hua toh?
That thought sent shivers down his spine.
Bhalla house was back to its normal routine.. Mrs.Bhalla was ordering neelu what to cook for lunch. Romi requested for an off and went to party with friends. Simmi was taking care of ananya in her room. Mr.Bhalla thought to take a nap. Ishita got ready for clinic and came to their room. She saw Raman relaxing on the bed supporting his back and head against the headrest of the bed and crossed outstretched legs.
He saw Ishita walking into the room. Ishita asked- "are you not going to office?"
Raman replies "nah! Aaj bahut din baad sukoon mila hai dil ko. Aaj bas ghar pe rehkar araam karunga."
Ishita could feel the calmness in his mind after struggling with himself and his thoughts since past few days.
He asks her "tum ja rahi ho?"
She nods in a yes.
He kindof feels dejected but doesn't let her know. He says "ok. Carry on".
She felt disappointed for a second thinking he didn't even ask her to not go. Then she hit her head and thought - kya ishu! Tumhe kyun rukna hai wo bhi ravan kumar ke saath time spend karne ke liye!
Ishita goes to clinic. Raman thinks- kaash ruk jaati ishita. Itne din baad to hum dono ke beech sab theek hua hai. (Pauses) Ek min! Theek kaha hua hai? Maine maafi to maangliya aur usne maaf bhi kardiya...lekin? Maine ishita ko kitna hurt kiya...kitni aansu bahayi ishita ne meri wajah se... sirf ek sorry se wo bhale maan gayi ho, par mujhe pata hai use kitna chot pahuncha hai. Ishita, I'll give you every happiness that you deserve.
Part-2 (will try to post soon) : Raman plans a one day picnic for ishita and himself.
P.S I'll send pms to all in my buddy list. If anyone feels not interested in my pms plz let me know.
Comments/likes/suggestions are welcome.
I have kept around 4 parts of this OS in my mind.
But to continue it or not will depend on the responses I get.
Hope I do not disappoint my readers.
Love to one and all.
And yes, happy holidaying in ishralicious land :')
Part -1 : page 1
Part -2 : page 6
Part-3 : page 8
Part-4 : page 13
I'm back with an OS after a short interval.
It's based on spoilers but not a total copy of spoilers.
Hope you all like it.
**not proof read**
Self thoughts will be in bold.
Adi was angry over Raman for sending him to remand home but was relieved when the court released him on humanitarian grounds. He was happy that now he won't get separated from his mother, Shagun.
As they came out of courtroom, Raman tried to speak with his son but Adi had not even a little bit of guilt or repentance on what he did. He warned Raman to stay away from him and Shagun.
Shagun instigated Adi more with her false tears as she blamed how Raman had put him in danger being his own father.
Raman stood there helpless, trying to hold back his tears for the worat that he expected had arrived. He knew his son might hate him forever after this, but he had to do what was right so that Adi doesn't turn into an careless and irresponsible adult.
The whole bhalla and iyer family felt bad seeing Raman in this condition but they thought to leave him alone for a while knowing that Ishita will take better care of him as always.
Ishita stood next to him with tears in her eyes as she saw Raman depressed over his son's hatred.
Ashok comes there with a 5 carat diamond ring and proposes to shagun. Raman and ishita look on as shagun agrees to marry, not for the sake of Ashok's love but to make Raman jealous.
Adi hugs Ashok addressing him as dad. All 3 give a cold stare at Raman and ishita. Raman suddenly shifts his gaze to Ishita when he feels her fingers intertwining between his. She gives him a genuine smile as she tightens her hold on him. He has a relaxed expression on his face as he looks into her eyes which speaks volumes without the need of words. He knew that no matter what, she'll always be with him, holding his hand in the journey of their life.
Ishita tells Raman that slowly together they'll dissolve Adi's hatred with their pure love and oneday, Adi will respect and value Raman's love for him.
Raman doesn't believe that day would ever come in his life but he's proud that he has got Ishita who has only love for everyone in her heart.
As the trio leave, Raman and Ishita too start for home. This time, Raman himself gives his car keys to her, asking her to drive as he seats himself in the passenger seat.
She is at first amused when he asks her to drive. Later, as she is driving, she asks him in a teasing voice - "aaj aapne apne aap mujhe drive karne diya? Wo bhi aapki jaan...I mean aapki car ko? Car ki chinta nahi ho rahi kya?"
He smiles at her as he replies "meri jaan car me nahi...kisi aur me basti hai. Aur rahi baat car ki, toh, tumne meri zindagi, mera ghar sambhala hai...toh ye car bhi sambhaal hi logi."
Ishita feels happy on hearing Raman praise her genuinely for the first time, that too in his full senses. She blushes a little which he notices too and continues to drive
Raman sees a florist shop on the way and asks ishita to stop.
"Kya hua Raman? Yahan beech raste me gaadi kyu rokne ko kaha? "
"Gaadi rokdi...par apni zubaan par break kab lagaogi jhansi ki rani!"
Ishita gives him an angry-cute look. He smiles at that since he was so missing her taunts and her cute expressions whenever he teases her.
He leaves the car while ordering her to remain seated in the car.
Ishita thinks- abhi abhi ek tension khatam hua nahi ki ye ravan kumar fir se shuru hogaye apne oneliners ke saath mujhe tang karne! Ayoo murgan! Give me a break!
Raman returns and sits back in the car.He gives her flower bouquet and says thank you.
Ishita is pleasantly surprized at that gesture. She takes the bouquet, closes her eyes as she smells the fragrance of fresh roses. A wide smile appear on ishita's face. Raman feels happy to see her happy.
He asks "tumhe pasand aaya?"
She looks at him smiling and says "bahut! Par ye sab kisliye?"
Raman replied "thank you...for being there with me always."
He blushed a little and looked away. Ishita noticed this. She kept staring at him lovingly.
He met her gaze and he wished he could drown in her love filled eyes. Her gaze was so powerful that he couldn't have controlled his senses if he didn't distract himself from her thoughts.
He got into teasing mode "oh hello madrasan! Puri zindagi padi hai...jee bhar ke dheklena mujhe...filhaal car chalane ka kasht karogi? Mujhe ghar aaj jaana hai...agle hafte nahi!"
His voice made her return to her senses. She couldn't stop blushing at his words while trying to give back to him "kuch bhi bakwas huh? Aap Sid(malhotra) nahi ho jo mai dekhu!"
He got jealous as she compared him with Siddharth. Rest of the way, he kept silent being self conscious of his looks. He touches his beard and thinks he needs a shave and a new haircut!
Ishita observes him silently without his knowledge as she continues to drive. For a change, she likes this angry jealous Raman kumar Bhalla, who is posessive about his wife and who is jealous if she speaks in favour of any other man.
She shakes her head and tells Raman in her thoughts - Raman, aap chahe jaise bhi ho...mujhe sabse zyada aap hi pasand ho.
She smiles to herself at that.
Raman notices it and wonders if she's thinking about her meet with Sid and smiling?
Nah! Ishita mere hi baare me soch rahi hogi. Wait...agar koi aur uske thoughts me hua toh?
That thought sent shivers down his spine.
Bhalla house was back to its normal routine.. Mrs.Bhalla was ordering neelu what to cook for lunch. Romi requested for an off and went to party with friends. Simmi was taking care of ananya in her room. Mr.Bhalla thought to take a nap. Ishita got ready for clinic and came to their room. She saw Raman relaxing on the bed supporting his back and head against the headrest of the bed and crossed outstretched legs.
He saw Ishita walking into the room. Ishita asked- "are you not going to office?"
Raman replies "nah! Aaj bahut din baad sukoon mila hai dil ko. Aaj bas ghar pe rehkar araam karunga."
Ishita could feel the calmness in his mind after struggling with himself and his thoughts since past few days.
He asks her "tum ja rahi ho?"
She nods in a yes.
He kindof feels dejected but doesn't let her know. He says "ok. Carry on".
She felt disappointed for a second thinking he didn't even ask her to not go. Then she hit her head and thought - kya ishu! Tumhe kyun rukna hai wo bhi ravan kumar ke saath time spend karne ke liye!
Ishita goes to clinic. Raman thinks- kaash ruk jaati ishita. Itne din baad to hum dono ke beech sab theek hua hai. (Pauses) Ek min! Theek kaha hua hai? Maine maafi to maangliya aur usne maaf bhi kardiya...lekin? Maine ishita ko kitna hurt kiya...kitni aansu bahayi ishita ne meri wajah se... sirf ek sorry se wo bhale maan gayi ho, par mujhe pata hai use kitna chot pahuncha hai. Ishita, I'll give you every happiness that you deserve.
Part-2 (will try to post soon) : Raman plans a one day picnic for ishita and himself.
P.S I'll send pms to all in my buddy list. If anyone feels not interested in my pms plz let me know.
Comments/likes/suggestions are welcome.
I have kept around 4 parts of this OS in my mind.
But to continue it or not will depend on the responses I get.
Hope I do not disappoint my readers.
Love to one and all.
And yes, happy holidaying in ishralicious land :')
Part -1 : page 1
Part -2 : page 6
Part-3 : page 8
Part-4 : page 13
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