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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4
Aap ko ho kya gya? mujhe rokne ke liye yeh sab kare ki kya jarurat thi. Aur me kya akka ki ghar ghumne ja rahi hu? Unko meri zarurat hai iss waqt.

Aur mere bare main nehi socha?

Main mummyji se baat ki thi. unhone kaha ki o sab samal lenge. isi liye to main jane ke bare mein socha.

Tumne mujhe nehi ppucha. ki mujhe kya chahiye? main nehi chahata tu ki tum yahaan se jao. mujhe problem hoga.

Kya bachpana hai? aap to pura din office mein rahte ho aur raat ko laute ho.

wo sab main nehi janta tum nehi jaogi bus.

main promise kar chuki hu. ab nehi jayungi to bura lagega.

lagne do. I dont care.

stop this childish behaviour. What am I going to tell everyone? why am i not going?

tumne ha kaha tha mujhe bina puche ab tum samalo. lekin tum nehi jaogi.

aap ne ye natak karke sabke samne itna embarrass karke rakha hai. ab main kuch nehi kar sakti. mujhe jana hi parega.waise aap to keh rahe the ki aapko santi milegi meri jane se to ab raho. main kuch nehi kar sakti. she tried to go away.

Raman hold her hand tightly and said no mean no. ab no arguments.

Aap samaj e ki kausish kijiye. mere rahne se aap ko kya? kahin aap ko mujhse pyar to nehi ho gaya?

jada dimag mat chalao. pyar aur tumse? main pagal lagta tu tumhe?

aap ka kuch nehi ho sakta. main ja rahi hu. at least 2-3 din ke liye to jana hi hoga. uske bad main akka ko convince karke yahaan le ayungi.

Raman could not say anything but felt sad.

Outside the room while Raman & Ishita talking inside

Bhai ne to aj had hi kar diya...Romi

Papa is so funny. unhe ishima ke bina neend i nehi ati. unhe bhi meri tarah story sune bina neend nehi ati. hai na paati.

Madhvi could not say anything.

Mihika: ha ruhi thik kaha tumne.

Mihir: bhai aur bhabi ghar me kya kar rahe?

Tojhiji: teri saadi ho jaye fir tujhe samaj me aa jayega.

Mihika and Mihir blushed and all laughed.

Mr Bhalla: Raman kabhi se bachpana karega oscha hi nehi.

Romi: Bhabi ki adat ho gayi unhe.

Toshji: fitte muh. Boro ke samne aise baat karte saram nehi ati tujhe.

Ro: kya mummiji khamka mujhe daant rahe ho.

Madhvi: main vandhu ko bolti hu ki wo yahan aa kar rahe. yahan ishu bhi paas mein hai. aur raman ko bhi problem nehi hoga.

Atthat time Ishita came back followed by raman.

Nehi main kal subha akka ki ghar jayungi.

Toshiji uski koi jaruraat nehi. nehi to raman ka naya natak suru ho jayega.

Par mummiji aap ne hi to kaha tha ki main ja sakti hu.

Toshji: tab raman ka yeh roop kahan pata tha.

Raman(st) ab huyi na meri mummy jaisi baatein.

I: main kal jayungi aur parsu akka aur shavu ko le kar chali ayungi. thik hai

T: yeh thik hai.

Everybody agreed except one. but he could not do anything. he has to agree. it was almost dinner time. Mr &Mrs Iyer and Mihika get up to leave.

Mr Iyer: Raman beta agli bar plan ki zarurat pare to mere pass ana. main help karunga. Main madhu ke maike jane ke waqt plan karta tha. lekin kabhi successful nehi huya.

Madhvi: Kya ho gaya aapko. chaliye yahan se.

Everbody laughed except Raman.

Next morning Ishita sent ruhi school and prepared everything for raman and told him to give her a lift. raman happily agreed.

I: Nasta to kijiye.

R: nehi bohot kaam hai. ab chalo.

Ishita got ready and went to the car and sat at the passenger seat. Raman took a turn and went to a mall.

I: yeh aap kahan ja rahen ho?

R: to have breakfast.

I: aapne kaha ki aap ko zaruri kaam hai.

R: ha magar bohot bhuk lagi.

I: to ghar pe hi kha lete.

R: tum itna bakbak karke thak nehi jati.

Ishita made an angry face and kept quiet. Raman parked the car outside the mall.He came out.

R: Aab utarne ke liye kya invitation dena parega?

I:Ha aa rahi hu.

They went to the food court. Raman went to Subway and ordered two sandwiches for both of them. He was the menu and asked her about her preferences. She did not reply.

R: ab mute ho gayi kya? kuch to bolo

I: aapko to mera bolna pasand nehi.

R: uff ab bas bhi karo.

As ishita did not say anything Raman ordered one roosted chicken sandwich and one paneer tikka sandwich and two salads one veg and one no veg.

I: phir se natak. aap to bol hi sakte the ki aap baha breakfast karenge. maine ghar pe aapke pasand ke eggbhuji banaya tha.

R: ok i m srry.

As the order served they ate and raman leaves him at vandhu's house. Ishita was very happy but vandu knew everything from Mihika she started teasing her.

Akka aap bhi na.

Raman to ekdam nautanki hai.

akka aisa mat bolo unke bare me. main bala jiju ke bare main aisa bolun to aap ko accha lagega kya?

bala: main aisa kabhi nehi karta ishu.

Jiju app bhi.

Kaccha aam kuch jada i pak gaya hai na ishu.

jiju aap ko bacchon ko school se lana hai. jaldi jaiye. Ishita tried to change the topic.

Ab topic change karne se kuch nehi hoga. kal raman ka acting kaisa laga.

Cute laga. jab karela ka soup diye tab to dekwali scene thi.

Vandu: to ab raman cute bhi ho gaya?

jiju akka ab bas karo.

bala went to school and ruhi Sravu came back.
After office raman went to bala's place. Ishita was shocked to see him. Others were not.

R: yehan pass me mera meetig tha to socha vandu aur bala se mil lu.

B:accha kiya aa gaye.

S: chittiappa acting maat karo. chitti se mmilne aye ho. hume sab pata hai.

R:(st) isko to main nehi beta main tera ghar pe nehi aa sakta.

Vandhu and bala offered him to stay but isita refused. But raman said agreed.

At bedroom

Aapko thora sa bhi saram nehi ati. yahan aa gaye

Kyun bala ke ghar nehi aa sakta? relative hai wow mere

Aap se to behes karna hi bekar hai.

main ruhi ko miss kar raha tha.

Papa jhut mat bolo. jhut bolna buri bar hoti hai

R(st) Yeh bhi JKR ban gayi. aap yahan kya kar rahe ho beta. aap shavu ke sath aapna homework karo.

Ok papa.

Raman went near ishita and hold her hand

Sach batao mere ane se tume accha nehi laga.

ishita's cheek became red.

To JKR sharma bhi sakti hai? yeh to dekhne wali chese hai.

He hold ishita and pinned her at wall.

Raman choriye mujhe.

Nehi chorunga.

her heartbeat became high. Raman was intensely looking at her.

Raman couldnot controlled himself. he cupped her face and gently placed a kiss on her lips. Ishita hugged him tight.

I want time to stop here forever.

NO want to to move forward. Itne me nehi hoga mujhe,

Aap itna besharam ho.

Wo to main hu hi. JKR. He again kissed her but this time it was more passionate from both sides.

I love u Ishita . dont leave me ever. I cant live without u.

I love u too Raman.


Edited by titlee90 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
End of this OS. Hope u uys enjoyed it.
Plz leave ur valuable comments.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
owsom...
raman is really very cute.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
nice OS dear!
loves raman;s majnu act 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
lovelyy updatee!! beautiful ending too!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
it was awesome.Change from ravan kumar to possessive kumar was cho chweet.He even reached to bala's house 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks to all for ur comments.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hahaha raman too cute !!
lvoed the way everyone was teasing !!!
haha loved the besharam raman !! :D :D :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Wow! Sweet story...
The end was awesome...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
hwww
its too hillarious dear
i was laughing like mad
love this possessive
side of ravan kumar
hahaha
thanx for pm
keep writing
take care

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