Rust and Stardust - IshRa OS. - Page 3

Awesomely written...brilliant scene...kaash we see such a scene onscreen...😆😉

Such a brilliant piece of literature!!! Honestly it's because the OSs i am still watching YHM. Otherwise I have already lost interest coz of the current lousy track. Hope they'll show us something like this. You are fantastic.

That was awesome!!!

Oh Lord! it was beautiful! The best redemption seen ever in case of raman's sputidy. But seriously this piece of yours is my fav and I think I'll reread it because its a treasure. And you had me at the tear kissing part and the dialogues in the end were just perfect. As they say nothing is more sexy than a real conversation.

This was beautiful...and I loved how you incorporated their nom-jhoks at the end.

Woaah ... What did I read just now ... this is amazing stuff ... you write scenes which are so realistic and believable. You make them sound so realistic that it feels as if we are watching it rather than reading it ... simply wow ...

The best part with your work is that you have always aligned the characters and their respective behavior with the present situation. At the moment, something like this is totally expected from Raman who is day by day getting desperate to talk to Ishita. He can resume to doing something like that ... and like you have mentioned, he is a complex character who rarely brings forward his emotional side unless and until pushed ... and this track seems to be doing just that ...

The way u have described the pain both of them are going through is too good... we all know that lack of communication can have serious implications ... so a confrontation like this is definitely required ...

If I am somehow able to find Aladin's Gin, my first wish will be to replace you with the present CVs 😳 😳 .

As always, thanks for the PM. It is always a delight to read your work.

Cheers

Bhanu.

awesome one-shot..👍🏼

I'm spellbound Aani. Due to time crunch, I hardly comment on posts these days. I just read the posts on my way to work and just hit the like button at max. Trust me this this one has compelled me to comment. Although the track is going a little low these days, I'm one of those who is still unfazed by the events so far. The silence between the two is building up a longing within me, just as it is creating an emotional and sexual (though latent) tension between Raman and Ishita. I thoroughly enjoyed reading the OS and the way you have put across their anxieties, thoughts, misunderstandings is amazing. It also gives me hope that these two will come around pretty soon.

this was one of the most beautiful OS i've ever read!!!!