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Autumnn

@Autumnn

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

You always give wonderful conversations between Ishra. This scene has not happen yet in the show. And now I want all this conversation to happen in the show between Ishra. But know it wont be happening.

I love your writing. I am kind of actually addicted to your stories. Thanks for the pm.

Edited by Autumn. - 11 years ago

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_Seera_

@_Seera_

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Just fabulous! I loved every thing about it... I wish this is shown in the show!😕

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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

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This must be the fastest i've unreserved, but time is on my side today thank god!

Aani oh gosh, i don't know what to say- literally. i must find another word instead of beautiful but seriously this was just heartbreakingly beautiful😳

This is the conversation that needs to be had between these two. There needs to be some acknowledgment as to why each other's actions/words matter so much to them both.

i liked how in the end he had no choice but to resort to physically stopping her, because that is one aspect in which she can't overpower him. Then the breakdown, the letting down of his guard. You conveyed in such a convincing and aesthetic manner. Her hopelessness in front of him, was just so endearing too.

Aani as always your work is such a pleasure to read hun🤗🤗

Edited by happenstance - 11 years ago

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Mohini Singh Narayan

@MSN_Vanny

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

*Reserved*

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*Phew* I'm on an editing roll!

After this, I just have to edit After The Storm. Unless, of course,you or Lucky post something else. 😆

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Wow! ☺️ ☺️

This was just wow! ☺️ ☺️

I wish Raman had done this in the show!!!! Eeeps!!! ☺️

Okayy. *Out of fangirling mode*

Honestly, IshRa need to have a very serious heart-to-heart. Talking isnecessary sometimes. I loved the way he tackled her and didn't allow her to leave and made her listen. Sometimes, even listening is a problem and Raman knows that better than Ishita. Poor guy!

And then his plea for her to not leave him. Awww! But I'm happy that you made Ishita's resolve strong! He chose his actions and now he must face the consequences. Idiot! 😡

Too good Aani! 👏

Edited by MSN_Vanny - 11 years ago

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deepa

@_Dipsi_

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Omg

Thats awesome

Absouletly loved it...

Wish something as intense as this os is shiwn on the show as well

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Nisha

@Nichuss

Elite

+ 33

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

wow,... i loved ths heart to heart talk...

kaash ths hapns in yhm...nt the bedrroom scene 😛(its not

happening i knw) but ishra need a talk...heart to heart talk...

ishu needs to knw her trust nt broken,,,,,,

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Isma

@Isma_A

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Res.

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Aani, I loved this piece!! So so so beautiful! Raman forcing Ishita to talk and listen and getting it all out, and ending the piece with two steps forward but still that one step back-- perfect way to describe them right now and how the story should move on the show. The dialogues were perfect, and just the kind of dialogues we need to see and hear from Raman!! I can't take these two in pain anymore. 😭

Beautiful, Aani!! Loved it!!

Edited by Isma_A - 11 years ago

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

omggg Aani...THIS...THIS...is the BEST OS i hv read on IshRa on current track...n trust me THIS IS SHOW waale IshRa too... pehle i also thought there should be more days of silent treatment frm ishita,desp raman...!! But when i thought later...y should Ishu stay away?Also hvnt Raman been SUFFERING for makin wrong choice since day one?how much more can u kill a person whos already dying DAILY?? Her MAIN PROB ws she thinkin Raman hvin affair with Shagun..But when she will come to knw truth,her major prob is gone with the wind...the ONLY prob tht remain is Raman din show guts to tell truth..!! And tht can be sorted if they hv a heart to heart talk...Am sayin so is coz when Raman told her half truth post hotel incident,thought she din listen to him tht day-next day on a saner state she WAS ready to giv him chance as she ws sure whtver he ws doin ws for adi n NOT for shagun..!! n thtsy evn aftr her initial breakdown on picnic,she could send RuMan to picnic as again she understood Raman...!! And on these lines,i can say ur OS COMPLETELY FITS current IshRa equation..!! I knw u dnt lik current track..Yet u came up with this as if its a frm ppl lik me who had alwz loved this track 😊

Kudos to u aani..this hv bcome my MOST FAV OS written by U...!!

Edited by Nikki_Titli - 11 years ago

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dreamy-sa

@dreamy-sa

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

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oh my god! what did I just read now...fantastic👏 no words to express...

I could feel their emotions too. one of the best os I have read😳

and thanks for the pm

Edited by dreamy-sa - 11 years ago

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

I too wished that this scene had happened later on where there is some sort of communication between IshRa but right now, in a way, this scene seems pointless to me. Unless it leads to a conversation like in your OS but I doubt that's going to happen.

I like how you wrote it in a super realistic way where in Raman tries to tell Ishita what he's going through but without breaking the promise he has made to Adi. Cause we all know Raman wouldn't do that. And loved the moment when Ishita just hugged Raman when she realised he was breaking down.

This really was a meaningful OS. If only, such a scene would happen in the serial.

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