An Ishra SS: Sirf Tumhare Liye - Final Part page 13 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: btalwar


Paru_rox:
Wohoo ... am floored ... am so happy to know that you remember me due to my previous post ... it makes my writing effort worthwhile ... 😳😳 ... I could not agree more with you ... I have always been an avid reader but a reluctant writer ... but something about this accident track and Ishita's sudden behavior change from that episode tested my patience that day ... thus the outcome ... but frankly am glad I wrote it because it gave me confidence to write this SS ... I had been toying with this for a while now but was too scared to pen down my thoughts ...

I sincerely hope am able to do justice to this beautiful character's unexplored.

Hehehe 😆😆. Avoiding the accident track. Be my guest. We can both play ostrich ;-).



Lol ... right now its Raman playing ostrich in the show. Only difference instead of sand, his neck is buried in Adi's curly hair 😆 .


Will be commenting separately on Part 3.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Ishita's pain & grief has never been expressed openly even in the show. Am fed up with Raman's ex-wife, his kids, his business nemesis, his issues *ugghh*. Honestly wish they could show something about Ishu's past in the show too.

Coming to the update -- Fantastic update ⭐️ ... RKB was being himself when he stated what a douche-bag Subbu is without any qualms. I could actually imagine him saying all that out. Subbu so deserved that.

This below was the best part of this update *sigh*. Can't wait for you to update the next part. Do hope its soon.



Sometimes, actions speaker louder than words. He did not need to console her with some heavy duty words, nor did he need to invade her personal space by forcing her to open up. He just needed to be there. He had to be there for her.

So with new found determination, Raman went ahead and sat beside her wife just being there for her and patiently waited ...



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Posted: 11 years ago
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WoW! This was just great. I was blown away. This exactly how I want Raman to protect and help I shita when the time comes.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Friends
I got to know from a fellow friend on IF that if I want to send multiple PM's the easiest way is to have them added in buddy list.
Therefore, it is my humble request to all of you to please add me in your buddy list ... 😊😊.
Thanks in advance.
Cheers
Bhanu.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such a beautiful update! Please continue and send me a pm when updated if possible!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Definitely would love to be updated when you post the new parts.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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updated on page 8 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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read three parts at one go...I am at loss of words of how I missed ur ss...awesome writing.
and pls pm me if possible.
once again an excellent ss😳👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Beautifully written I read the 3 parts n I liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The following 43 member(s) liked the above post:

nikkip123, luv2wtch, preet_21, nauka87, rashmiarora, pallak1996, shana1234, JazzyM, RheaSh, malaxmi, sham24, sony1990, IPKKND_Pyaar, smilydear, qwerty012, oaz30, indiansrock7, alu5123, kavithaa12, hilly, PriyaKabhi, Dhwaniiam, felciya, yhmfever, whitelily, dreamy-sa, _Deepika_, JniISHRA83, tanya_vi, avni_19, mygaby, swati_bhatia, yyy, paru_rox, chathu, asmi279, Javeria3991, MSN_Vanny, luvbalh, daisydee425, sweetshab, EkPaheli, Nikki_Titli,

AnGel_Mind- : Thanks a lot dear. I hope you like the next part as well.

Javeria3991: Yeah, I can twist Raman's character. Somehow, I feel that given the situation, Raman will act like this. Whether he accepts it or not, he is well beyond "Ruhi ke liye phase. I guess Mihir's character like Ishita has also not been explored. I have a feeling there is much more to Mihir's loyalty than it looks. Hopefully, they will also explore this at one point of time in YHM."

whitelily: Thanks Whitelily. Lily is actually a beautiful flower, one of my favourites.

avni_19 : Thank you. I hope that now the accident track is towards is culmination, we will get to see some much needed Ishra bonding.

sweetshab: Thanks a lot. I know couple of CEOs personally and the believe me they have a way with words. So, although Raman is a Punjabi munda with garam khoon, but at the same time, he is sensible man who will take control of the situation and show everyone his place.

daisydee425: Thank you so much.

_Dipsi_: Glad you liked it. Please review the next part also.

Yyy: Lets hope the CV's move on to other topics soon and one of them is this. Fingers crossed. Thanks for your review.

Smilydear: Thank you dear. I am blessed to have couple of friends like that in my life who are my 3 am friends. And the best part with them is exactly this. They are just there. Not necessarily physically, but emotionally always available.

About Raman, he has proved this point many a times in YHM till now that he completely trusts her daughter with Ishita and agrees wholeheartedly that she is Ruhi's mother. Therefore, any sensible man will react the way he did given the situation.

Nikki_Titli: Thank you dear. Please read the next part too. Hope you like it.

RheaSh: Thanks a lot.

kavithaa12: You are welcome dear and thank you for reviewing.

Dhwaniiam: Thank you dear. As requested, here comes the next update.

JazzyM: 😆😆. Haha. I know. In hindsight, I must thank him. It's the worst in him which made me write this J. Anyway, glad you liked it. Please read and review the next part also.

EkPaheli: Aani, I am so glad that you could find time to review my work 😳😳. I have read all your OS and each one surpasses the previous ones.

I agree that Subbu is needed to explore Ishita's character. The incidences and the respective circumstances in our life define us and Subbu had a huge presence in Ishita's past. Like you said, he is the other half of Ishita's story. And while, Raman's past has been acceptably explored in this show, Subbu screen time was probably not more than one episode or may be even less.

I was playing with this idea for a while now, but the miserable accident track acted as a catalyst for me to actually put the thoughts into writing.

I hope I am able to do some justice to what Ishita has gone through. Sometimes, people deal with emotional pain through denial. It does not mean its not there, they just learn it to keep it at bay. So I wanted to depict something on that terms for Ishita. Hopefully, I am able to do some justice to what I want to say. This part does not completely deal with what I want to say but I felt it was best for me break it into two parts and provide some much needed time and space to Ishita's past also.

Hmm, Subbu. I think a separate post can be written on Subbu and Ishita. May be I will consider it once I am through with this one. It is true that Subbu is the other side of the coin. And it intrigues me that since childhood BOTH of them were close. So, did Subbu feel nothing when he just dumped her? Ok, females are more emotional, but men are no less. He was going to marry this woman and marriage is a big step for anyone irrespective of gender. And she was his childhood sweetheart. And he did not feel anything.

While Shagun is shown to be pure evil, gold digger, my interpretation of Subbu's character is more of a coward than evil. He was never evil. He was just not brave enough to accept and deal with a difficult situation. Typical bad husband material 😛.

However, I will stick to exploring Ishita's side in this fic and may be consider something about it later on 😳.

😆, you made me dream about Raman acting the jealous types. Reminds me of Sid and Ishu interaction during Ek Villain promotion. Poor man, was so obviously jealous when she gave attention to Sid and asked for that photo. What will happen when her past comes knocking on their doors. It will be an interesting watch for sure.

Thank you so much for your wonderful review. It makes my day to know that my work is appreciated by one of the best writers of this forum.

This one cracked me up 🤣🤣. Honestly, I did not remember Subbu's face also and I immediately googled to check him out 😉😉. This is so funny. I guess I should start an AT for him now that I know his name ... LOL .. I guess it will the only AT in this forum with only one member in it ... ME ... 🤣🤣.

paru_rox: Parul, lets hope that in the next week, the ostrich gets some senses in his brain and he finally gives the much needed attention to Ishita 😳😳 than his biggest majboori, Adi 😕😕.

As I mentioned earlier, I will expect RKB to behave exactly like that. After all, he is a Punjabi munda with garam khoon and no one messes up with a Punjabi munde ki wife ... LOL 😆😆. About Ishita's past, the reluctance of CV's to explore her past made me pen down my thoughts. I really hope that I am able to some justice to what she has gone through.

I really liked this part personally. I have experienced something like this personally at one point of time and I know very well that sometimes mere presence of loved ones makes a lot of difference. I am glad you liked this part too as it is something close to my heart too 😳😳.

shana1234: Thank you dear. Glad you liked it. Please read and review the next part. I hope you will like it too.

-Haju-: Thank you Haju.

KReyAS: Thanks a lot.

AditiDoc: Thanks Doc. Please read and review.

gems4sana: Hope you got my PM. Please read and review.

dreamy-sa: Thanks a lot dear. Glad you liked all of them. Please read and review the next part too.

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Felciya: Thanks a lot dear.

Ruhanikadhawan: Thank you.

Edited by btalwar - 11 years ago

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