Ishra- Aftermath Raman's Realisation SS Upd part 31, 32 11:30 26/7

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Snigdha Gautam

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Dhwaniiam
Loved it ..
Raman ne pain ko couch .. Wet
Ha funny
Good thinking ...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Too good yaar... Continue soon...

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Snigdha Gautam

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Raman's Realisation SS
Part 9

Ishima, Bulasakta hu?

Continued at the Court, after Shagun left

Ashok came forward as Shagun left. "I'm sorry Ishita. I have been wrong all this while. Mujhe aaj pehle baar pata chala ek maa kya hoti hai! I'm sorry that meine aaj tak Adi ko Raman se door rakha apni reivalry ke wajaha se. I'm happy aaj itne time baad meine kuch aja kaam kiya! Shayad Shagun ki sangati ka asar tha ki mein itna bura ban gaya! Sachi mein tha nahi!" Ashok was really guilty. Then he turned to Raman, "Kaash Raman mein tumse Shagun ko nahi chenta toh aaj mein aisa nahi hota... But waise you owe me a thanks agar mein nahi hota toh Ishita kabhi tumhari zindigi mein nahi aati! But yes don't you think kit um jeet gaye Mr. Bhalla professional rivalry is continued. Bus wo aaj kissi ne mujhe sikha diya ki personal aur professional rivalry alag hai!" Ashok bent down in front of Adi, ". I'm sorry Aditya, beta." With that he stood up to leave. Ishita was first to come out of the shock, "Ashok, Thank you." He looked at her puzzled so did others. Looking at the reaction she clarified, "Thank you Adi ko sab sach batane ke liye! Aur judge ke samne wo sab bolne ke liye."

Ashok smiled. Yes, he did a genuine smile which he forgot. "Raman, manna padega tumhari biwi hai bahut intelligent! You are welcome, Mrs. Bhalla par ye sab meine apne liye kiya!"
With that he left.
"I'm sorry papa!" Adi broke the ice.
Finally Raman reacted. He did. He cried. He cried for his child and hugged him.
"Thank you, beta. Thank you. Thank you." He kept murmuring till his voice faded. While everybody who stood there were lost in the father son love.

Toshiji couldn't hold her emotions any longer, "Haye mera baccha!" she came forward and hugged Adi as soon as Raman moved back. Even Romi and Mihir came forward and hugged Adi and ruffled his hair. Even Mihika introduced herself as Mihir's fianc, his chichi cum maasi! While he smiled, he was happy to get all the love he craved all these years!
But all this while he didn't leave that one hand he had held to begin his new life, Ishita.
"I'm sorry! I know meine apko bahut hurt kiya hai!" Adi called out to his mother, Ishita.
"Nahi, Nahi beta!"
Adi cried, "Aap aaj jab ghar aaye the tab meine apki aur Shagun ki saari baat sun li thi! Uske baad mein apne room mein bahut roya tab Ashok uncle ne mujhe sab kuch bataya! Mujhe bahut bura laga! I'm sorry papa! Meri wajah se aap dono bahut hurt hue na! Wo jaisa mujhe bolti gayi mein karta jar aha tha. Mujhe lagta tha aap galat ho aur wo sahi isley meine unka saath diya aur unknowingly aap dono mein problems create kar di!"

Ishita kneeled down and cried with her son, "It's ohk baccha! We are not upset with you at all! We love you, my baccha!"

"Haan, papa loves you too beta!" Raman also kneeled down with Ishita.

"I know! Aur aap sahi thi!" Ishita looked questioningly at Adi. When he clarified, "Wo apne kaha tha naa ki aap mujhe pyaar karne wala, pado ki respect karne wala Aditya Raman Kumar Bhalla banoogi. Ek esa beta jo aaj tak maa ka matlab galat samajhta aaya, use aap maa ka matlab Ishita Bhalla hota hai, ye samjhaungi! Aap sahi the! Mein chahata hu ki aap mujhe apna beta banao! Mein bhi apko Rushi ki tarah Ishima Bulasakta hu?"

Ishita next did what she had been waiting for and Adi had been craving for she hugged him. She let him burry his head in her arms. The duo cried, but this time the tears tickled down the checks of everyone present.

Thank you Ishita, tumne mujhe bina mange wo sab de diya jo mujhe chahiye tha. Apna, Ruhi and Adi ka pyaar! Ishita kaash ek din aise aaye ki mein bhi tumhare bina mange tumhe kuch de paaon!!

Rab da lakh lakh shukkar hai unhone tujhe mere bahu banaya! Tune mera parivaar jod diya! Sachi kehte hu nkest (next) tame (time) jab wo bala ki Nautanki maa ayege tab mein uska khud swagat karongi.

I'm happy for you Bhai! Meri behen ne jo begada tha, meri patni, mera matlab hai hone wali biwi ki behen ne thik kar diya!

Changa ji changa bhabhi to kamal nikli! Humne itne plan banaye lakin kissi se kuch nahi hua! Bhai ne confess kiya toh wo bhi apke innocent idea ke karan, Adi ko lane ka selfless Idea!

Akka, I hope Ab apki khushiya kahi na jaye!

Precap: Everyone back to home. Raman and Adi angry-standing in front of Ishita-glaring at someone for ??? Read to find out! (StarPlus ishtyle Precap!)

NEXT PART

on page 30 😲 if I make it!😉

Kidding I'll post ASAP I write it!😆 If anyone wants any special scene please post that soon before I write the part!

Edited by SnigdhaGautam - 11 years ago

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Sunita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

wohooo!!! awesummm updatee!! got glued to the story.. lol.. keepp continuinggg and plsss PM me... thankuu in advance!

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Snigdha Gautam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_
Fabulous writing
Awesome

Thank you sooo much!!!! I'm glad you liked it and commented!😊

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Snigdha Gautam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: anjalisawle
I hope this how it turns out ..the end result ..if not full custody but visitation rights for raman and bhalla family.then only we can see some positive change in aditya...u write very well..could picturize..KP and DT...

hahaha I guess i knew what you wanted so read the next part! there is a surprise waiting for you! :D😃