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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lourel24

superb 👏 .You did what I wanted each characters to go through.It was simply awesome.Shagun deserved it n I m stunned with ashok.I think its ashok who informed adi about who left whom.I liked this dailogue a lot"Abbe oye khotte da puttar tenu yahi jgaha mili thi? Kher Jhado, Mubaraka!" Toshiji for the first time in her life whispered.I was laughing.Yes our toshiji can speak slowly.Don't underestimate her 😉 n raman usse court hi mila confess karne k liye.fite muh.
Now getting to part 8.it was also nice.This gesture of adi I loved it a loy"But all this while he didn't leave that one hand he had held to begin his new life, Ishita."awww!Next dailogue which was bang on was "ma la matlab ishita bhalla samjhaungi".dhamekedaar tha.I was doing bale bale.I think in precap it must be shagun who again had come to accuse ishita.This time I want all three parts of ishit a i.e.raman,adi n ruhi to defend her possessively n threaten shagun in dabang style to stay away.that's all.


Hahaha...
first of all thank you so much for reading the story sooo patiently and nicely!!!
i loved that fact that you commented on everything that you liked. thank you so much it really means a lot!!!
I hope that you like next updates too...

and yes i won't disappoint you pakka... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Angel13

Hey dear
Just read all part so far
Wonderful updates
Love it
So finally adi custody goes to Ishu
Hummm surprised seeing Ashok changed
Glad adi realizing his mistakes and accepting them
awww adi also calling Ishu as ishima
It was very cute confession in the court
I actuay laughed how he confessed in the court I mean who does that...but of course our IshRa are unique so confession also has to be unique
Ohhh precap seems raman and adi shooting draggers at Arman?
will be funny if both raman and adi not liking Armaan and how they both have fun to trick him
continue soon
Thank you very much for pm
Yup I do like to write and read on IshRa
I would have written some more stories but I hardly get time to sit and type stories
But I surely can read them so please continue pming me


Hahaha...
I know Ishra ke liye kuch hat kar karna tha!
first of all thank you so much for reading the story sooo patiently and nicely!!!
i loved that fact that you commented on everything that you liked. thank you so much it really means a lot!!!
I hope that you like next updates too...

Sure i'll pm you!!! thank you so much for reading!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rnarayan

your OS very nice, love to read it.


Thank you sooo much!!😊😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JniISHRA83

Awesome...all parts are really too good...you are an amazing writer...


Thank you soo much for the appreciation!
It is the reader who makes the writer!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 7350879

Loved all the parts...
Waiting to read more...
Continue soon.. nd thanks for pm


Sure will be posting soon!!!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: avni_19

keepp continuinggg!!! :D :D



Ya sure! thank you so much for the comment!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Angel13

Hey dear
Just read all part so far
Wonderful updates
Love it
So finally adi custody goes to Ishu
Hummm surprised seeing Ashok changed
Glad adi realizing his mistakes and accepting them
awww adi also calling Ishu as ishima
It was very cute confession in the court
I actuay laughed how he confessed in the court I mean who does that...but of course our IshRa are unique so confession also has to be unique
Ohhh precap seems raman and adi shooting draggers at Arman?
will be funny if both raman and adi not liking Armaan and how they both have fun to trick him
continue soon
Thank you very much for pm
Yup I do like to write and read on IshRa
I would have written some more stories but I hardly get time to sit and type stories
But I surely can read them so please continue pming me


Omg! about the precap... you are...😉
actually i won't tell u read to find out!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm just super happy!
We crossed 30! sorry I knw I had promised to post on page 30! but i'm over whelmed thank you guys! thanks sooo much! So here is the update!
The update is short, I know. It is because like yesterday you are gonna get many updates by the end of the day! I'm gonna pm everybody together! Sorry for any inconvenience, if caused!

Raman's Realisation OS/SS
Part 10

Happy Ice cream party!

All left the court.

Mihir and Mihika were in one car.
"Chalo acha hua sab sahi hogaya! Haina, Mihika!" Mihir expected no reply as he was still trying to make up for the recent mistake he did, that he didn't even remember!
Surprisingly he got one, "Haan, Mihir sabka mood aaj kitna acha hai na chalo ice cream le chalte hai!"
Mihir smiled and without a delay nodded fevourently!

While Romi like an obedient deevar was driving back his Bhabhi's car.
Ye bhabhi bhi na mein unko aur Bhai ko privacy dena chahata tha lakin meri mahan bhabhi bhi naa Adi aur Mummy ke chehro par pighal gayi! Bechara Bhai!

Raman Ishita Adi and Toshiji were in Raman's car.

Patanai ye JKR ka demag kab chalta hai! Jaise dekho court mein chala aur turant uss lambo, mera matlab hai Ashok ko thank you bol diya! Lakin ab jab Romi ne kaha ki Adi aur Maa ko wo lejata hail akin nahi! Tab nahi Chala! Aura b dekho! Dono kaise chipke hai meri biwi se! Maaine kabhi nahi socha ek din aisa bhi hoga jab Adi mere saath hoga aur mein use bhagane ki baat kar raha hunga! Kyuki shayad ab mujhe pata hai ki Adi mujhe jhod kar ab kahi bhi nahi jayega!

He turned left and looked at Ishita, actually glare at her when he heard his mother. "Arre puttar aage dekh Ishita ko ghar par dekh lio!"
With that all giggled leaving a more fuming Raman behind!
Ye team Ishita toh jaise bhadti he jaa rahe hai! Maa toh pehle se he uski team mein this aaj do naye log ghus gaye! Wo lambu, uff Ashok aur Adi! Haad hai matlab ab toh apni biwi ko pyar se kya gusse se bhi nahi ghoor saakta. Raman Bhalla har nahi manta!

"Nahi ma mein to ye bolna chahta tha ki mere paer mein kal se dard hai to agar Ishita gaddi chala leti!"

Jeet v/s car! Chalo car ki kurbani he theek hai kyuki jeet mein Ishita ki Jhalak hai! And he felt a winner when the concern replaced the teasing look on Ishita's face. Ab aaya Jhasi ki Rani ka ghoda pahad ke niche! Waise ghoda toh pehle he Bechara hai! Moti ka jo ghoda hai!

"Raman car side mein lagao mein chalaleti hu!" Ishita chipped.

"Are you sure na Ishima? Apko koi problem toh nahi hai! Nahi toh ghar pass he toh hai papa thode aur der chala lenge!" Adi added.

Wah! Nirdayi team Ishita ke bacche yaha meine kaha mere pair mein dard hai aur ye Ishima se puch raha hai! Ishima ka chamcha! Isne toh paach saal mein u turn mara hai!
He stepped out of the car and Ishita too stepped out.
"Mujhe toh ab yakin hota jaa aha hai ki tumhe kaala jadoo ata hai pehle Ruhi, phir mere ghar wale aur phir mein, ab Adi bhi tuhare pyaar mein pad gaye!"
Ishita smiled, "Oh! To aap mante hai ki aap bhi mere pyaar mein pad gaye!"
Raman blushed and ran to his seat and Ishita went to the driver seat laughing her heart out, after all it wasn't daily that you see Raman blushing!

Ye JKR bahut teez hogayi hai aaj kal! With that he started talking to Adi, "Toh kya khayega mera beta Adi?"

"Mujhe abhi to ghar jake dadu se milna hai aur Ruhi ke saath khelna hai!"

While the son and father continued their talks Ishita was happy. Kitne hush lag rahe hai Raman. Mein bhi bahut khush hu unke liye.

Soon they reached home.
Raman's thoughts: kaash ye ride thodi lambi hoti... iss JKR ko jee bhar ke toda aur dekh leta! Iss Jadoo ki Rani ne sachem kuch kar diya ghar aakar yeh soach raha hu ki kaash bahar rehta!

Ishita's thoughts: Chalo acha hua hum gha aagaye! Ruhi wait kar rahi hogi

Adi's Thoughts : Hmmm finally I'm back to home with my dad and my mom... mera matlab hai Ishima!

Toshiji's thoughts: nAaj ghar ki ronak ko char chand laga diye mere bete aur beti ne!

All four entered the house with a smile in the thoughts of their own.

Their reverie was broken by Ruhi who came running to her Ishima, "Ishima aap aagayw aur Adi bhaiya ko bhi le aaye. Dadu sahi keh rahe the!"

Ruhi hugged Adi, "Hum saath mein bahut masti karenge bhaiya."

Adi also hugged her back and smiled, "Zaroor Ruhi."

Every family member was happy.

Adi took blessings from all the elders, Amma, Appa and Mr. Bhalla.

Just then Romi entered merrily humming to a tune. As soon as he saw his brother he gave him a sympathetic smile. Ishita noticed this and started laughing, Romi also joined her.

All gave them a weird look except Raman as he was throwing daggers at Romi and Ishita.

Toshiji had just asked about the funny thing when Mihir and Mihika entered screaming, "Surprise! Aap sabke liye choti se Ice cream party."

Raman thanked Mihir mentally. Acha hai aaj pata chala kon saga Bhai hai! Ab tu dekh Romi ke bache!

Ishita who was standing close to Raman whispered, "Romi ke bacche abhi huye nahi..." she bit back the laughter that was forming in the pit of her throat!
"Bas hogaya haan. Zayada hasi kahogi toh aur moti ho jaogi!" Raman retorted back in a whisper, surprised that she read his thoughts!

"Cholo papa..." Ruhi started pulling Raman to the sofa. "Chalo Ishima... Papa apke toh par mein dard ho raha than a toh phir khade kyu ho?" Aditya asked curiously.

Aree yaar ye Adi bhi na pitvayega. Raman searched for an answer.

Ishita just smiled at Raman's plight, "Beta wo papa dawai kha chukke the thik hogaya hoga!"

Adi nodded. Then looking at ice cream screamed with joy, "Aree Black current ye toh meri favourite hai! Thanks Mihika chichi!"

"Abbe oye mein laya tha bhabhi ke liye!" Mihir says offended and everybody laughed.
"Apjka bhi ye favourite hai? Mera bhi!" Adi smiled as Ishita sat beside him on the dining table.
"Aur mera bhi!" Armaan entered the house. He had his briefcase in one hand and newspapers in other.

"Aree puttar tu aagaya! Aa beth tu bhi khaale. Thank gaya hoga!" Mr. Bhalla signalled him to seat right in between him and Ishita.

Raman moved in this seat. He regretted sitting on the sofa and leaving a seat empty with Ishita. Isse kaise bhool gaya ye bhi th wahi gusse ga jaha Ishita ho! Ab dekho bateese dekha raha hai! Raman thought to himself as Armaan smiled at everyone and sat on the chair. He extended his hand forward, "Hi Adi!"

"Meine apko pehchana nahi!" Adi tried to recall.
"Of course mein, Armaan. Armaan Malik Ishu ka dost!" He introduced himself and gave a friendly side hug to Ishita.

Two people cringed at that site. While Ruhi left Raman's hand and went to Armaan, "Aap laye na Ishima ke liye gift?"

"Yes, princess!" Armaan lifted Ruhi on his laps and searched his bag. He took out a wrapped gift.

"Ye! Ishima ye lo apke liye!" Ruhi gave the gift to her Ishima and she kissed her in return. "Thanks mera baccha."

Isse dekho mujhe yaha betha ke kood ke uss Armaan ke paas chaligayi! He grinded his teeth.

"Chalo na Ishima khate hai Ice cream melt ho rahi hai!" Adi popped in. With that Adi, Ishita and Armaan shared the Ice cream.
Inhe yahi flavour kyu pasand hai? Jo mujhe aur Ishima ko pasand hai! Mujhe ye uncle nahi pasand! Though Adi didn't like that still he chatted happily with the family.

It was after so long that the family happily chatted and laughed.

PRECAP IS THE SAME😆 Sorry to keep you hanging but I wanted to create the base first. I'm sure u'll have an idea of who that person is after this part 😉

NEXT PART 😊

Edited by SnigdhaGautam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey! i just read all of these parts in one go. I must say this ss is fast paced and gripping and it has all th elements of a great story. Please pm me if possible. I am not atcive member on thsi forum. I come here to read stories and to read written updates and watch videos only when there are good or truth revelation epsiodes. thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg
Lovely lovely update
Cant wait for the next

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