OS: Based on yesterday's precap... (28/06/2014) Final note.Pg 23 - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 6
lol
that ravan kumar dia was best
mihir is hilarious
yr why cant u be in the writer team of yhm
m bowled with ur skills
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all in one go...fantastically written. Ishita's character portrayal and Raman's restlessness were very well depicted in the story...loved it from start to finish. ⭐️ 👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 7
so chudail got jawab
n all's well at end
enjoyed a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
What an amazing finish to the story. Very cute ending. When Raman was hugging Ishitha and crying a, i too felt like giving a hug to him .😭.

Very well written yaar. 👏👏👏This is the first time I have read an OS in one go and was impatiently refreshing the pages to read all the parts at one go.I so liked it very much. I sincerely hope we wish to get some of your scenes in the future tracks.

Will make it a point to read all your OS in future. Good one and well written again.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Kri!!
The OS was AMAZING! Loved it!

I am in office and its Monday and a busy day! But after Ishra dance yesterday could not resist myself coming to forum to check out for any updates/vids\

By chance happend to come to this post and aftre reading the 1st update..got so hooked. so that left all my work and read all the updates in one go!!! It was brilliant and very beautifully written, thought about . It was so much IshRa in it. Could easily relate with it.

I loved Ishu's accident plot (sorry Ishu, would never want you to go thru it) but I always wanted Raman to get into that fear of losing Ishu(if something happens to her) and then look after her like a proper husband. So, thatnks so much for thinking about this plot.

Please continue writing more and let us know...I so so so hope some of the scenes are atleast incorporated into the show and we get to see them!!!

You are amazing writer and if you did this in so much less time, I can just imagine what brilliant OS we will see if you ahve enough time with you!

You made my monday and I am actually imagining this OS turn into Onscreen scenes
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Posted: 11 years ago
I have a question...Why don't you ask Ekta to be a writer of YHm😉,Becoz...you are awesome..good language..and correct understanding of emotions...and all the characters..Grt going..I read it in one go .. I have to keep a straight face at office while reading becoz i really had tears...and have to lie abt some dust...Pls do write more...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

loved ur SS,Kri..it ws perfect..!!


Thanks a lot Nikki...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shalz_123


You are most welcome.
do remember to pm/ping me when you write a new one..


Ya...sure...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: komsy7856

Awesome kri 😊 loved all the parts, thanks for the pm.. Kaash show me aisa kuch dikhaye.. Raman the next Gopi bahu in making 🤣 divz is lucky 😆 really wish to see something in the show just like ur os, 😃


I will be grateful if something of the sort happens... Thanks for liking it...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: loveyhmnew

I wanted to comment after reading the whole thread and I must say nicely written. But I don't understand why it is always easy to manaofy Ishita even after how big mistakes are? Pata nhn lucky Raman may be or may be he knows even if he would do blunders Ishita is there for him.But one thing is for sure in the process to show Raman as a real normal man they are making Ishita's character stronger day by day and Raman is looking too small infront of her.


Thanks for liking my work... Regarding Raman's apology, even he's caught in this situation... HE doesn't want to hurt Ishita... He's a normal human being who can commit mistakes... So, he can be forgiven if he properly apologises to Ishita...

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