OS: Based on yesterday's precap... (28/06/2014) Final note.Pg 23

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Ishita saw Raman and Shagun driving away leaving her confused. Ishita was totally shaken by whatever she saw.

Ishita: (self talk) Raman ne mujhpe chillaya aur jhooth bhola... Shagun ke liye... Raman jhooth kyon bhol raha hai? Yeh kya naya chakkar hai? Maine Shagun ko respect dene ke liye kaha aur badle mein mujhe hi avoid kar raha hai...

Ishita turned towards the other side of the road and realised that they must have visited the advocate's office...

Ishita: (Thinking) Jab Neil Raman ka lawyer hai, woh use chodkar kisi aur lawyer ke pass kyon gaya? Shagun ke saath... I must find out...

She entered that office and before she could ask anyone, she heard a man talking to another person.

Stranger: Yeh papers ka dhyan rakhna... Baaki ke papers Raman Bhalla ya Mrs.Bhalla kal aake hume denge. Uske baad uss gaadi ke maamle ko jaldi suljaana hai.

Someone called Ishita...

Another stranger: Madam... Aap ho koun? Kisse milna hai aapko?

Ishita: I'm Mrs.Bha... (She stopped there. She realised that there was another Mrs.Bhalla there in this office and said) I'm mathangi. Mujhe jaana hai...

Another stranger: Ajeeb aurat hai yaar...

Ishita got back into her car and started thinking about whatever that has happened from last night...

Ishita: (Self talk) Raman ko kisi gaadi ke maamle ko suljana hai. Shagun usse madad maang rahi hai. Aisi kya baat hai jo Shagun Ashok se nahi lekin Raman se madad maang rahi hai... Raman bhi kaafi disturbed hi lag raha hai...

Ishita phone started ringing. She saw that it was Ruhi...

Ishita: Roo beta... Kya baat hai? Aap itne jaldi? Papa ne abhi abhi drop kiya na?

Ruhi: Ishima. Kisi founder ka death ho gayi. Isliye chutti de diya...

Ishima, aaj hum Sid ka naya movie dekhne chale?

Ishita: Aaj nahi beta... Phir kabhi...

Ruhi: Ishima. Kya Adi bhaiya ne bhi Sid se mila hoga? Unke gaadi ke saamne liya tha na woh photo...

Ishita: (Realising something) Haan... Wahi kaha na aapne? Roo... Aap kuch der muthu ke saath khelo... Main aa joongi...

Ruhi: Patti ka ghar locked hai. Yahaan bhi koi nahi hai... Sirf Neelu aunty hai. Main bore ho rahi hoon. Jaldi aayiye...

Ishita: Toh abhi aa rahi hoon main...

Ishita decided to drop all other works and drive back... While driving back, she was thinking about the recent turn of events...

Ishita: (Thinking to herself) Raman ne Ruhi pe tab chillaya jab voh iss gaadi ki baat kar rahi aur ab yeh dono kisi gaadi ko lekar pareshan hai... Kya yeh sab ittafak hai? Nahi... Adi ke gaadi se hi accident hua.

She immediately halted the car and saw that pic which Siddarth sent her.

Ishita: (Self talk) AK consultancy... Kahi yeh Ashok Khanna toh nahi hai na? Ashok ne gaadi ko bhej diya lekin ab bhi wahi khada hai yeh gaadi? Yeh sab... Mujhe jaldi jaakar check karna hoga kahi woh wahi khada hai ki nahi.

Ruhi took rest of Ishu's day... She couldn't go out... She decided to visit Ashok's house next morning. While Ishita was feeding Ruhi, Raman entered inside...Fully exhausted... Ishu was furious with Raman for lying to her. She didn't even turn towards him.

Ruhi: Papa... Aap aa gayi? Aapke favourite dish banaya hai... Jaldi aao...

Raman: Ishima ne banaya hai?

Toshi: Maine banaya puttar. Tu chethi fresh hoke aa jao...

Raman: Kaafi der ho gayi. Aap jaake so jao. Ishita mujhe kaana de degi.

Ishita: (With her eyes on Ruhi) Woh actually... Kuch kam hai mujhe. Main sab alag rakh dungi. Aap khud le lijiye.

Raman wasn't execting that. He did notice that Ishita was avoiding him but this... he wasn't feeling good. Ever since Ananya's naamkaran, Ishita has always made it a point to wait for him. Before Raman could question something more, Ishita took Ruhi and left that place.

Raman: Maa... Aap jao. So jao... I'll take care.

Raman: (Self talk) Isse kya hogayi? Kyon avoid kar rahi hai mujhe? Kahi subah wali baat ko lekar gussa toh nahi hai na? Wahi hogi. Mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye. Main baat kar loongi Ishita se.

When Raman entered their room, he saw Ishita narrating some story to Ruhi. Ishita abruptly ended the story on seeing him.

Ruhi: Papa...Aao...

Raman occupied his respective place in their bed. When Ruhi took Raman's hands to entwine the same with Ishu's hands, she withdrew her hands...

Ishita: Main bhi budoo hoon... Mujhe Dr. Sharma se baar karni hai. Ek medical refernce maanga unhone aur main call back karna bhool gayi. Roo... aap so jao. Main jaldi aaongi.

Raman couldn't question her or go behind her because of Ruhi. He wasn't sure if her reason was actually true or another goof up on her part...
He waited for more than an hour for Ishita to turn up. Since the same didn't happen, he went looking for her. He saw Ishita sleeping on a couch in an uncomfortable position with phone in her hands. He saw that the call has ended and made her lie down properly. He covered her with a blanket and left inside after switching off the lights. When Raman's footsteps died, Ishita opened her eyes... That was another sleepless night for Mr and Mrs.Bhalla in Mayur Vihar but the vamp was happily settled in her boyfriend's arms.

More to follow... Thanks to Nichi and other LU thread members for pushing me to write this OS.

First update...pg 3
Second update...pg 6
Third part...pg 11
Fourth part...pg 14
Fifth part...pg 18
Final update...pg 20

Final note Pg 23
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome yaar...loved it. hope raman sets everything right😊
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really well written- i hope in the show ishita connects the dots as easily 😕
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Yaaay

Thanks for writing 🤗

*edited*

Silent treatment by Ishu 😆 LOVED it. Very well written. You understand character Raman/Ishita too well. That was so typical them.

I also like how easily Ishu could put 2 n 2 together. Looking forward to more, how she finds out whole matter. ;)

n LOLOL @last line. Vamp is sleeping hero- heroine's neend udake 😆
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Originally posted by: rutu83

really well written- i hope in the show ishita connects the dots as easily 😕


It will happen... Ishu is too smart... Thanks for liking it...
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Originally posted by: dreamy-sa

awesome yaar...loved it. hope raman sets everything right😊


Thank you...
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Originally posted by: Megher_Palok

Yaaay

Thanks for writing 🤗

*edited*

Silent treatment by Ishu 😆 LOVED it. Very well written. You understand character Raman/Ishita too well. That was so typical them.

I also like how easily Ishu could put 2 n 2 together. Looking forward to more, how she finds out whole matter. ;)

n LOLOL @last line. Vamp is sleeping hero- heroine's neend udake 😆


Thanks for appreciating my work... Actually, thanks to you ppl for making me write this...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woow lovely os dear good job... 👏
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Beautiful start! You've portrayed the characters so well! :)
Can't wait to read more.
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Originally posted by: sweetnoori

Woow lovely os dear good job... 👏


Thank you...

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