OS: Based on yesterday's precap... (28/06/2014) Final note.Pg 23 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 1 & 2 (Pages 1 and 3):
Wow, loved your story! I like how Ishita's giving him the silent treatment and he's actually really affected by it. Especially that hand holding scene at night with Ruhi, I could picture it happening in my mind!
Part 3 (Page 6):
And after the accident Romi was just too good at the hospital, loved his line about not caring if it was Adi or Raman himself standing in his way of hurting Shagun. Too good!
And Ishita already taking back the report shows how selfless she is, you kept the show's characters the way they are in this so it was even more fun to read!
Part 4 (Page 11):
The way you showed Mr Bhalla supporting Raman in punishing his son Romi to give an exanple of how a father should be to his son was really good! That should make Raman see some sense on how to be a real father! Parents are meant to show kids the right path, not support them on their walk down the wrong path!
Part 5 (Page 14):
Haha, making Raman feel even more guilty by mentioning the 'sirf Ruhi ke liye' clause of their marriage! And it's good that Mr Bhalla's not letting Raman near Ishita, as they say: Distance makes the heart grow fonder! Waiting to see how much fonder his heart becomes 😳 😳 😳

Amazing OS ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey great going... will be continuation right???

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sristhi

this was excellent. .dear continue soon what we except from cv's wont listen atleast you fulfilling our thoughts by writing thank u so much dear please continue yaar..pain of ishita Raman must understand and can't able go loose anymore..can't live without her..she is more important person in heart and life...


Thanks for that... cv's can think better than me... Have faith in them...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Arooj.M

Part 1 & 2 (Pages 1 and 3):
Wow, loved your story! I like how Ishita's giving him the silent treatment and he's actually really affected by it. Especially that hand holding scene at night with Ruhi, I could picture it happening in my mind!
Part 3 (Page 6):
And after the accident Romi was just too good at the hospital, loved his line about not caring if it was Adi or Raman himself standing in his way of hurting Shagun. Too good!
And Ishita already taking back the report shows how selfless she is, you kept the show's characters the way they are in this so it was even more fun to read!
Part 4 (Page 11):
The way you showed Mr Bhalla supporting Raman in punishing his son Romi to give an exanple of how a father should be to his son was really good! That should make Raman see some sense on how to be a real father! Parents are meant to show kids the right path, not support them on their walk down the wrong path!
Part 5 (Page 14):
Haha, making Raman feel even more guilty by mentioning the 'sirf Ruhi ke liye' clause of their marriage! And it's good that Mr Bhalla's not letting Raman near Ishita, as they say: Distance makes the heart grow fonder! Waiting to see how much fonder his heart becomes 😳 😳 😳

Amazing OS ❤️


Brilliant analysis... Even i didn't know i quoted so much here... Thank you...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shalz_123

hey great going... will be continuation right???


Yes... Initially, planned to end it with 4th or 5th part... But, its going on and on... Thanks to your brilliant comments...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome kri thanks for updating very soon loved every part I have not seen last 3 episodes mere mein himmat nahi hai ishita ko aise daikhne I liked raman alot but this time he broke Ishita's trust o i wanna see aisa wala raman tarapta hua ishita ki liye
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dark.lig8

awesome kri thanks for updating very soon loved every part I have not seen last 3 episodes mere mein himmat nahi hai ishita ko aise daikhne I liked raman alot but this time he broke Ishita's trust o i wanna see aisa wala raman tarapta hua ishita ki liye


Yes... Raman did a mistake... Let us see how he's going to come clean out of the same... Thanks for liking it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all the parts in one go... Amazingly written... You write so well...👏👏
Plzz update the next part asap...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved ishra s conversation pg14...nice parts cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMGG!!!! read all the parts in one shot!!! unbelievablee!! awesummm updateee!! loved it totallyy..
keepp continuinggg.. eager to read moreee!! plsss PM me whn u update the next part!! im waitinggg.. thanku soo muchh

wese, u write amazingly awesum!! great going!

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