Wow, loved your story! I like how Ishita's giving him the silent treatment and he's actually really affected by it. Especially that hand holding scene at night with Ruhi, I could picture it happening in my mind!
Part 3 (Page 6):
And after the accident Romi was just too good at the hospital, loved his line about not caring if it was Adi or Raman himself standing in his way of hurting Shagun. Too good!
And Ishita already taking back the report shows how selfless she is, you kept the show's characters the way they are in this so it was even more fun to read!
Part 4 (Page 11):
The way you showed Mr Bhalla supporting Raman in punishing his son Romi to give an exanple of how a father should be to his son was really good! That should make Raman see some sense on how to be a real father! Parents are meant to show kids the right path, not support them on their walk down the wrong path!
Part 5 (Page 14):
Haha, making Raman feel even more guilty by mentioning the 'sirf Ruhi ke liye' clause of their marriage! And it's good that Mr Bhalla's not letting Raman near Ishita, as they say: Distance makes the heart grow fonder! Waiting to see how much fonder his heart becomes 😳 😳 😳
Amazing OS ❤️