OS: Based on yesterday's precap... (28/06/2014) Final note.Pg 23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Ishita saw that Raman's eyes were puffed.

Raman: I am sorry... Very sorry... Ishita... Tum jaanti ho ki Adi mera weakness hai. Haan main galat hoon.

Ishita: Kab tak Adi ko apne armour banakar galtiyaan karenge aap? Aap dono ke beech mein samaj main nahi aa raha hai ki bacha koun hai? Galtiyaan ko sudharne ke jagah aap uska saath de rahe ho... Sirf mere nahi, sab ke bharose ko tod diya... Shagun ka saath dekar.

Raman: Aisa nahi hai...

Ishita: Aisa hi hai. Yaad hai aapko, jab mujhe laga Parmeet yeh sab ke peeche hain, tab maine kaha ki hume ise yehi chodni chahiye lekin aapne kya kaha? Chahe gunegaar jo bhi ho, usse saza milni chahiye... Hai na?

Raman: Adi Shagun ke bina nahi reh payega...isliye...

Ishita: Simi bhi Parmeet ke bina udaas hai Raman. Lekin, tab insaaf dena zaroori samja aaj nahi... Adi ko Shagun ne kaafi bigadke rakha hai. Aap bhi wahi karoge toh Adi ko sahi ka pehchaan kaise hoga...Mujhse bhi chipaya...Aakhir, Shagun sahi hai na... Iss rishtha sirf ek samjoutha hai... Ruhi ke liye... Aur kuch nahi...

Raman: Ishita... Please... Tumne bhi complaint ko withdraw hi kiya na...

Ishita: Kyonki main aapko samajthi hoon... Jaise Adi ke wajah se mujhse jhoot bhola, waise aap mere wajah se Shagun ke saath kya karenge yeh toh main jaanthi thi... Raman, main yeh nahi keh rahi hoon ki aapko Shagun ko turanth jail bhejni chahiye... Lekin, aise aankh bandh karke apne bache ko galat raasta dikhana bhi galat hai... Aapko yeh baat share karni chahiye mujhse... Aapke patni ke hasiyat se na toh nahi, atleast ek beti hone ke naate bata sakte the na... Itna hi jaante ho aap mujhe?

Raman: Ishita... Tumhe chot pahunchane ka iraada nahi tha mera... I wanted to set things right...

Ishita: Kaise... Jhoot bolke? Nateeja dekh liya na... Aapke jhoot ka...

Raman: I'm very sorry Ishita... Please naraaz mat ho jao...

Ishita: Main ho koun naraaz rehne wali. Raman... Aap sorry kyon bol rahe ho? Woh toh mujhe kehni chahiye na... Bhool gayi ki yeh shaadi Ruhi ke liye kiya tha humne... Iss rishthe se expectations rakhkar maine galti ki hai... I'm very sorry Raman...

Raman was feeling helpless... Mihika entered inside...

Mihika: Akka... Uncle aa rahe hain...

Ishita: Aap jao... Papaji gussa karenge...

The next day, Ishita was discharged from the hospital... Raman made their room ready for Ishita to stay comfortable.

Mr.Bhalla: Puttar... Tu humare kamre mein jao... Toshiji tumhara dhyan rakhegi...

Raman was upset but he knew that there is no use arguing with him.

Ruhi: Kyon dadu... Ishima humare saath rahegi na...

Mr.Bhalla: Nahi puttar... Ishima yehi rahegi toh jaldi teek ho jayegi na...

Ishita went inside Toshi's room and Raman went inside their room and slammed the door behind him.

Edited by krikumar.91 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: srgmpazee
Very well written , all the three parts. 👏. They were amazing. Hope and really wish to see some of your scenes incorporated in the future tracks. Eagerly waiting for your next part :- The face off between raman and ishita. Please post them soon.

Thanks a lot... You ppl are making me wish for the same... I just wish cv's listen to the same...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Megher_Palok
While reading first half of part 2, couldn't see d accident coming but good move. Nice move. Raman effects Ishu.

n part 3...FINALLY! Raman spoke his heart out to Mihir. Good lord. Its hard to think being in such a position like RKB was ..its even harder for a third person to understand his dilemma.

Family angry Raman is obvious. Thank god ishu is safe ...no Coma drama 😆

You're going to continue naa?!! :P

You've to. Wanna know how RKB is going to make ishu understand... how she reacts :)

Part 3 is very emotional ...updt soon ;)

I'm continuing yaar... Thanks for analysing so well...

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soapliker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Wow. Loved it. All 3 parts were awesome. Hope we get to see some of it in the show. It was good to see family united with each other against Raman.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: shaaranya
Superb part
Your story is keeping me going after yesterday's precap loving every part of it
Do update soon

Lovely comment again... Thanks...

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soapliker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Did I miss an update between Page 6 and 14. 😭

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: Nichuss

u wrote wht i imagined to see...😳

Happy to know about it...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: soapliker
Wow. Loved it. All 3 parts were awesome. Hope we get to see some of it in the show. It was good to see family united with each other against Raman.

Thanks... Not against Raman but for Ishita... Bechara Raman yaar...