OS: Based on yesterday's precap... (28/06/2014) Final note.Pg 23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: krikumar.91

Yes... Initially, planned to end it with 4th or 5th part... But, its going on and on... Thanks to your brilliant comments...

Please post the next part and the remaining parts very very soon. Eagerly eagerly waiting to see how Raman is going to handle this situation, overcome it and win ishitha all over again.😃😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: krikumar.91

Kahi mere wajah se cv's daant toh nahi kaayenge na...😆 Idea aasani se tapak gayi mere dimaag mein lekin cv's kuch na kuch acha soch rakhe honge...

they better do it...warna mere gusse se they wnt be spaired...😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Raman was angry with himself and others for bring insensitive...

Raman: (Self talk) Yeh kya lagake rakha hai? Kya lag raha hai inn logon ko? (Banging his fist on the table) Itni si baat samaj nahi paa rahe hain ki mujhe Ishita ko aise dekhkar takleef ho raha hai... Biwi hai meri... Lekin, milne bhi nahi de rahe hain... Woh khud naraaz hai aur yeh log beech mein takleef de rahe hain... Aise haar nahi maanunga... Ishita ko manakar rahoonga. Dekhta hoon ki koun rokta hai mujhe...

Raman barged into Toshi's room and took Ishita in his arms. Before Mr.Bhalla could ask him something...

Raman: Papa... please. Yeh mere aur mere biwi ke beech ka maamla hai. Woh humare kamre mein hi comfortable rahegi. Aapse vinati karta hoon... Door rahiye isse...

Raman carried her to their room and closed the door behind them.

Toshi: Bhallaji... Adi ke pyaar mein pagaal ho gaya. Usse bhi apne galti ka ehsaas hai. Rehne dijiye na.

Madhu: Yeh teek keh rahi hai... Raman ne jhoot bola lekin hum bhi toh dekh hi rahe hain ki kitna fikar karta hai woh Ishu ka... Ek mauka hume deni chahiye...

Mr.Iyer: Bhalla sahab. Maan jayiye na... Hume isse door rehni chahiye...

Mr.Bhalla was finally convinced and they decided to give a chance to Raman. In Ishra's bedroom...

Ishita: Yeh kya kiya? Samaj kya rakha hai apne aap ke baare mein?

Raman: Raman Kumar Bhalla... Koi shak?

Ishita: Kal hospital mein hi...

Raman sat near her and kept his fingers on Ishita's lips...

Raman: Shh... Kitna bolti ho yaar? Break de do... Ab aaram karo...

Ishita was actually shaken by the sudden proximity. She decided not to give in and lied down to prevent herself from melting again...

Mihir called Raman to know if Ishita's fine.

Raman: Teek hai Ishita... (Then, he narrated everything)...

Mihir: Bhai... Aap mana rahe ho ya jagda kar rahe ho?

Raman: Kya kare? Teri bhabhi ko Ram kumar se jyada Raavan kumar pasand hai... Aise manana padega ab...

Mihir: Are you positive about that Raman?

Raman: Mihir... Mujhse bahut badi galti hui hai... Phir ek baar fail ho gaya... Acha baap bhi nahi ban paya na acha pati... Ishita is hurt... Infact, honi chahiye... Woh chahe kuch bhi kahe, main use convince karke rahoonga... Dil se koshish kar raha hoon. I just hope sab teek ho jaye... Main Ishita ke pass rukhna chahtha hoon... Office nahi aa paunga. Tum sambhalo...

Mihir: Yeh bhi koi kehniwali baat hai kya? I'll take care...

Raman: Thanks... Rakhtha hoon...

He returned back to his room and saw Ishita struggling with her hair... It was falling on her face again and again and kept on disturbing her...

Raman: Main tumhari baalon ko baandh deta hoon... Disturb ho rahi ho na...

Ishita: Aapse kya matlab... Agar mujhe iski zaroorat hai toh kisi aur se keh doongi...

Raman saw Ruhi passing outside and shouted...

Raman: RUHI...

Ruhi who heard that came inside...

Ruhi: Kya hua papa?

Raman: Kuch nahi Ruhi... Yehi keh raha tha ki tum pass karke jaa rahi ho...

Ruhi: Aap band ke saath kya kar rahe ho?

Raman: Tumhari Ishima ki baal baandh raha hoon... Disturb ho rahi hai tumhari Ishima. Hai na Ishita?

Clenching her teeth and faking a smile...

Ishita: Haan beta... Wahi ho raha hai...

Raman successfully tied her hair into a bun... But, still few strands were falling on her face and he slowly moved the same behind her ears. They shared a eye lock... Someone knocked their room's door... It was Madhu...

Madhu: Yeh Idli le aaya... Tere liye Ishu... Raman ne mangwaya...

Ishita: Toh aap hi khilavo na amma... Raman Ruhi ko khilayega...

Raman understood what Ishita wanted to convey and went out with Ruhi...

Edited by krikumar.91 - 11 years ago

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Clara20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

lovely update...

waiting to see hw raman convince ishita??

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Malangan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

wow !!
perfectly written ...
couldnt wait to read further ..want raman to rectify his mistake. n stop being puppet in tje hands of adi

cont soon

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-kri-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: arshi33
Read all the parts in one go... Amazingly written... You write so well...👏👏
Plzz update the next part asap...😊

Thanks a lot yaar... Seriously... It means a lot...

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-kri-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Imanezara
Loved ishra s conversation pg14...nice parts cont soon

Thanks... Next part updated...

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-kri-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: avni_19
OMGG!!!! read all the parts in one shot!!! unbelievablee!! awesummm updateee!! loved it totallyy..
keepp continuinggg.. eager to read moreee!! plsss PM me whn u update the next part!! im waitinggg.. thanku soo muchh

wese, u write amazingly awesum!! great going!

Good to know that you loved it so much... Regarding PM, i'm very very sorry... I'm just typing it and posting it here... Inbetween all this, commenting on your wonderful comments...

I want to complete it before 7.30... You know why😉

Can you kindly refresh the page n check for updates? Just today...please...

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-kri-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: srgmpazee

Please post the next part and the remaining parts very very soon. Eagerly eagerly waiting to see how Raman is going to handle this situation, overcome it and win ishitha all over again.😃😊

Even i'm thinking abt the same... Thanks for appreciating my work...