SS-Aaj Phir Tum Pe-(M) 4TH & Final Pt Updated Pg 15 - Page 3

Originally posted by: sai14

oh my gosh Uz. this was good.. it's a hard area to write in but you managed it well.

I am just mad that you ended it where you did.. i want to part 2 right away😛

Thanks a lot Sai means a lot! Your so right it is hard totally not my usual style and I was kinda scared that it might get OTT and I wanted to stay true to the characters.

Originally posted by: tinni55

superb

Thank you for 😊

Originally posted by: pomegranate

You write such wonderful stories but I never get the the opportunity to review them. This was so different from your usual work, nice change in direction and nothing seemed too forced. Only problem is that your stories are too short, leaving readers wanting more. I guess you are doing a great job if that is the case.

This was very sensual, and I was listening to labon ko labon se from bhool bhuliaya, which made the story even better.

Thanks and I want to see the second part soon.

Hi thanks so much for your comment! I'm glad you liked it.
Yup anyone who has ever ready my other pieces would be totally taken aback-
I was myself 😆
Hmmm so another person who wants longer parts- ok I promise to make part 2 longer. Will post asap

Originally posted by: CharmGal

The best thing about this Os, it's that it sound exactly like what Raman and Ishita probably would have done when they acknowledge their love for each other.

Raman is a master of teaser particularly towards to his wife. He loved teasing her to wind her up to point where she become impatient, speechless and mad. 😆

Please update soon, 😊

I'm on my phone so can't bold your comment -
But I'm so glad that you thought it was inline with their characters. I know he is such a tease. Now it's his turn 😳

Originally posted by: yhmfever

WEll that was amazing !!
Written soo beautifuly !!!!!!!

:D
continue soon !!

That's so kind of you. Thanku u 😛

I really cant believe you wrote this Uz like Lucky said I am having trouble digesting the fact one person wrote this and the same person wrote Mirror Mirror

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

I really cant believe you wrote this Uz like Lucky said I am having trouble digesting the fact one person wrote this and the same person wrote Mirror Mirror

Other than that its very tastefully written and that needs a mention considering the genre you have attempted 😳

PS I am having so many mannny ideas about what she can do for/to him...I dont even wanna go there with kiddies possibly stalking this thread, suffice to say Lucky may get the gist of things 😆😆

thank me Aani...i made the chupa rustam in Uz come out in flyin colors 😆😉

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

thank me Aani...i made the chupa rustam in Uz come out in flyin colors 😆😉

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

Thanks Nikki I see you seem to be doing that a LOT in people with this show 🤣 I am on the list as well rem the bijli giri epi post 🤣

Uz my sympathies are with you 😆

kya karu i hv an irresistible influencial power on ppl...😆😉😎

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

kya karu i hv an irresistible influencial power on ppl...😆😉😎