SS-Aaj Phir Tum Pe-(M) 4TH & Final Pt Updated Pg 15 - Page 2

UZ REMOVE my quote frm ur comment in pg1 as i hv updated my post again seein u updatin ur os

oh my gosh Uz. this was good.. it's a hard area to write in but you managed it well.

uz...mera comment in 1st page n 2nd page(1st comment)dono ko ur post mein update karo plz where u reserved for me 😆

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

omgg beginning is good...esp SUPER LOVED they way u made ishu describe him,the way he ws scannin her with his x-ray eyes...😉...

write till part 4 n then i will forgive u 😆😉

Originally posted by: happenstance

part 4? i can barely write one part-😆

sorry part 4 it is...aur kar lawyergiri...😆...so many ppl told u r messin up with wrong person..still u din listen na..AB BHUGTO...🤣🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Uz my friend... I res...

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Thats the thing with mistakes. Asking for forgiveness could lead to dangerous territory 😆 So I guess I should thank Nikki for this one 😊

Attempt at a different genre..hmmm... I am trying to reconcile the mirror/mirror author and the author of this story. All I can say is, I am glad I know both of them 😊

My only complaint with all your writings has been... they are too short... just when things are getting interesting, you decide to stop 😡😆

So eagerly awaiting your next update 😊

You write such wonderful stories but I never get the the opportunity to review them. This was so different from your usual work, nice change in direction and nothing seemed too forced. Only problem is that your stories are too short, leaving readers wanting more. I guess you are doing a great job if that is the case.

The best thing about this Os, it's that it sound exactly like what Raman and Ishita probably would have done when they acknowledge their love for each other.

Raman is a master of teaser particularly towards to his wife. He loved teasing her to wind her up to point where she become impatient, speechless and mad. 😆

Please update soon, 😊

WEll that was amazing !!
Written soo beautifuly !!!!!!!

:D
continue soon !!

Originally posted by: Isma_A

Yay! Can't wait to read!😃

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Uzma, this was so😳☺️. 😆You're such a tease, though, just like Raman.😆Dil maangey more, yaar. Get on ittt.😉Writing is good, though. I like it. Good job!😊

Thanks Isma- me a tease?! 😲 hehe. I do my best.