Dua - An IshRa Drabble | English Translation added

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: CavingIn
As I am not good at commenting about poetry you will have to forgive me for this insufficient words.
This is something that can happen to IshRa. At the end of their long journey when maybe one of them is left behind , the wish to see the other takes the form of a prayer. Beautiful Aani , beautiful.
Love
Nidha.

Thanks a lot Nidha and no need to ask for any forgiveness please, I am no poet myself this is just random scribbling 😳

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: afsanaanjum
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Yeah.The best part being the fact that in life most of the good things are done in a jiffy!😆 Thank you! Glad you liked the comparison. I hope you do keep writing some more and the PMs : Girl they are the things i need the MOST to keep up with the pace of this forum being an occasional viewer.😆
(-Will now read the updates of beneath the surface!😛)

@red - agree sometimes good things happen all of a sudden and thank you once again 😊

@blue - Oh I would keep on bouncing back as and when poss, as for peace 😆 wow too big a responsibility but if they help I am glad 😳

@pink - would love to hear from your opinion on BTS and thanks once again 😊

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afsanaanjum

@afsanaanjum

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

@red - agree sometimes good things happen all of a sudden and thank you once again 😊

@blue - Oh I would keep on bouncing back as and when poss, as for peace 😆 wow too big a responsibility but if they help I am glad 😳

@pink - would love to hear from your opinion on BTS and thanks once again 😊

On red : Weird facts you know!😆 Yup. You're welcome again!

On blue : Its your "bouncing back" is necessary for us too!😃 Aare you will manage my dear! I'm sure you will!😆

On pink : Read 3 and 4 . Now 5. Will comment after completing! Dude your damn good at this i swear! Sad to hear that its the end. But do start off with something soon.😊

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Ppramod

@Ppramod

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Very very nice and clean heart touching qoutes . I'm very much impressed the last line "I would give up 100 paradise".so sweet. Prayer

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aditi

@gupta.aditi20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

hey that was quite lovely...

to tell you the truth this is the very first poem i am reading her on if...

and i must say its really a good start..

you surely should write more...

and dear i dont know what you believe about soulmates... but you'll surely find your that friend fast.. just see around you... i believe friends are the best soul mate...

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: gupta.aditi20
hey that was quite lovely...
to tell you the truth this is the very first poem i am reading her on if...
and i must say its really a good start..
you surely should write more...
and dear i dont know what you believe about soulmates... but you'll surely find your that friend fast.. just see around you... i believe friends are the best soul mate...

Thank you so much Aditi for the wish and the comment so glad to know you liked it 😳