Dua - An IshRa Drabble | English Translation added

Author' note:

Dua

Gujarte har lamhe mein

Betti hui har sham mein

Bas ek tera hi khayal hai

Main guzroo jis har dagar

Ruke jahaan kahiin meri nazar

Tera chehra hi bas meri talaash hai

Tu mujhme hai kuch iss kadar

Ke na saath hoke bhi tu mere paas hai

Sang katti tere jo meri umar

Bas ek lamha lagta hai

Tera saath mujhe jitna bhi mila

Kum lagta hai

Aaj tu nahiin par tere nishaan hai yahaan

Na hoke bhi teri hi khushboo se

Meheka hua hai mera yeh jahaan

In aakhri kuch lamhon mein

Bas dua yeh nikalti hai

Ke sunle bas itni arz meri ye khuda

Ke gar kiya hai maine kabhi kuch sahi

Toh nawaaze apni itni inaayat mujhpe

Ke rakhle apni jannatein apne paas

Aur de de tera ek aur deedar mujhe

Ke teri hi galliyon mein hai mere liye raahatein

Teri baahein jo mujhe phir mile toh mil jaayegi mujhe

Woh jagah

Jispe waardoo main sekdo jannatein

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Sorry Aani, can't give you my feedback on this one since I don't understand Hindi at all. 😕


Edited: thank you very much for providing an English translation. It is very generous thing to do so thanks again. I am glad that you did that otherwise I would have missed out another masterpiece written by you.
This dua had touched my heart, when I read it, I could imagine Raman (in particular) and Ishita experiencing and thinking these exact words in their mind, heart and soul for one another. I loved the way CVs are developing Ishra relationship, they are in love with each other but remain unaware of their feeling. Small steps have indicated many more will happen their relationship, it's becoming one of the strongest relationship between a husband and wife in television history since they create the realism and do feel some strange and unique connection with other. Can't tell the difference between Ishra and Divan. With Ishra, their day doesn't end until they have spoke, banter, argue and see each other.

Your Drabble was perfect it's described their relationship very well. It's complemented very well with their night walk scene. Big applause to you Aani for writing such a Masterpiece Drabble 👏 I am off to revise and thanks again for the English translation 👍🏼

Will Res

EDITED...

Aani,

One doesnt call this piece of work a drabble. Its a ghazal. One of the sweetest forms of poetry that expresses a wistful nature of a lover who is ready to lose everything for his/her love, an expression of love without being overtly cheerful. I rest my case 😊

Here you go... I have been sitting on this one for 2 months. and I cannot believe I found the apt post to put this in... i hope you agree :)

"Falling in love is very real, but I used to shake my head when people talked about soul mates, poor deluded individuals grasping at some supernatural ideal not intended for mortals but sounded pretty in a poetry book. Then, we met, and everything changed, the cynic has become the converted, the sceptic, an ardent zealot." - E.A. Bucchianeri, Brushstrokes of a Gadfly

omg this ws so so beautiful n soulful aani..n yes totally suitin ishra...!!

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

omg this ws so so beautiful n soulful aani..n yes totally suitin ishra...!!

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(Read on the train, thanks for the note Aani)
Will be back later properly

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Aani this was so moving and such depth and weight to your words. I noticed the use of Urdu and loved it. Your right Urdu has such a sweetness to it.
Thank you for the English translation too, I have to say even the literal translation is simply
Wonderful.

Its soo soulful aani...honestly u shud copyright it...it has all chances to be stolen!! Its soo amazing.

Actly I feel so bad that i can't comment on your SS or oneshots...actually m so bad at reading...lost this habit of reading OS etc long back. But i am glad u wrote this and i could easily read and relish ur writing here...juss loved it! 😊

Many thanks for the English translation. Just to let you have that I have edited my post in page 1 to give my feedback on your Drabble. 😊