Two-Shot: Feelings & Evolving Emotions |PART 2: PG12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: suhaaana
Mindblowing loved it
that awkwardness dialogue and ravan kumar dara k rakega was epic
cnt asap

Thank you :)

updating soon

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Arooj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

OMG That was awesome. Love your writing style.

Ishita blasting Shagun, you go girl 👏, and Raman feeling proud of her for it!

Raman wanting to eat food made by Ishita only, haii mein mar jawa, that was so CUTE!

And he was getting jealous of her interaction with her friends, the possessiveness of her every move, like every action of hers should only ever be for him! 😆

Cannot wait for the next part, PM me when you update please. 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus
Awesome! First off, your dialogues are so like Raman's. "Baalon ka burger" was my favouriate. I still can't stop laughing.🤣
Aww! Raavan Kumar became love struck and is calling Mihir the same? Double standards!😆
He has a radar in his head, kya? Instantly found out where Ishita was.😆 Ishita also gave back well. Seriously, he met his match in her. Perfect match!
Waiting for part 2😃

HAHAH! Really?! :P im glad! 😆

hah, RKB is AFTERALL Bipolar Kumar Bhalla ;) 😆

;) nah, its just that his eyes keep scanning for her... lol they dont get stuck at anyone else nor confuse her with anyone ;) his HEART just asked him to look where Ishita was instantly 🤣 :P

hoping to update real soon, thank you so much :D

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serendipity.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

replying to the rest and updating part 2 tomorrow :)

Thanks again guys 🤗

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PreciousPri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Edited on page 4 😊 Waiting for the next part

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sai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

This is amazing! loved it.. I am glad that Ishita gave an earful to Shagun.

Edited by sai14 - 11 years ago

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soapliker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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divya17.8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

awesome writing...👏

Too good...👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Silsha
Yaar...Beautiful story😳
plz update ASAP😉

thank you :)

doing

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: SilverGold
OMG! This was hilarious! I loved it. The way Raman said "Shut Up" to himself out loud! 🤣
The way they both are realizing that they are attracted to each other has been portrayed amazingly, like it would happen in real life...I loved it!

Hi SilverGold,

Thank you very much for the kind words. HAH, glad you liked it ;)

thanks again :)