Two-Shot: Feelings & Evolving Emotions |PART 2: PG12 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Guguminti

Awesome yaar

Loved it

Do continue please sooonish

Originally posted by: ForbbidenLove

OMG Babe! This was truly Amazing...And I so totally LOVE you for writing this...Muacks🤗 | AWWIEE SHIV! 🤗 you make me happy!

Well you DEFINITELY did JUSTIFY your title...100%👏 i did? i did? i diddd!? THANK GOD! :P

Every Ray of Emotion was depicted into your story PERFECTLY... I could visualize Raman and Ishita's every ounce of expression as I read it... yay yay yayy! im glad! :*

I loved how you had brilliantly weaved the evolution of their relationship... Together with their growing Expectations, Needs and Wants...

The slight Awkwardness, Possessiveness.. What's mine is ONLY mine... The confusion in their hearts, trying to figure out what's happening WITH them and BETWEEN them.. FANTABULOUS! Thank you soo much yaar! 😳

I love the Jealous/Possessive wala Raman... It defo turns the notch up a level higher...

And how Ishita subtly demands for Raman to claim her as his own, was very well written [The lunch incident with her friend and how Raman claimed his authority over her, by holding her close and how she was enjoying every bit of it]... yes yes i got what you meant ;) however... u KNOW what happens when you say "she was waiting for him to CLAIM her as his own" ;) :P

P.S. I'm so looking forward to reading the 2nd part of this FAB story... Can't wait!

Originally posted by: hellooo

Wow! Too good 😊 waiting for the 2nd part

Originally posted by: ugababe

What a wonderfully drafted story! Enjoying every line!

Khushi

Originally posted by: DivAniTanni

It's very cute Reenz. So lovely. Waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: dark.lig8

its an amazing story i loved the whole idea , i want this avatar of Ishita When she is gonna backfire shagun n loved raman one liner Chup kar be, apna angoor ke beej jitna khurafaati dimaag itna mat use kiya kar, theek hai,

u expressed raman charachter quiet well jaisa wo hai.I really wanna see Mihir n Mihika to become love cupid among Ishra.cherry on a cake is that raman was jealous and when ishita's frd teased her with Suubu's name their awkwardness i really wanna see this thing in show

plz update it soon

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

i missed first page 😒 Aww its okay! 😳

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aaah omggg U PAGAL AURAT...😡😡😡..isko tu kharab bol rahi thi? umm... HAAN!? 🤔 STUPID..😡😡.. :| Oookaayyy :P .yes u read it rite...u ARE stupid..!! this is like ur BEST WORK till date n u still had guts to call it not good?😡😡...i told u ur reactions DNT matter...we will decide whether its good or not..!! BEST WORK TO DATE?! 😳 hahah nahi nahi bilkul nahi, i can do much better trust me! :P and i think i have, but for you to think so... of whatever work of mine youve read... well... Thank you yaat! 😳

this ws EFFIN PERFECT RB...👏...i felt lik i ws watchin YHM epi..!! i ws so so lost in IshRa land...⭐️...!! YAY! Purpose served! ;)

Originally posted by: felciya

Wow. Very nice. Waiting for your next part.

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

loved it..plz upd8 soon :)

Originally posted by: dreamy-sa

loved it. awesome writing. waiting for ur update. pm me if u can