Two-Shot: Feelings & Evolving Emotions |PART 2: PG12 - Page 6

Originally posted by: i4ishra

Totally Luvd it😳 I feel like I m watching th show r such. a superbb writer ⭐️plzzz do post next part soon😛

Originally posted by: cool_aparna

Hey reeno I think you should write often...

It was very well written...the way Raman called her yaar...reminded me of the button scene...he had used yaar there too...so really cud picturise Raman's playfullness...loved how u brought old frnds of Ishita before Raman...and he got 2 see a diff Ishita...

Eagerly waiting 4 next part...

Originally posted by: Muneeza04

This was good! Please Continue! 👏

Originally posted by: happenstance

Reenz i want more!!! seriously update this ASAP😳

The way you have penned down his feelings and how he is consciously realising her effect on him, and his wish to explore more of her is just beautiful. (and for once i'm not being guttery at all😳 i promise!)

On a lighter note I'm gushing literally, ! these are just so damn feisty, sexy and so cute. I could honestly totally imagine RKB holding her a little bit tighter and closer, Mr Possessive is just so sassy love him. You have RKB down to a T!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very nice..well written...👍🏼

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Part 1 was awesome. I liked how Raman was so lost in Ishita that he hardly did any of his work. That by itself is a miracle! The whole flashback scene was amazing. From Ishita firing Shagun to her conversation with Raman regarding him hiding his latest altercation with Shagun to Raman teasing Ishita and insisting on only eating what she has cooked. The scene at the restaurant was also another awesome sight with us getting to see a possessive Raman. I loved that part when Raman thought to himself that flirty Ishita is meant to be reserved only for him. That was just too cute. Do update Part 2 soon!

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

res 😳

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So so sorry Reens for the late edit... I simply forgot about this one ☺️ its alriight! ;) no problem at all, yaar.

this was so amazingly well written and I loved how Raman noticed Ishita almost as soon as he stepped in and of course the bit with the brothers and his possessive green-eyed self coming to the fore was a delight but the best part undoubtedly was him saying aloud the shut up 🤣🤣🤣 and then realizing he spoke it for everyone to hear 🤣🤣 Oh I have been there once...NOT at all a good place to be in😆 hahahaha, yes, IKR?! :P Thank youuu, and WHATTT?! YOU HAVE?! HAHAHAHHA! LOLOL All the more relateable then, i reckon!? ;) hehehe, im sure it isnt a place anyone would wanna be at! 😛

Also weren't you supposed to update this 🤔 where is the next part mam?

Originally posted by: PreciousPri

My Sona babes 🤗 Blue Eyed Doc! 🤗

How dare you call this brilliant piece of writing bad 😡...ek kheench ke marungi :| 😳 maaf kardo? 🤔

Anyways ... This... This was OUTSTANDING 👏👏👏 One of the best OS's I have read... sach mein you are truly gifted .. One of the best!? 😳 zyada nahi hogaya? 🤔 ya shayad life mai ek do hi parhi hongi! 🤣 🤣

The awkwardness .. the authority ... the understanding ... the ease.. the jealousy...the hesitation... all so well written... 👏 aww aww thank youu! 🤗

I really wanted Ishita to tell Shagun to leave her and her hubby alone... so I'm super happy she blasted airhead 😃 yay! :D im glad youre happy! 😃 makes ME happy ;)

But but my FAVOURITE has to be "baalon ka burger" 🤣🤣 hehehe im so glad people liked my silly one-liner! :P 🤣

and then this

Her every gesture did something to him now that pulled him towards her. He knew her, but he wanted to know more. He could feel her but he wanted to feel more. He HAD her but he wanted to HAVE more! 😉

When I read this ^ ... I unknowingly whistled😆 ... seeti maar line Sona 👏 heheheh EEE <3