ISHRA OS Tagathon # 2: Sham Bhi Koi - Page 3

superb idea about tagathon

I'm smiling like a complete sucker, totally broke the commute 'rule' Lucky 😆 😆 where was the disclaimer! Hehe..only kidding glad I did read it now 😃

A few parts which really stood out for me:

1. His eagerness to learn more Tamil, it actually matters to him now what she thinks of him and her feelings.

2. The driving Miss Daisy reference! So apt and really made me chuckle.

3. Their reactions while stood together and how their actions are now beginning to mirror their feelings.

Totally loved it and you did a fab job of continuing it. Again Isha this is such an awesome idea!
Can't wait to read Aani's part now

Originally posted by: modernfamily91

Look Lucky what you've done. Brought me out of my hibernation. My fav fav song and so apt it is. You have a knack for projecting the inner turmoil. Every time I read something like this I feel like I AM falling in love. This could do what a sensual piece of writing couldn't do. Now go continue the ehssaas track.😊

Aawww Sudhi... glad to see you back...🤗

To be honest, i think the song set the mood in this one 😊

Originally posted by: Indian_Isha

Lucky, this was magical!! Absolutely mesmerizing!

// LIke when 2 thieves are in a dark room, looking for the same thing to steal, and then the lights are turned on. Both of them could not look away, and they couldnt continue staring either.

//When he had seen his name written so beautifully, he had felt a surge of happiness, so much so that he thought he had suddenly grown taller.

//They looked at each other with a new kind of understanding. The one that comes when your heart starts speaking louder than the noise around. They didn;t want to acknowledge their feelings, but their eyes were speaking already.

//The drive back was going to feel longer than it really was, and once they got back home, would things be normal again? What was the new normal?

//All she knew was it was going to be darned sweet.

Loved these lines Lucky! They seemed to exactly convey the emotions of the protagonists! 👏

Agree, this isn't the tone that was used in my OS, but this is the perfect continuation to where I left, subtle yet so powerful! Volcano of unresolved questions exploding through their eyes! Awesome! Like Sudhi said in her comment, this OS has surpassed the effect of a sensuous OS! 😳

And you have tagged another fave of mine, Aani! OMG, can't wait to read! Aani, you can choose to end this tagathon or tag another writer at the end of it, upto you! GO Aani, cant wait! 😊

I am glad I could do it justice Isha 😊

Originally posted by: debomaaneet

This Tagamathon is super fun 😎 as if m watching passing the pillow game 😆
Isha di n you have done your best now looking forward to the next post..
Best of luck to (EkPaheli) 👍🏼
I want a pm for next post puleeezzz 😳

Thanks Debolina... I will PM you when Aani writes the next one 😊

Originally posted by: shivaniaroraji

superb idea about tagathon

just read both the parts,both were awesome😊

Thanks Shivani 😊

Originally posted by: happenstance

I'm smiling like a complete sucker, totally broke the commute 'rule' Lucky 😆 😆 where was the disclaimer! Hehe..only kidding glad I did read it now 😃

A few parts which really stood out for me:

1. His eagerness to learn more Tamil, it actually matters to him now what she thinks of him and her feelings.

2. The driving Miss Daisy reference! So apt and really made me chuckle.

3. Their reactions while stood together and how their actions are now beginning to mirror their feelings.

Totally loved it and you did a fab job of continuing it. Again Isha this is such an awesome idea!
Can't wait to read Aani's part now

Hey Uz... such dilemma... if we read while travelling, we miss the stops... if we read at work, boss stares at our face 😆 I feel you...

YAAYYY to you... you got the Driving Miss Daisy reference... 😊 and what I wrote about him wanting to learn Tamil

I am waiting for Aani too 😃

Originally posted by: cool_aparna

woah...you didn't make us wait long...it was wonderful !!!

Thanks Aparna... If I'd delayed more, Isha would have found me and strangled me 😉 It was a do or die situation 😆

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

loved it :)

Thanks Swati 😊

Originally posted by: creativeFF

excellent as usual. luv how they wer not touching but feeling each. others warmth.

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: florine_20

Brilliant dear. You continued it so well. I m very much liking this marathon

Thanks Florine 😊