ISHRA OS Tagathon # 2: Sham Bhi Koi - Page 4

You have written your part very well. The starting lines are very good. You have portrayed Ishra's feelings well. Very Nice.

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Hey Uz... such dilemma... if we read while travelling, we miss the stops... if we read at work, boss stares at our face 😆 I feel you...

YAAYYY to you... you got the Driving Miss Daisy reference... 😊 and what I wrote about him wanting to learn Tamil

I am waiting for Aani too 😃

Haha I know and today all the bosses are in! Can't win lol. Right I'm looking very serious at my phone as though I am furiously writing an email 😆

Originally posted by: happenstance

Haha I know and today all the bosses are in! Can't win lol. Right I'm looking very serious at my phone as though I am furiously writing an email 😆

i know right. some times I think i could have been a good actor 😆

Originally posted by: felciya

You have written your part very well. The starting lines are very good. You have portrayed Ishra's feelings well. Very Nice.

Thanks Felciya 😊

Nice continuation. A little more subtle but I guess that is how IshRa really are. Looking forward to the next part by another writer!!

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Nice continuation. A little more subtle but I guess that is how IshRa really are. Looking forward to the next part by another writer!!

Thanks Abby :)

The next one will be more wonderful 😊

You are so awesome!
Those awkward moments, those little gestures of love, those oh-so-electric accidental touches, those eyelocks...Sigh!
I'm yet again bowled over by your brilliant story.
This was perfect, as usual.
*Bows down*

Fabulous continuation Lucky!

Loved how their eyes did all the talking! This perhaps is the most exciting phase of a relationship, when you don't know what you feel for the other person let alone what the other person feels for you! And it gets even better if your heart tells you that whatever comes next is going to be "darned sweet"!

Your writing is so wonderfully descriptive that i can always picturise KP & DT performing it! This one too was SO IshRa! Superb work & a perfect continuation to Isha's OS.

All the best Aani! :)

Isha, this tagathon is a great idea really! All the brilliant writers of our forum contributing to complete a story is going to be an absolute treat for us readers! Thanks for starting this :)

Originally posted by: Fenice

You are so awesome!
Those awkward moments, those little gestures of love, those oh-so-electric accidental touches, those eyelocks...Sigh!
I'm yet again bowled over by your brilliant story.
This was perfect, as usual.
*Bows down*

Fenice... dont be sooo kind to me please 😊 Thanks for your beautiful feedback as always... it is really inspiring 😊

Originally posted by: Ram-an-tic.Moi

Fabulous continuation Lucky!

Loved how their eyes did all the talking! This perhaps is the most exciting phase of a relationship, when you don't know what you feel for the other person let alone what the other person feels for you! And it gets even better if your heart tells you that whatever comes next is going to be "darned sweet"!

Your writing is so wonderfully descriptive that i can always picturise KP & DT performing it! This one too was SO IshRa! Superb work & a perfect continuation to Isha's OS.

All the best Aani! :)

Isha, this tagathon is a great idea really! All the brilliant writers of our forum contributing to complete a story is going to be an absolute treat for us readers! Thanks for starting this :)

Thank you for your sweet comments 😊
and yes... am looking forward to where Aani takes this 😛