ISHRA OS Tagathon # 2: Sham Bhi Koi

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ZaaraBB

@ZaaraBB

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Thanks for ur feedback:)

You can call me Lucky, and may I know your name?

ok Im Razia

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Exellent OS Laxmi Di!Thanks fr pm!Pls write more on Ishra & pm Me!

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Haila!😳

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This was such a sweet description Lucky of a double date they ended up on 😊 Now that Mihir Mihika have their own love life back on track I can so see them playing cupids for IshRa in their own way once again! 😛

And I so understand the pressure! God but somehow my creative juices are on a high right now! Somehow your ending paved way for my continuation I just dunno how well its written! 😕 also its something different from my other fics! 😛

Edited by EkPaheli - 11 years ago

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modernfamily

@modernfamily

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Look Lucky what you've done. Brought me out of my hibernation. My fav fav song and so apt it is. You have a knack for projecting the inner turmoil. Every time I read something like this I feel like I AM falling in love. This could do what a sensual piece of writing couldn't do. Now go continue the ehssaas track.😊

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Indian_Isha

@Indian_Isha

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Lucky, this was magical!! Absolutely mesmerizing!

// LIke when 2 thieves are in a dark room, looking for the same thing to steal, and then the lights are turned on. Both of them could not look away, and they couldnt continue staring either.

//When he had seen his name written so beautifully, he had felt a surge of happiness, so much so that he thought he had suddenly grown taller.

//They looked at each other with a new kind of understanding. The one that comes when your heart starts speaking louder than the noise around. They didn;t want to acknowledge their feelings, but their eyes were speaking already.

//The drive back was going to feel longer than it really was, and once they got back home, would things be normal again? What was the new normal?

//All she knew was it was going to be darned sweet.

Loved these lines Lucky! They seemed to exactly convey the emotions of the protagonists! 👏

Agree, this isn't the tone that was used in my OS, but this is the perfect continuation to where I left, subtle yet so powerful! Volcano of unresolved questions exploding through their eyes! Awesome! Like Sudhi said in her comment, this OS has surpassed the effect of a sensuous OS! 😳

And you have tagged another fave of mine, Aani! OMG, can't wait to read! Aani, you can choose to end this tagathon or tag another writer at the end of it, upto you! GO Aani, cant wait! 😊

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Debolina

@debomaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

"It was one of those awkward moments. LIke
when 2 thieves are in a dark room, looking for the
same thing to steal, and then the lights are
turned on."-This simile between two thieves n #IshRa is way too lovely 😆
"...doodling his name on a
piece of paper, as if she was a school girl day-
dreaming about her first crush." Aww it reminded me of my school days 😉
Junior madrasan n bhavi ka devar are playing perfect role of cupid.Love all the Raman-Ishu moments 😃

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Debolina

@debomaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

This Tagamathon is super fun 😎 as if m watching passing the pillow game 😆
Isha di n you have done your best now looking forward to the next post..
Best of luck to (EkPaheli) 👍🏼
I want a pm for next post puleeezzz 😳