ISHRA OS Tagathon # 2: Sham Bhi Koi

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

hi dear

beautiful part

really enjoyed it

eagerly awaiting the next

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KurbaanHua

@KurbaanHua

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Fab writing 👍🏼
Since i was listening to Sochta hoon uska dil these lyrics, i feel, suit
jab uski,
nazar baat karti hai,
meri bekhudi bardne lagi,
woh khayalon main jab,
muskuraye toh,
aaye to,

sochta hun.. uska dil,
kabhi mujh pe aaye to..

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afsanaanjum

@afsanaanjum

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Hey there Ms.Tv-Fan (-I don't know your name!),

Read both the parts at one shot. Nice thought. This new silent trend of change in order to make the other feel comfortable is something that caught my eye and I'm in awe of the inflection of human nature!
Depicted beautifully to near perfection. Those quotations were just the icing with a cherry on top to the yummilicious yet cryptic cake!😃
I have read your previous stories and all i can say is depicting human emotions/thoughts, the nature is not easy and you do that wonderfully! There is a difference between thinking about a situation and writing it down with precision. Kudos to you for that!👏
Waiting for the next one's.

P.S : Thanks a ton for the much needed PM's.🤗

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attiya1.3

@attiya1.3

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

hayeee...really luvvv it...just beautiful ...😳.eagerly waiting 4r next one

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Rozy77
hi dear
beautiful part

really enjoyed it

eagerly awaiting the next

Thanks Rozy :)

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: KurbaanHua
Fab writing 👍🏼
Since i was listening to Sochta hoon uska dil these lyrics, i feel, suit
jab uski,
nazar baat karti hai,
meri bekhudi bardne lagi,
woh khayalon main jab,
muskuraye toh,
aaye to,

sochta hun.. uska dil,
kabhi mujh pe aaye to..

Hey... thanks... and nice song... i have a faint memory of this one :)

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: attiya1.3
hayeee...really luvvv it...just beautiful ...😳.eagerly waiting 4r next one

Thank you :)

and Aani will write the next one :)

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: afsanaanjum
Hey there Ms.Tv-Fan (-I don't know your name!),

Read both the parts at one shot. Nice thought. This new silent trend of change in order to make the other feel comfortable is something that caught my eye and I'm in awe of the inflection of human nature!
Depicted beautifully to near perfection. Those quotations were just the icing with a cherry on top to the yummilicious yet cryptic cake!😃
I have read your previous stories and all i can say is depicting human emotions/thoughts, the nature is not easy and you do that wonderfully! There is a difference between thinking about a situation and writing it down with precision. Kudos to you for that!👏
Waiting for the next one's.

P.S : Thanks a ton for the much needed PM's.🤗

Hey, My name is Lucky.

Thank you very much for your feedback...yes, I seem to be able to write about 'thoughts' a lot more than actual dialogue 😊

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afsanaanjum

@afsanaanjum

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Hey, My name is Lucky.

Thank you very much for your feedback...yes, I seem to be able to write about 'thoughts' a lot more than actual dialogue 😊

Your real name is Lucky or is it a nickname? Just curious, hope I'm not intruding!😛

Your welcome. Truly your thoughts are beautifully portrayed. Don't worry the dialogues will be polished pretty soon!👍🏼