ISHRA SS: Jee le zara Pg 49 - Pt 14&15 -Completed - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
And here i thought with time your devil became good...*sighs*😆😆

Thats torture on us di...very bad..update soon nah...bachon ki jaan logi kya 😳😳

Thats actually difficult to write the same idea for two different couples..poles apart i must say..but you doing it and that too in such an awesome way..because seriously i thought i will think about arakshi here and not ishra..but you surprised me because only ishra was in my mind all the time and hats off to you for that...it only shows how well and fantastically you write di truly 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

You set the temperature hgh with this updatee...chalo tell ishita side of story...subbu died kya or divorced hogayi...am being mean nah..anything for ishra and your romantic wala updateee..i miss it dii 😳😳

Continueee sooon sooon sooon sooon pleaseee pleaseee pleaseee pleaseee di😃😃😃

Thank you soo soo sooo sooo sooo sooo much 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
oh man ,, this is soo unfair 😆
Ishra moment is getting hawwwtie ,, n u pause it ,,😆
UP soon ,
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Awesome chapter but why you stopped at the perfect time please continue soon and please do pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
I was on vacation for few days and I was thinking of ur update.
such a beautiful update par yeh kya? cliffhanger? I hate cliffhangers yaara😆😆.
update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
res 😊
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u r writing very well 😃😃
breathtaking story. loved it loved it. raman and ishita's passion was well described 👏👏
cold water is needed I guess 😉😉😉 *rushing to the kitchen*😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Such an intense and passionate update ...
Love their kiss 😳 😳
Love how both are trying to resist each other...
They both love each other bt not able to confess it...
Separate ishita and sabbu soon so that we get together. ...
Want to see romance blooming betwwen ishra..
Update soon..
Edited by aYASHIKA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
aaah vidyaaa...ufff so so intense passionate update..!! yaar get tht moron out of ishu's life...i dnt mind ishu makin raman wait lil more...bt first n foremost,get tht subbu out frm her life,frm this ss...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Part 1

Wow Vidya Di! This really was a great start to the SS. I mean it felt so similar to the one you wrote in AF. That too on Ishra...it doubled my happiness.

The first update was just so full of emotions. To be precise I would say mixed feelings and emotions. Raman and Shagun divorced. I don't know what to say to that. I guess it was just the wrong people ending up together. There was one who fell in love with her beauty and there was the other who had married him for his wealth and status. But for Raman it was love. He probably had tried every thing possible to save this marriage but then again you are dealing with Shagun. So I can't really say I am surprised.

But the pain Raman was going through and the way you described it was just...overwhelming!
I mean he was hollow, empty...heartbroken. It was just really overwhelming to see him like that. And you did a great job of expressing this through your writing.

And then comes Ishita. Probably the only person who can make him smile in this situation. Bring out the Ravan Kumar in him 😆 Lol. But seriously they both connect like they have known each other since agesss... well technically they have. It's one of those relationships that don't have a name. Ishita well succeed in her unintentional efforts of bringing out the real Raman for once. 😳

Great start to an amazing story ahead Di! Loved it to every word

Off to read the next part
😳

Thanks for the Pm!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
All parts were just soo good
Amazing story
I wanted more. U ended it too soon
Please update super soon and pm me
It was soo good that I thought its written by a professional writer and taken from a highest selling book :D
But I know its all ur work and it is awesome
Keep it up and update super soon

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