ISHRA SS: Jee le zara Pg 49 - Pt 14&15 -Completed

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

very well written..update soon..😊

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chathu dharmawickrama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Awesome ,,

Beautiful,,, piece of writing ..

Wana read more,,n more

UP soon

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_Sapphire_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Wonderful! Can't wait to see the next chapter but do have a request which is please kindly put English translation along with the Hindi dialogue too since I don't understand Hindi vey well.

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Res :)

EDITED...

Hey Vidya, sorry it took so long to read this.

First and the foremost, I was VERY curious to see how you would continue after their passionate encounter in the last update. I am glad with the way you did 😊

I was made at Raman in this part, the only saving grace for him is that he is currently a sad, lonely, broken-hearted man. That earns him my sympathy, but does not make me like him. And don't take me wrong, its not because he is pushing any moral boundaries (I dont believe pure human beings exist.). Its exactly because of this line Ishita said "You are like a wavering ship in the vast ocean and now all you search in me is an anchor Raman..." Exactly how I was feeling. So thank you very much for that line 😊

The 'next morning' scene was tooo good. Now I am more curious 😆

Kudos Vidya for writing something thats so difficult to write about! and for doing it so well👏

Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 11 years ago

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LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Good SS Vidya Di!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon!

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

yaaay r u headin towards subbu-ishu divorce?plz ge tht done in enxt update...😆

this one ws awesome

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pomegranate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

This is truly an exceptionally written story, vidya. I love the unique concept, and i love that you are not afraid to write morally ambiguous characters. Sometimes chemistry is not all that palpable in stories, but raman and ishita's chemistry completely leaps out.

Ps: I was listening to the song Zara Zara from rehna hai tere dil mein while reading the last chapter.

Edited by pomegranate - 11 years ago

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vidya.anand

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: CharmGal
Wonderful! Can't wait to see the next chapter but do have a request which is please kindly put English translation along with the Hindi dialogue too since I don't understand Hindi vey well.

thanks!

I will try to write in English as much as possible...and also try to include translation!

thanks to all who have liked and commented on this story of mine...🤗

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PoohLover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Hello 😛

Part3:
Oh oh i was actually kinda worried...as i didnt want ishita to feel guilty that she betrayed subbu!!

Nevertheless enjoyed the kiss very much...i just hope subbu goes out soon and ishra are back together but yeah without the twist and turns it would not be interesting so bring them on 😉

Very interesting and romantic update 😃

Part4:

Beautiful update..love the way raman was taking care of ishita 😃

Thank god ishita came to know the truth that she does not have any problem..atleast now she wont feel guilty of not being able to fulfill her in laws wish😊

Subbu mom..urghhh she is such a nuisance 🤢

Cant wait to read what happen next😃

Thank you soo much