Mirror/Mirror#5 Raman (pg7) - Page 5

Originally posted by: PreciousPri

Uz ... dil khush kar ditta yaar 😃... this was so AWESOME!!

Thank you so much for this ...too good ... 👏

These two ..seriously ...one fighting hard to control and the other wants her hubby to loose control...Ishita re-applying the lipstick...such a typical girly thing to do 😆... I really want to know what happens next

oh oh btw Kabhi to nazar milao is one of my fav tracks 😃

I just read all the reflections. very nicely written!

Hey Uz

Originally posted by: sai14

I just read all the reflections. very nicely written!

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

Hey Uz

this was so beautifully written my friend! And the song you used - oh its an absolute favorite of mine oh wow it goes so well for IshRa here, thank you for reminding me of this song, perhaps I can use it on a vm someday on IshRa ... anyways getting back to the point I loved this update.

It was beautiful, fluffy and in keeping with their characters onscreen personas so very well, I particularly loved the hand holding bit

Finally read all part thanks to the rain here ...I didn't have to go out 😉

Mirror Mirror # 5 Raman

" what we do in life echoes in eternity..." (Gladiator)

He is sat on the bathroom floor, head in his hands. He is unsure as to how long he has been sat there either. He attempts to pick himself up.

He looks up at the mirror. Puffy red swollen eyes. Anyone would think that he's not slept in days. He can't even recall the last time he shaved. He starts splashing cold water over his face- he can barely recognise his own reflection.

The last few hours have reduced him to such depths. So confused, so torn. Just a week ago they had promised. He had promised that his kids were their kids. So why was it that he was now standing at crosswords. Child on one side and wife on another.

Was he so unrecognisable to her now- that she can't see the truth in his eyes. His truth. Where words have failed him he had hoped against hope that she would find what she was seeking in his eyes.

She is questioning him about her. What does she have to do with this. She is irrelevant to this. This is about us. I asked her to trust me but she is unable to.

I have wronged her, but not in the way I see that pain within her eyes. She lost control today, for a moment the serene presence in my life lost her way. Lost her way because of me.

I need her to understand, to believe to trust. She has always been so good in hiding her sorrows but today that pain doesn't subside. It doesn't settle.

I feel like I am losing my way again. I need her pull, I need her to be my anchor once more. I want to be her constant. Why won't she tell me the meaning behind these tears. Those words said in anger, yes they hurt me but they hurt her more. That I know.

I feel like the abyss is calling again, but this time it not only seeks me, it seeks us both out.

this ws perfect Uz...aah this is exactly wht Raman is goin thru...😭😭...he is wrong...bt i also understand y he is doin all these..he NEED to breakdown yaar...HIGH TIME..then only tht guy can be back on track for her,for him n for their relation..!!!

UZ plz write on Ishu too...as yahan BOTH r hurt...i would love to see mirror mirror on ishu too BY U 😃

SS 🤗

Res...


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Uz, you should be resting, not writing hun. 😡

anyway... You know how much I love your mirror pieces. they are reflections (i found the symbolism just today! dumb me)

While we are all focussing on Ishita's obvious pain, its very important to look at Raman's too. Usually the wronged party has all the sympathisers. But the one who's perpetrated the wrong has twice the demons. You have written that brilliantly. I applaud your understanding of his psyche!!!

I would have said, do write more, but I know you need your rest. Please continue writing once you are at your 100%.