Those Awkward Moments - An IshRa OS [Based on last scene of 12/ 05]

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rusha4003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

That was brilliant ... 👏👍🏼

I was alternating between ... Ha ha ...Wow ... & ...Aww ... & Sighhh ... & & ☺️ ...

Take a bow , dear ... you are a brilliant writer ... wish you were on Ekta's creative team for YHM !

I'm not sure Ekta will let us get too many such moments ... so plz ... keep writing more of such scenes !

Special thanks to Nikki for this 'farmaish' !👍🏼

PS: We haven't met ... I am Usha ! 😊

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serendipity.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Can you give me a list of ALL the places i have to EDIT my comment on!??!?!!?!? 🤣

This one im editing AAJ HII! PAKKA! Subbu ki kasam!!! 🤣

HII! 😃

Subbu ki kasam khaai thi, i HAD to do this! 😆

I had a great great time reading this OS Aani, it was very different from your usual work. You usually are extremely high on content and think from a lot of angles, are conceptual... This obviously was no less, but you focused on the sort of cliche, more awkward moments, focusing on IshRa's physical call and attraction, that is basically AMAZING, and a fun, HOT read! :D

The whole thing, it was so so similar to what actually happened you know... the Bhallas ka aana, the Raman ka hiding away his inner feelings and badhti hui physical attraction with regards to ishita with his taunts, mocks and super awesome one-liners, and i LOVEEED Ishita here! 😆 hah. but still always in-sync with her character, being worried for hubby dearie, owning to the fact of her caring nature overall... but this was PURE BLISS <3

HAHAHA I LOVEEED How Raman almost put the whole blame on Ishita of her not just checking him out... but... you know... FEELING him Out and Out! 🤣 🤣 and then typical... Ishitas lecture and all he could think of to stop her from it was... well THE OBVIOUS! haha. wish they'd do this in the show. goes so well with their characters and situation! 😆

and aah! THE KISSS! <3 <3 How amazingly perfect WAS it?? ☺️

Raman's gulp! 🤣 << i could sooo see Karan Patel's face there! :P

Absolutely LOVED the OS and the fact that even after the kiss nothing changed :) they were back! LOL amazing!

NB IS A ROCKSTAR FOR MAKING YOU WRITE OUT AND OUT CLICHE AWKWARD ROMANCE! 😃

Meri request bhi poori karo? :( SUBBU. JEALOUSY. PLEEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!! LOL

Edited by serendipity. - 11 years ago

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: serendipity.
Can you give me a list of ALL the places i have to EDIT my comment on!??!?!!?!? 🤣
This one im editing AAJ HII! PAKKA! Subbu ki kasam!!! 🤣

Reeno, mera bhi number aayega kya ???

Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 11 years ago

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serendipity.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

^ Oh God! Yes Lucky, definitely!

Mujhe maaaf kardo! 🤣 promise aayega. 15th ko last paper hai 😳

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: serendipity.
^ Oh God! Yes Lucky, definitely!
Mujhe maaaf kardo! 🤣 promise aayega. 15th ko last paper hai 😳

arre phir rehne do... exams are MOST important... comments and reply chalte rahenge... Good luck dear😊

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exploringmyself

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

loved it... :) wish esa kuch ho :P but hoga nai :P

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Amazing one shot. I especially loved Raman's thoughts. You depicted his feelings incredibly well. It was really touching. I really loved how Raman loved that Ishita was worried for him. He was just basking in her care and concern. So sweet. And you also got their chemistry and passion bang on right. The accidental touches!! Uff!! So sensous yet not even remotely vulgar. And he kissed her to shut her up!!! Aaah!!! I so so so so so wish this could happen in the show!! It was just perfect!

Also I want to say, I love that Ishita lied to Ruhi about the thief and Raman. That is so typically Ishu. She indirectly taunted Raman and saved his face in front of his daughter.

I just loved how the story was perfectly balanced. Sweet, funny, emotional, passionate and extremely enjoyable to read. You write really really well. Kudos and please keep writing more. :-)