Those Awkward Moments - An IshRa OS [Based on last scene of 12/ 05]

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lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

nice.raman's reaction is always something unexpected 😉

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happenstance

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

I totally loved it! and first I'm just glad that I didn't start reading this at work or on my commute either😆 because i sure as hell would not have been able to suppress the grin i have right now on my face😳

I love the narrative in each of your OS's and the way you 'tap' into their inner feelings/turmoil is just brill. If only we could see this onscreen too!

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RamonaG

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

its awesomely well written 👍🏼
great one Aani ⭐️ keep it up ❤️

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli
omggg os...

res...

**hope i din break ur post** sorry cudn resist as u knw me well i HARDLY CAN CONTROL..🤣

--edited--

firstly omggg THANK U THANK U THANK UUU for this ROCKING OS u wrote on my req..!! see THIS is y i hv no shame in alwz requestin u to write OS as i knw end result will make me leave flauntin my BATEESI...😃😃😃...

haaaye such a sweet yet INTENSE PASSIONATE OS... tht KISS-i swear my heart skipped a beat...!! ☺️...

u r so soo perfect writer yaar...i ws lost lost lost in evry scene of them...!! n tht too this one AGAIN in typical show wale IshRa style...!!

Raman's monologue ws heart touchin...n i knw THIS is exact state of show waale Raman too...only diff wahan bechaara is NOT givn such monologues so ppl lik u n me make up for tht in our topics...😆😆...n say things on HIS BEHALF...😆😉...

super lovely OS aani...evn i ws smilin lik the two dhakkans were smilin at the end of ur OS..😃

Hey Nikki 😃

I am happy I didn't disappoint you and haq se besharmi kar yaar dost hote kis liye hai 😃

@blue - 😆😆😆 so true but if he said everything what would we write about and also... the fact he says a LOT of other things 😉makes up for the loss of his monologues cos between us I would take a 360 degrees comment any day over him mooning like a typical Romeo over Ishita 🤣🤣 that's what makes him Unique 😎😆😆

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan
Haaye Aani...

Disclaimer to laga deti. i wouldn't have started reading at work 😆

Jeez, if Ishra just getting wrapped up in a curtain is doing this to everyone, imagine how it'll be when... well, you know when 🤣

On a serious note, kudos... You've written something that is so evocative, but still did maintain that 'serious' touch of yours. In reality, this is what would have happened. No two attractive people living under the same roof, who have the legal and moral license to be intimate, can stay away from each other in such a scenario. They won't obviously show it on TV, so I'll read your OS again and be happy...😊

But to round it off, you HAD to bring the family back in, didn't you? You couldn't just let them linger in the awkward silence, or make something more off it. I was so disappointed 😉

LMAO Lucky sorry 🤣🤣 main bhool gayi ☺️😆😆

@red - what do you mean 😆

@blue - Thank you for saying this was evocative 😳 LOL believe me this is the most risque thing I have ever written so far... and that had me sooo nervous man but I soldiered on, seeing that this is the tip of the iceberg where IshRa seem to be concerned... they aren't even in love yet 😉 and I was so confused whether this was apt or not - you know there is a subtle line after all between being salacious and tawdry 😳😳 so the word calmed my nerves 😊 and of course this being an Indian TV show... though late night they would refrain from a lot of things even if BALH did go all the way ... though I wouldn't call that sexy... Ram Kapoor doesn't look sexy at all 😳 really but lets see what SP can have the nerve to show in the future and yep two people who are definitely attracted and married can actually let go off their inhibitions being lost in the moment - though they may be not in love 😳

@pink - 😆😆 I wasn't aiming for R rated to go all the way Lucky 🤣🤣 also I was staying true to the spoilers and the reality Hope someday I can make amends for disappointing you though 😆

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Indian_Isha
Wait!! You should write a book, Aani! 👏

Gosh, you just took me there, to their flat in Mayur vihar! You are such a pro, dude! 😃

Curtain wrap, cooked up like a scrumptious Chicken Tadka Wrap! 😆 Such a PG18 thing but you handled it with so much ease!

It was a soft vs hard battle, and but it was you who won the war buddy! 😉

Hey Thanks for the huge compliment Isha 😳 but I am not imaginative or creative with original characters so FFs hi theek hai 😆😆

@red- And that is the biggest thing an author can here - that a reader was transported and found themselves in the scene - though here it would be voyeurism 🤣

@blue - ☺️ thank you again

@pink -😲😲😲OMGGG 🤣🤣 shit man this ... this statement makes me feel like a third wheel somehow like I had a threesome with IshRa ☺️🤣🤣

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Maaneet099
oh mi gawddd! Aani I was hoping for an OS from you and here it is :D
That was perfectly crafted!
res for now :p

Thanks Madhu 😊

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Aani, I for one, am glad you took the plunge to write this 😊 It was well worth it

see ya in the next one...

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ABBY92
I loved this OS. All the awkward moments that somehow did stur up the feelings that Raman and Ishita have for each other. And the grand finale with Raman kissing Ishita to shut her up was awesome.

Thanks Abby 😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: SWAN123
You are so awesome! AND so quick how on earth do you find the time for all this!

BUT SO GLAD that you do 😳.

Keep them coming...
❤️

Thanks dear as for the time where there is a will 😳

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