Raas na aaya rehna dur - An IshRa OS (based on the last scene 08/05) - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

I have this weird habit. When I watch something, I constantly look for songs that suit the situation. Phir le aaya has always been my favouriate for Raman and Ishita. Specially since there have been many times Raman made a mistake and "Karte hain hum aaj qubool kya kije, ho gayi thi jo humse bhool, kya kije" fits like a glove.😆 Arijit Singh and Rekha Bharadwaj, are two of my favouriate singers. I think I have gushed a lot about the song.😳😆

Coming to your story, I loved how you retained some of the original scenes. I expected a lot from the precap and was a bit disappointed. The laughing part felt a little dragged that towards the end of the scene, I felt Karan and Divyanka's presence more than Raman and Ishita. Most of your imagination is turning out true like when Ishita came to comfort Sarika. I hope you don't mind what I am going to say now. Your characters talk a lot. Sometimes, things are better left unsaid.


Hey Sneha

this is one of my fav songs too and yep that line you mentioned so goes with IshRa... especially because Raman time and again ends up hurting her - on purpose or not.
And Arijit, Rekha have beautiful voices totally people I love to hear too.

@bold - true, it seemed more like a DivAn seg then an IshRa scene.

@red - 😆 no probs Sneha and while it is true things should remain unsaid a lot of times... talking a lot doesn't always mean you are saying what you want to or ought to as well 😳 At times for all the things we say we leave out whats most important - Raman says a lot here - but he doesn't ask her to come, not just because that's how it is in the show but because he cant assert his right over her yet, not in between the two of them, privately. Also I had this convo here because I think the kind of issue that they faced, things don't just go all hunky dory after that because of one sorry.

Also just because something is said its not always heard like Ishu didn't hear Raman admit the line Mera kya hota during riots in that phone-call scene or even if you hear things you are sometimes too lost or confused to understand especially with someone like Raman who changes the flow of the convo entirely - rem that scene post riots he compliments her at first, says all those good things that has her amazed and then... then he puts it all down the drain, on purpose by teasing her. 😳.

Plus I talk a LOT, you must have made out as much 😆 so that comes in my writing too ☺️

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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: EkPaheli


Hey Sneha

this is one of my fav songs too and yep that line you mentioned so goes with IshRa... especially because Raman time and again ends up hurting her - on purpose or not.
And Arijit, Rekha have beautiful voices totally people I love to hear too.

@bold - true, it seemed more like a DivAn seg then an IshRa scene.

@red - 😆 no probs Sneha and while it is true things should remain unsaid a lot of times... talking a lot doesn't always mean you are saying what you want to or ought to as well 😳 At times for all the things we say we leave out whats most important - Raman says a lot here - but he doesn't ask her to come, not just because that's how it is in the show but because he cant assert his right over her yet, not in between the two of them, privately. Also I had this convo here because I think the kind of issue that they faced, things don't just go all hunky dory after that because of one sorry.

Also just because something is said its not always heard like Ishu didn't hear Raman admit the line Mera kya hota during riots in that phone-call scene or even if you hear things you are sometimes too lost or confused to understand especially with someone like Raman who changes the flow of the convo entirely - rem that scene post riots he compliments her at first, says all those good things that has her amazed and then... then he puts it all down the drain, on purpose by teasing her. 😳.

Plus I talk a LOT, you must have made out as much 😆 so that comes in my writing too ☺️

Don't mind. But I agree. You do talk a lot. You have the need to write every single feeling, emotion, thought etc. It is a really good thing for your readers like me. Thing is I prefer smaller dialogues and more of the rest.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

Don't mind. But I agree. You do talk a lot. You have the need to write every single feeling, emotion, thought etc. It is a really good thing for your readers like me. Thing is I prefer smaller dialogues and more of the rest.😆


LOL I am an expressionist 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: EkPaheli


LOL I am an expressionist 😳


And I like that about you😳😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Haila that was some story. Loved it. The tense part the nok jok. Prefect illustration of what was going on. I wish we have another part to it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Your update definitely filled in the gaps for the episode

Thank you dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
wow Aani!
you touched every aspect the show missed. absolutely wonderful!

PS: I am still pending on your SSs will get to them soon :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Unreserved.
Hello there,
I apologise for the late reply.I have my exams in three days so I was exercising restraint.Well,nothing came of it.

But this piece is so sublime,I love it.

I love this song,every version of it.Coincidently ,I was listening to this very song when I chanced upon your OS.It was bound to happen though,I have it on loop .😳

The lyrics fit perfectly with the mood you've set in this fic.Kudos for that.

I loved how you inter-weaved your perspective into the original scene and managed to own it.I wasn't particularly miffed with the original scene but I like yours better.Its more rooted in their reality.

Where was that pillow scene?I never saw that in any of the segments.

The pillow scene and Raman's reaction -cute.

The little nuances-
Her silence perturbed him.
Him waiting for her to start the conversation,irking her which comes naturally to him now.
How her countenance changes at simmi's mention and his observation of it.
How he put forth what he felt without mincing his words or stuttering.
How she cleared his confusion and laid the facts there.
Her being right-This was not explored in the scene.
His irritation at not being the first one to know or to be confided in.
The entire conversation,really.
The last dialogue of his-Bringing in the balance.They both were on unfamiliar grounds and I loved how your RKB brought things back to familiarity.
The end was utter cuteness.

All these nuances makes reading this an experience.I felt them as I soaked in the words.I won't start a Mutual Admiration Front but your words are magical.
Keep doling out such awesomeness,please.😊


Edited by vidya29 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: oaz30

Haila that was some story. Loved it. The tense part the nok jok. Prefect illustration of what was going on. I wish we have another part to it.


thanks Oaz 😊 and sorry this is where it ends 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: priyavin

Your update definitely filled in the gaps for the episode

Thank you dear


thanks Priya 😊

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