Raas na aaya rehna dur - An IshRa OS (based on the last scene 08/05)

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Geeta.R
loved this... especiaaly the talk between them and then end omg i acctually couldnt stop laughing hehheehe
xx

thanks Geeta 😊

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BombayTroll

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Well aani no worries

Well I haven't watched many shows in my life and dont watch films this is only my second show where I am watching seriously and even the first one I watched seriously nbt wasn't a typical romantic show so was happy with this perhaps lack of experience in watching tv show helps

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sai14
Love this... This is the type of scene i expected when i saw the promo.. you made up for the void!! the ending was perfect. the whole story was in character for both of them.

thanks so much Sai, I am so happy to know I am not alone in this and that my version cheered you up and you felt this was IshRa... them for real😳 😊

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modernfamily

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Hi Aani! Thanks for writing this. It gave the much needed closure to yesterday's scene. Too cheesy and out of character for Raman. It was a mistake of poor editing that you rectified.

I wish they had the pillow scene which could have neutralised the sweetness. The way you wrote was how the scene was supposed to be, don't know why they rushed into things. I hope the CVs read your OS and learn from their mistakes.

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

See ya in the next one Aani

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: ThruMyEyez-Nita
Thank you so much for writing this. This is EXACTLY what I want to see between Ishita and Raman - a heartfelt conversation about their feelings about the situation that they have both been through. And I loved how you incorporated moments from the actual scene. This is how it should be done.

Thanks a lot Nita, it means a lot to me that I am getting this feedback, I was wondering about being too delusional or being too lost in my own head for a while but comments like the one you gave me make me feel better 😳😊 Thank you. 😃

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Shanig123
Aani your version is million times better . It was a total dissapoinment today except for the scene where he drags her to the room . They also need to address the SMS issue. That needs to be cleared .

thank you Shani for this comment it means a lot 😳 I was actually very happy about him dragging her to the room and even stating firmly to her family he wants to talk with his wife, privately!

Up to that point he felt and acted like the RKB I know and think... I understand... but when there were those smiles... too many of them I was like 😳 is this really YHM and IshRa or am I watching a show with the clones of DivAn here

Also I agree the SMS thing was brushed aside completely, even when that Perv brought it up! Urgh!

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ABI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

I totally agree with you. The scene yesterday with all those smiles felt out of place for both Ishita and Raman. I was expecting something like your OS to happen in the actual show but owh well. I'm happy that I got to read your OS and your thoughts were what I really wanted Raman and Ishita to say to each other after all the drama that had happened the past couple of days. Very well written !!

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: momb24
This is just great and how it should have been in the show. i hope cv at least think of adding a good convirsation between them if not now than very soon. thank you again for writing this.

thank you for saying this 😳 and I second you on the convo bit - they need to TALK - like for real on this matter, its not a trivial thing to neglect and move on, its HUGE and needs to be talked about more in depth, and Ishita has to show some signs of trauma, she was nearly raped a few hours ago! How is she smiling? I am not saying she has to be stuck on that forever but come on its a big deal woman, even for someone labeled as Jhansi ki Rani and Superwoman