Raas na aaya rehna dur - An IshRa OS (based on the last scene 08/05) - Page 7

Originally posted by: shalu79

Hi Anni,

how did i miss this😲

when did u post this OS.

i will read it peacefully later

Again u did it Anni.

just stole my heart👏.

was really expecting intense interaction betwn Ishra but poor me didn't get any of it. whatever part was shown in SBB/SBS was edited.

With such josh RKB took Ishu to bedroom,n i was like wow kuch toh jabardast hone wala hai.

But meri sari umeedo pe paani phir gayi.

but story which u carried forward was better than my fantasy. loved it.

I mean this was serious issue if not in this situation that when n how he will open up.

He know that what she has gone thru n what all simmi n toshi accused her of n above all what he did after clearing all this mess I know he was angry as she was going back to Amma's place but still he asked is she happy that she got justice n what abt Simmi. he does know that she was worried abt Simmi thats why she first told abt this incident to Simmi n toshi n after that also she was trying to make him understand as he has family. One side he praise her n other side question her. What will that poor girl will do. But thats how our Raman Kumar Bhalla is. When he is angry or frustrated he become unreasonable. N most of the time he is charming when he is unreasonable n makes his character more realistic.n CVS are also taking liberty with this character as they know that we love this character n his complex nature.

I really wanted Ishu broach that subject(why he accused her What abt Simmi).

But in ur story I got that. I loved their interactions how she make him undersatnd there was no solution to fix all this mess other than what happened.

and ur end was perfect Raman Kumar Bhalla back in his element with his attitude n witty remark.

Loved it.

Thank u for writing

Love,

Shalu

Originally posted by: vidya29

Unreserved.
Hello there,
I apologise for the late reply.I have my exams in three days so I was exercising restraint.Well,nothing came of it.


Hey Vidya😃 no sweat and best of luck for your exams as for the restraint 😆 I know IF and IshRa are hard to resist as it is but the combo is deadly

But this piece is so sublime,I love it.

thank you 😳

I love this song,every version of it.Coincidently ,I was listening to this very song when I chanced upon your OS.It was bound to happen though,I have it on loop .😳

The lyrics fit perfectly with the mood you've set in this fic.Kudos for that.

Aww that is so sweet and I love all the versions too its such a beautiful soothing song but my fav is the Arijit Singh one😳

I loved how you inter-weaved your perspective into the original scene and managed to own it.I wasn't particularly miffed with the original scene but I like yours better.Its more rooted in their reality.

Again, Thank you 😳 I am miffed with it but writing this made me feel better - the scene we saw seemed out of place to me - esp because of the end, this wasn't a lover' tiff here they had which was cutely solved - this was a serious issue at hand and it just ENDED- between two people who are yet to have a cordial chat that made it seem so bizarre to me I swear

Where was that pillow scene?I never saw that in any of the segments.

It was in one of the segs, I cant rem which one right now exactly which one was it - we are getting so many of them from so many sources my brain is fuzzy😳

The pillow scene and Raman's reaction -cute.

that just came to me 😆😆 they have had fights but this was childishness because she is pissed off so he was surprised and then almost chuckling 😆😆

The little nuances-
Her silence perturbed him.
Him waiting for her to start the conversation,irking her which comes naturally to him now.
How her countenance changes at simmi's mention and his observation of it.
How he put forth what he felt without mincing his words or stuttering.
How she cleared his confusion and laid the facts there.
Her being right-This was not explored in the scene.
His irritation at not being the first one to know or to be confided in.
The entire conversation,really.
The last dialogue of his-Bringing in the balance.They both were on unfamiliar grounds and I loved how your RKB brought things back to familiarity.
The end was utter cuteness.

I believe IshRa are settled into this zone now which makes them fight as easy as breathing - its the things that come unexpectedly from the other that throw them off the loop and so I wanted this scene to have that facet alas since it didn't I wrote it 😳 especially Raman' outburst at her when he got Perv arrested - he wasnt angry just at the situation but because things had to come to this - and because he... he felt incompetent in protecting her which was also something Raman from the show admitted. It was his outburst at a kind of failure which is unforgivable, unpardonable, esp this Raman who hates losing.

All these nuances makes reading this an experience.I felt them as I soaked in the words.I won't start a Mutual Admiration Front but your words are magical.
Keep doling out such awesomeness,please.😊

thanks once again and I hope IshRa continue to inspire us to keep the club going. 😊

Originally posted by: whitelily

Great os

Originally posted by: Autumn.

wow!! how I wished this was shown in the episode. This all talk between Ishra after that incident. Kudos to your writing.

Originally posted by: btalwar

I must say you are a gifted writer ... I have read you other posts too and I think you one of the best writers on this forum ...

Hi Bhanu thanks a lot for your kind words its a pleasure to hear from a silent reader 😊

I also always felt that this scene particular scene could have been way better ... am sure of the creatives would have thought a li'l more about this particular scene ... this one would be among one of the most memorable conversation of Ishra .. Alas ... nothing can be changed now ... except the fact that we have some brilliant minds like you who can grant our wishes and put us in beautiful Ishra land.

tell me about it the editing killed it man! I dont see why they had to rush the scene when it was so crucial to the story plus it involved the leads! We got long useless scenes of Perv ogling Ishita and his gross monologues but with IshRa they edited it 😡

I liked the fact Ishita was angry from Raman (while she was also angry in the serial, it was not depicted. She was just crying and giving him silent treatment). She was hurt. When a woman marries a man, she lends her life to him, completely trusts him to take care of her and protect her from every evil eye. Therefore, in this case, Raman had hurt her feelings by doing exactly the opposite. I agree, he acted normally and cleared everything later on but still somewhere it will

hurt. The CV's conveniently forgot it and did not highlight her anger one bit. So thanks for correcting what they missed on.

exactly this wasnt a misunderstanding they had that the cvs brushed off the whole thing so easily that oh now the mess is clear and we know what went kaput it was a HUGE thing and she had a legitimate reason to stay mad at Raman, let him know what she felt when he let her down. Let him know it was unnecessary of him to confirm to his family their marriage isnt consummated but she was all smiles in no time and the CVs just butchered that scene for me

And your narrations is bang on. You immediately feel that this is what should have happened in actuality.

thanks Bhanu :)

Dear really awesome and look forward to your future updates also.

Cheers

Bhanu

hope to hear from you on my other works in the future too :)