Raas na aaya rehna dur - An IshRa OS (based on the last scene 08/05)

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momb24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

This is just great and how it should have been in the show. i hope cv at least think of adding a good convirsation between them if not now than very soon. thank you again for writing this.

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan
Aani...

I was hoping that you would write after today's episode (I was a bit scared, yes thats the word).

Phir le aaya dil... this one never leaves my playlist!

- Your Author's note deserved to be a post in itself 😊
- There is a large part of your story (and I think you know which one), that I would like to have been integrated into the show. If they even show half of it tomorrow as a flashback, I'll be content.
- There is one point you have brought about in your story that I dont remember reading anywhere. The fact that Ishita felt humiliated. Its easy for us to say what she should have done, what she could have done. But the inner shame is something no one will ever comprehend unless they are a victim.
- Another aspect of Raman's brutal explosion yesterday that we saw was his distraught that his wife did not trust him enough. Wonderfully eplored by you.

- I have always praised the content, emotions and educational value of your posts for me. But here's a new one - creativity... your story was so darned surreal. And I think this is the biggest compliment I am going to pay you tonight 😊 Seriously, there is nothing left for me to say.

I am restricting the length of my Ramayan reply ONLY because I am in the middle of writing another OS (this episode unsettled me that much too).

I am glad though that I took a break from that and found your topic. Kal subah padhti, to waapas office mein ek ghanta aise hi chalaa jaata... I am periliously close to being fired 😆

As always, a pleasure to read your posts... and hope you catch some sleep

Hey Lucky 😊

@red - scared that I would write or that I wont? 🤔 😆

And this song is always on my playlist too its so soothing I tell ya, whenever i am in a mood to unwind and just listen to good music for a while all by myself - I play this at least once 😳

@blue - it was a long one again wasnt it? aadat se majboor 😆😆 jokes apart, I needed to say that before this OS was read just so I could have that out of my system - the scene really disappointed me

@pink - If I am not mistaking then I think I do 😳 - the convo that could and should have been there 😒 I was so hoping for some discussion not just a sorry and smiles 😵 and so that came across here - sometimes you just need to live your dreams - I did mine by writing this 😳

@purple - Like you said Lucky people - even Raman felt she should have talked to him first or at least once in private - but is it that easy? Especially with a man who makes it clear to you time and again you are not his wife only the mother of his child. She couldn't even open up to her own sister - and of course - such incidents, even though a victim knows she is blameless, it doesn't matter about the way it makes her feel - dirty and foul. That;s also somehow a residual effect of this tragedy - the lingering filth of it that doesn't abandon a girl - something that is also a part of one of the PTSD symptoms we talked about in my other OS that day - shame is very real in victims of harassment.

@orange - that came across by the lines mouthed by RKB - it wasn't just his anger at the situation but also at himself, he felt for the first time how very fragile and complicated is his marriage with Ishita for the first time around - he is expected to be there for her by everyone, even her - but he isn't even trusted enough to be let in, how can he do that then - be there if he is left in the dark, is ignorant of the issues at hand. Which made him realize and feel that perhaps for Ishita this relationship isn't as important too as it is for him - he has begun addressing her as Meri Biwi repeatedly for the world to hear even when she isn't around, in Mumbai he clarified it to Ashok that this marriage might have started out as a deal but its a relationship now. Ishita not confiding in him was a blow to him post that statement - it made him feel he is the only one in this thing far more then she is, then is expected off him and that hurt! 😳

@maroon - ☺️ thank you

@teal - 😆😆 no problem always a pleasure to read your Ramayan 😆 and I hope I dont disturb you at your job anymore 😳, thanks once again for the comment and for wishing me some sleep. Had some at last like at around 5 in the morning uff

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: serendipity.
mine

Waiting 😳

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: CharmGal
Aani, you have shown that this is how it should been done.

I am a huge fan of Ishra but was disappointed with the bedroom scene. I think there are so many ways they could have made or used that moment to make it more realistic, emotional and powerful. Since this would be the first real conversation that Ishra are having after the pervmeet fiasco. However the makers went for a quick apology and then make a comedy cute scene which I felt this is not appropriate considering everything Raman and Ishita had been through.

Thanks for treating us a wonderful Os. 😊

thank you so much Mary for saying this, I am so glad to know I am not the only one who felt the scene could have been better, could have done away with some of the things and added a little to it than what we happened to witness on screen.

Like you rightly said, this is the first real convo between a man and his wife after such a big ordeal how were they laughing and blushing in like a matter of moments 😕 especially when they aren't even cordial with each other yet because they want to be... and Raman finally went to apologize to Ishita because Ruhi made him do it - this Sirf Ruhi ke liye is getting old and not being cute anymore 🥱

I wish the makers had opted for something different then the cute comedy - well I dont mind it completely but that was a bit too much in this scene for me

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sweetshab
beautifully written

it fills the gap wat CV left unattended...clearing thing was their priority ...ejich cv totally forget to to think about ...nd their cuteness

fantastic wrk

Thanks Shab and LOL at the CVs forgot may be they were drained by the high voltage drama they so wrote this was their way of cheering themselves up 😕

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Aani... scared that you won't :)

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan
Aani... scared that you won't :)

Ah that's better thanks for clarifying 😆I was confused because it seems I am bombarding the forum left, right and center with my OS's and posts sometimes 😳

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: --mancityfan--
Well

Today I liked the bedroom scene

It was apt since he had already said what he wanted to in outburst yesterday and they are not in love atleast on surface to say mushy things and I feel she had already accepted what he had said but was just waiting for him to come take back

Now coming to your os

Aani

Well written like always

And like I always say we get to see what we won't in show

And I liked it

thanks Vyas for liking what I wrote and like I said I have nothing against those who liked the scene - in my opinion though I was left asking for more as a viewer and an ardent fan and follower of this complicated couple 😳

While I do agree Raman said all that he had too when he had that outburst and in a way he was right from his POV but this issue needed some discussion as per me, something more and this was my way of getting that. 😳