Separation Track: Collection of 7 OSes - Page 10

Originally posted by: Indian_Isha

Superb job Lucky! I was literally in that party hall! Loved the way you had used her recent real life party look in the scene! Raman babu ki bolti band! Loved it Lucky, loved it! Continue soon!

Isha, my dear... thank you... I hope I justified your song selection 😊

Originally posted by: shalu79

Wow Lucky very beautiful.

Loved it

N also loved ur idea of linking each update with song

Pls update soon

Thanks for writing n also for PM 😊

Thank again for following these stories 😊

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

I love the song and I love this installment😃

Thanks for your continuous encouragement 😊

Originally posted by: afsanaanjum

Heyya. I thought it would be a continuation of the previous parts but you dealt it beautifully by stopping somewhere else by leaving the rest for imagination.👏
Love this new chapter. Amazing work. Loving the unpredictability of the feminine self and the male being traumatized by the response.😳
Looking forward to your next one.👍🏼

Thanks for your kind words 😊

Continuation would take some hard work and focus 😆 Its just easier to write different scenarios, thats why I am doing it this way... The next time I get an idea for a longer plot, i will do the continuation again.

lovely... plz plz upd8 soon :)

so sweet raman hired a bodyguard n he doesnt want her to feel uncomfortable. n good thing u made her wear a designer saree like she wore at deepikas wedding ,not dress. the dresses will probs remind her of parmeet as he grabbed her wen she was wearing dat green dress. plus d comments of simmi.

very nice..well written...😊

Originally posted by: creativeFF

so sweet raman hired a bodyguard n he doesnt want her to feel uncomfortable. n good thing u made her wear a designer saree like she wore at deepikas wedding ,not dress. the dresses will probs remind her of parmeet as he grabbed her wen she was wearing dat green dress. plus d comments of simmi.

@bold thanks for pointing that out. I avoided reference to the dress and why she did not wear it. that was deliberate. This part was more about Raman's feelings about what happened with her...

awww sweet update...