Separation Track: Collection of 7 OSes - Page 12

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MERI BOLTI BAND LUCKY! AWESOME! PERFECT SETUP, BACKGROUND AND LIGHTING! Writing in CAPS as I wanted to shout this out!!!

Thud once again have fainted and landed in Ishra Land. Oh my the last two posts have been fantastic, saw OS 5 last afternoon had just finished explaining a grammar class and was waiting for students to finish classwork. You have a fantastic way of writing and each time it hits home and we discover another facet of the two.

Originally posted by: Indian_Isha

MERI BOLTI BAND LUCKY! AWESOME! PERFECT SETUP, BACKGROUND AND LIGHTING! Writing in CAPS as I wanted to shout this out!!!

Aapki bolti band ho gayi ??? High praise for my work indeed 😆

Thanks dear, as always. Your words lift me up 😊

first n foremost...the title is apt...before readin the os,i thought this is frm tht fardeen khan film...bt when i read the os-i understood u meant same lines wali song bt diff film..!!

OS-AGAIN loved the reality element at one part..😉..!!

overall lovely os..!!

Loved it Lucky.

Originally posted by: oaz30

Thud once again have fainted and landed in Ishra Land. Oh my the last two posts have been fantastic, saw OS 5 last afternoon had just finished explaining a grammar class and was waiting for students to finish classwork. You have a fantastic way of writing and each time it hits home and we discover another facet of the two.

And wahoo this morning as I woke up spotted Os 6. Fantastic way to start the day. Love the way you present the inner thoughts of the two,as much as I love watching the two on screen I would have rather it be with a plotline like yours.

Looking forward for the next post. If you have written on other forum please pm me links would love to read more of your work.

Shari

Hey Shari,

Thanks for your kind words.. 😊
I havent been this inspired by/committed to any other serial before YHM. So never wrote anything before. I have written an SS and a separate OS before, you can look for my user name on this page,the links are there. The SS is closest to my heart.😊
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3881862

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

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Lucky I sooo wanted to ask you how did you not name this Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho and you wrote that in the end - boy I can imagine what it must have taken to shy away from that.

This has to be my fav OS so far of all the ones- seriously I can so so see Raman' dry sense of humor rubbing off on Ishita - with her replying to him about ceramic caps. 🤣 Crap that would make my day to see them have a conversation like this 😆

And the cherry on the cake Raman is so thrilled by her replies too 😛 he is used to this woman' comeback and wit and fencing with her isnt he. The war of words and wits - no wonder after all a dummy like Shagun couldn't have let him have this kind of pleasure - after all with Shagun this is the most apt response he could have

"I would challenge you to a battle of wits, but I see you are unarmed!"
" William Shakespeare

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And them being locked up and him understanding her - the fragile state of mind she still must be in - aww Raavan Kumar is a big softie at heart. Chooo Chweet. 😆

Keep it coming and since you are taking suggestions might I put up a list of a few songs - heck I am no asking for permissions from friends is it? 😎

So here they are - use em as you like - random stuff I NEVER delete from my playlist

Aur Mohabbat hai - main prem ki deewani hoon

Dil ko tumse pyaar hua - RHTDM

Hum kiss galli jaa rahe hai - Atif

Kissi nazar ko tera - Ilzaam?? 😕

Aashiqui 2 songs all of them man I cant choose one 😳

Is my RKB ( I mean meri story waala RKB) getting too sweet ??? wait, thats not the one I fell in love with. I have to change him a bit next time. To make him more normal 😆

Songs - I must admit I have never heard the first one. As it turns out, I dont have any idea as of now. So let me listen to all your suggestions first and see if anything lights that bulb... 😊

Apt quote as always... and THANK YOU again for your lovely comments Aani 🤗

It took so much of my Willpower to refrain from reading this till I was back home from UNI. Reading using my phone is a pain in the ass because, neither does it allow me to like nor comment... It's always in PMSING mode when I visit IF. So today, I was determined to get back home and read your OS from my lappie, so that I can comment... As, it always skips my mind if I'm reading from my phone... BUT here I am, FINALLY...😃

Originally posted by: modernfamily91

Wow! It was worth the wait. Just woke up! Opening IndiaForums is the first thing I did. Loved the awkwardness between the two and how they're trying so hard to make conversation.

Your order last night practically forced me to write this one... 😆

I am glad you liked it, really... 😊