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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very beautiful Naddiya.
Will wait for next update

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"Maa why bhai is sitting in car " Romi walked in at 11 & asked

"ja kar pachoo iss se " Toshi ji angrily replied " aur bol do , agar 5 mins mein upper nahi aaiya i will lock the door " she said angrily


"maa bhai na bola kardo " Romi said as it was his 5th time he has walked down to ask him to come up

Toshi ji locked the door " koi nahi khula ga " she walked with the key to her bedroom



Ishita was in Trisha room to avoid Raman & pass time she sat there , it was 11:30 when she walk back in her bedroom Ruhi & Mihika were fast a sleep , Mutthu bark as it saw her

" oh Ruhi didn't took you out " she tied its collar & seek out of home " because of Ravan kumar it as to suffer " she look at Bhalla's home & murmur she went down

"lagta hai biwi na ghar se nikal diya hai " Ishita over heard the guards conversation ,ignore them & passed " people really have free time to gossip" she walked & saw Raman car " haar gaya na RK" she without looking at car passed . she hardly took few step she turn back " Raman " got shocked to see him sitting in car " murugan " she rush to car he was fast asleep sweating badly "Raman" she knocked at the window he didnot respond ,she opened the door ,his head slide out ,she quickly support him made his head rest next to her " Raman get up " she whisper & look around saw guards smiling & gossiping "Raman utha " she pat is cheek wipe all his sweat & opened his shirt button " ziddi na hota , it is so hot in hear " she give air with her duppata ,"Raman lagta hai koi Ashok se deal kar ka soai hai " shakes him from shoulder with full force

"kya " he opened his eyes & look at her

" why you are sleeping here ? with all closed windows" she opened his side

" tum aagai " he sit straight & scratch his arm "machar tha"

" mein jana ka leya nai aai " she left him & moved away

" phir " he look at her & asked

" Raman don't act like kid , ja kar araam se soai " she took a step back

" Ishita untill you will go with me i will not go upstairs " he rested back with the seat & closed his eye

" Ruhi is asleep , time dekha ha aap na" she shouted

" i will not eat you if you will come alone with me " he smirk & open the other side of door , Ishita look around , she ask the guard to look after mutthu , she walk to the other side & sat

" chala " bang the door

" good " he smiled & started the car , she look at him it was stuffy in car ," aap sach mein pagal hai kya , it is 39C today "

" all is your fault , pehla aa jati " he drives to the near market

" why the restaurant close ?" he checked

" it is 12 " she look away

" ab kya karo " he said

" ghar chala " she asked him

" nahi first we will have something" he irritatedly said

" aap bacho wali harkat kyun kar raha hai " she shouted " aap ko heat stroke hojai ga " she became worried for him , he didn't reply drives to other market ,Ishita felt sorry for him & smiled at his cute act

" icecream wala " she saw a hawker

" yar i am hunger since yesterday i didn't had anything , Ice cream se pait nahi bhara ga " he murmur

" kya " she in shock look at him , he had parked car went to the hawker , his shirt was all wet from back ,he was bending in the freezer , she step out of car & stand next to it

" Ishita he does not have black currant , he has just one cone, let me find at some other place " he waved in front of her

"it is ok Raman" she felt like hugging him , grab his arm "we can share it " she took it from his hand & open it

"la " he look at her as she offer him , he stared at her " Raman it is hot , if you stand like this it will melt " she brought near his mouth , he took a bite , the weather changed , with breeze her dupatta was just following the wind & fluttering slightly , took a bite & offer him , he rested his head with the car roof & look at the sky " Raman" she poked him " hmmm" he took a bite & with his finger wiped her lips ,she look away shyly her hairs brush with his face

" ab ghar chal " she made him finish the remaining

"why are you bored ?" he asked

" no " she " aap ghar chala ka khana kha la " she whispered

" everyone must be asleep by know " he took a deep breath, she turn towards him

" i will give you " she without waiting walked to the driving seat as she could sense he was lethargic , he shakes his head & seated next to her in silence they drive back home

"Ishita i will manage you go & rest " he said as they reached up stairs , she didnot reply waited for him to go in , he tries to open door , but it was lock from inside

"yeh " he look back at her , she moved away from door & asked him to walk in

" Maa has locked it " he said


Ishita didn't said anything she walked to the kitchen, & hunt the fridge , quickly micro it & walked back with the tray , he was sitting staring at her

"bhai " Trisha walk out her room

" sorry we woke you " Ishita said

" oh bhabi i was awake " she smiled at her

" bhai aap na bhabi ka haath ka khana missed kiya " she teased him

" hmmm" he smiled

" you will stay here " she asked as Ishita pour water for him

" we will sleep in lounge you rest in your room " Raman said

" come on, you both take my bedroom , i am going in Mihika " she without waiting walked to the bedroom, they look at each other .



in bedroom


Raman walk out after shower " i have no problem, i will sleep in car , as he look at the narrow bed & Ishita

"close light " she turn on other side , Raman walk to bed & rest on other side of it , he look at her back

"thank you " he whisper , she didn't reply " are you asleep ?" he lean forward to check her, she wanted to avoid him as she knew if she will talk to him , she will cry , she tightly closed her eyes

" sogai " he removed her curls " sorry Ishita , i wanted to say so many things but don't have courage , from where i should start " he caress her cheek" i just wanted to show i am with you ,you should't be scared" he kissed her cheek where Simmi slapped her . Ishita who was holding herself suddenly turn & wrap her arms around him back , it was so sudden he didn't realised he hug her back ,she shattered in his arms

Edited by naddiya26 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Omg loved it😃Update soon plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Wow it was awesome.I loved their sweet moments.Ishita panic attack seeing raman at that condition n raman's cute stubborness was adorable.Finally,Ishita broke down.Itne pyar se manaega to kaun gussa reh paega 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update!!!! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Part 4 was cherry on the cake.Loved the feelings of ishu for raman and him on the other hand concerned about her.awesome update.pls continue.👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Owh God, Raman actually waited that long in the car with that heat just for Ishita. It was so cute the way he still insisted that she get in the car with him and later on when Ishita shared the ice cream with him. The end part was beautiful. I could literally imagine Raman caressing Ishita's cheek as he told her that he is with her and the way Ishita just hugged him even though she was pretending to be asleep, I'm so anxious for the next chapter now !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Awsum update
i like d last scene
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Reserved!
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P.S Will try to edit soon. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
wow such an amazing story...loved it..specially ruhiz intervening...update soon

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