SS on current track(chapter 5 at 12)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter 2

chapter 3

chapter 4

chapter 5


Raman walked in bedroom after the hectic day , he wanted to sleep at once as his head was aching , he drop himself in bed , he closed his eyes , had a flash back where Simi slapped her & she fall down on sofa " Ishita " he murmur & sat , he look around the room it was empty , in frustration he get off bed , he was thirsty , he check the jug which was empty " pani kyun nahi rakha Ishita na " he closed his eyes " tablet , i must have pain killer " he searched his drawer but couldn't find it " kabhi koi cheeze apni jhaga per mila gai " he look around saw first aid box at her bedside table , " ishita had sleeping pill last night " ,he he finds out as he search for tablet ,he sat right there " i was talking to her , she not once asked me to close why,she behaved stranged " he tries to connect the things while sitting at her side , when he drowsy off he don't remember



Ishita turn as Ruhi & Mihika had stopped murmuring she look at Ruhi she was curling around Mihika in sleeping , & Mihika was moving her ,Ishita at once pull Ruhi back to her " Papa don't mind Ruhi " she run her fingers in her hairs & recollected how she sleeps with Raman & he never move her , she kissed her forehead & warp her arm around her " mera bacha " she remember how Ruhi made them sleep holding each other hand . a pain full smile appear on her face



next morning


Raman was reading paper when Ruhi walked in " good morning " she smiled at everyone , Raman smiled at her

" you are not ready for school " he kissed her & asked

" papa my uniform is here i am here to get it " she walk to her bedroom to fetch it , she waved everyone & walked out

" beti hamrai hai per " Toshi ji wanted to say something when he showed her his eyes


Ruhi again walk back " oh mein Ishi ma ka purse la kar jana tou bhool gai " she walked to bed room

" khud nahi aa sakti " Toshi ji stopped in middle as Ruhi walked back

" dadi please muhje ko mil nahi raha , dhood do " she asked Toshi ji

"nuakar nahi hoon teri Ishi ma ki " she said & made face

" Ruhi come papa will find it " he throw the paper & walked back in bedroom both Ruhi & Raman searched , he found it under bed

" Papa " she wanted to say something , he sat on floor & stretched his arm & taken it out

" Ruhi next time if you want any thing ask Papa " he pat her face

"ok " she twinkle her eyes " Papa you too come at Pati place " she said while going out

He shakes his head & rub his forehead " Kya huwa papa " she stopped & asked

" head ache you go " he said & walk other side

" Ishi ma ko bhi ho raha hai" she said worriedly

" hmm give this to your Ishi ma " he gave her a tablet

Ruhi " i will tell her Papa gave this " Ruhi said

" no " he at once reacted " you give this without saying anything " he dropped him self on sofa " Ravan Kumar na di I will not take " She imitated Ishita, Raman smiled

"shatan ki khala jao " he smiled at her & ask her to go " yahan kaise ko coffee banai bhi nahi aati , i can't ask Ishita " he murmur Ruhi listened him , she ran out to Iyer place

" Ishi ma chalo yeh khelo " she hold Ishita palm & placed the medicine

" yeh kaise na di " Ishita asked her

"jab bhi aap ko daard hota hai aap yeh khati ho" she roll her eyes & said

" oh " Ishita kissed her she felt his cologne ,she left her mug & walked to bed room " Ruhi ki wajha se mein aaj Raman ko kyun feel kar rahi hoon " she tries to make self calm


Ruhi look around she with Ishita mug seek out & ran to Raman

"Papa yeh lo " she waved the cup in front of him

Raman in shocked look at her & mug " papa pee lo ,it will get cold " she said

" who gave you this ?" he asked & grab the mug

" uff Papa " she had a facepalm " aap peo na " she forced him to drink as he took a sip she started giggling

"Kya " he took other sip

" Ishu ma ki lipstick lag agai " she clapped her hand

Raman got up & look at himself in mirror , at his lower lips there was a mark of lipstick ,he look at he mug ,he saw mark "Ruhi tum yeh Ishi ma ki " he look back but she was gone ,he could hear her giggle , he again look at himself ,& wipe his lips ,he angrily kept the cup , a fake smile appear on his lips , he picked up & drank the remaining as it ease his ache


At Iyer place


" where is my coffee ?" Ishita asked

Ruhi narrowed her eyes & look at her , Ishita look at her " ghum "with hand she made gesture

"Ghum " Ishita asked her ,she whisper something in Mihika ear , Mihika look at her in shock , Ruhi giggle

" coffee " Ishita asked again

" woh mein na Ravan kumar ko da di " she said & started eating her cereal

"Kya " Ishita look at her

" Ishi ma Papa ka lips per aap ki lipstick lag gai thi " she giggle

Ishita in shock look at everyone , Mihika & Trishia started laughing

" agar mein aap ko bolti ka papa ka sar mein daar ha & he wants coffee from you hand tou aap bolti

Ravan kumar ko bolo neelo se banwal la " she imitated her "so i gave him your"


Ishita smiled at her cute naughtiness



this can be a short SS if you guys comment whole heartily
writing this as want all these scene where they both realised they need each other
Edited by naddiya26 - 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful do continue
It would be great to read it:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Ps nadi apne post kiya ha i loved ur all work ill edit my comments 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was cute ruhi baby i actually love you for this trick
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful start
Both IshRa missing each other
Aww cutie lie ruhi she made raman have ishu's coffee
Loving it
Please make this into Ss
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Naddiya wow yaar it was very romantic Ishita felt his cologne n he was drinking her coffee uffitne ache idea kahan se aate hain plz continue soon looking forward to it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it.little ruhi always plays cupid.she won't ever let them apart.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG ...she smelt his cologne😆
This is simply wow...loved it. And you should send this OS to BAlaji...pls mail it to them and tell them to show it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome dear!!!
Ruhi...so cute and naughty!!!
Definitely an SS!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i must say you are very imaginative.. how can you think such a good story in jus 1 day .. and whatever you write is so precise and accurate.. u use the way how a character speaks. like ruhis uff papa..

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