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Posted: 11 years ago
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omgg wht a high point u ended the update...rockin update..cant wait to read next one
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Loved it .. Naddiya I so want it to happen raman gets so tensed about ishita that he couldn't eat.. and the end omg I got goosebumps reading it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Nadiya...this is NOT an update but a glimpses...jaldi karo and update please ...and pleas epm.me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Ishita who was holding herself suddenly turn & wrap her arms around him back , it was so sudden he didn't realised he hug her back ,she shattered in his arms
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😲 ☺️ so unexpected...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
loved it.. plz upd8 soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful the way u express each n every detail in ur story is awesome if u furthur wanna add something thn plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it to read it, wonderful scene creation
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Posted: 11 years ago
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" Parmeet act hurt me , but your words hurt me the most, you didn't bother to ask me once to stay back" she sobbed , he didn't said a word as he knew his reaction has shattered her , " jo baat srif hamari thi ab sab ko pata hai , what everyone will think , i am a babysitter , who you can change any day " she moved his arm which he wrapped around her waist

" I understand what you mean to say " he removed her hairs. & wipe her tears" i myself was stunned to hear that, I am really sorry" he was embarrassed

"sorry se sab wapis nahi aa sakta" she tries to free herself but he tighten his grip " my amma has thousand questions can you tell her that i am just Ruhi mom , whom you didn't even bother to stop,i understand we don't have relation " she moved her face other side " now even we act & tries to say we are happily married couple, they will figure out , i have lost the respect among my sibling, i felt so bad when mummy ji wish for more grand child ,i really felt helpless, even i talked to jiju how to fulfil her wish, how i will face him , what he will think of me , without relation i was wishing " she sobbed

"Ishita " he was not getting words to console her

"kya Ishita " she turn towards him " you were the first person i called to tell , even when i was arrested i called you ,aap phone pick na kara tou bhi kasoor mera hai " she hit him on his bare chest ,he smiled at her act

" am i telling you a joke " she became angrily, he shakes his heads

"Ishita baat suno " he tries to speak

" ab kyun suno , iss din aik dafa bhi nahi bola " she said

" bus yeh koi aur bhi gilaa Shikwa hai " he smiled

"aap phir haasa " she tries to remove his hand from her waist ,he moved himself & curl his fingers in her hairs

"aap " she in surprise look at him

" bolta tou kya tum aur woh sab meri baat sunta ?" he said seriously & pull her close" i wanted to hold your arm & say to your Amma you are not allowed to take my wife , i wanted to slap back Simmi , i wanted to hug you when i saw you behind bars " he paused " i failed " he took a deep breath there was a silence in room "what you think i am able to disgust all this ? since yesterday i gathering all the evidence to bring back my wife to her home " he kissed her forehead ,she closed her eyes " sleep without fear your Ravan Kumar is here " he look at her ,as she smiled & brush her cheek next to his shoulder , he clench her more tightly




In morning


"Muruguan aaj Ishita clinic nahi jai gai kya " Amma walked in bedroom to wake her , "Ishita " she pull blanket from Trisha face she placed her hand on her face & ran out " Trisha Ishita kahan hai" she saw mr Iyer coming in worried with mr Bhalla " Madhu Raman ghar mein nahi hai " Mr Iyer said as he saw his wife

"Ishita bhi nahi hai " she in shock look at them

" Raman & Ishita cars are there in parking lot " Mr Bhalla said

"mera beta kahan hai " Toshi ji asked mrs Iyer

"meri beti kahan hai " mrs Iyer pointed at her & asked

"Raman raat ko Ishita ka wait kar raha tha " Toshi ji said

"ha tou Ishita na bola tha ka woh nahi aa rahi " Mrs Iyer said

"ishi ma papa " Ruhi look at her grand parents , they look at each other & then at Ruhi who had just woke up

" Ruhi " mrs Iyer & Toshi ji said together & smiled at each other




in bedroom


Raman & Ishita woke up with the noise " Raman let me go & tell them we are here " she tries to free herself

" let them find us" he tighten his grip & brush his chin with her nape

"Raman they will wake whole neighbourhood "Ishita push him away , he look at her

"yeh tumhara parents sona bhi nahi daita " he jump out of bed

"Kya bola aap na mera parents , aap ki mummy ji kai bhi awaz to hai" she grab his arm & pull him he lost his balance & fall back on bed on her it make loud noise




" Madhu yeh kya huwa " Mr Iyer asked Mrs Iyer ,both walked in direction of sound mr & Mrs Bhalla follows them

"Madhu iss room se awaz ai hai " Mr Iyer said & try to peep in

" chor hai shayad " Toshi murmur

" dadi thief" Ruhi asked & turn the handle the door was wide open

" aye Raba " Toshi ji closed her eye & placed her hand on Bhalla ji eyes

" Muruguan "Mrs Iyer closed her eyes & placed at Mr Iyer they quickly closed the door



" chor nahi hai Ishi ma & papa hai " Ruhi shouted but her both grand parents walk away avoiding eye contact with each other




" Raman yeh kya batammezi hai " she pushed him away from her " i told you at night to lock the door " she feel ashamed as their parent saw them in awkward position

" first of all you asked me to close light , & secondly you pulled me " he naughtily smiled

" uff how i will face them all, shhhi " she sat & hold her head

"you are my wife , why you are so ashamed " he smiled laid to rest

" Raman " she slap on his bare back

" i solved your problem, you should say thanks to me " he with close eyes said

"what " she look at him

"that we don't have relation ?" he winked at her

" aik tou kapra bhi nahi tha , & you were smelling like hell" she look at him in his boxers shorts

"you are my wife & i can stay with you as i want " he pull her arm she lost balance but she grab the bed head

"Aap bhi na" she throw pillow at him , he smiled & turn other side to sleep , Ishita look at him

"he is right after this they will never question me " she shyly smiled & recollected their awkward position.




ending it here as everything is cleared between them , hope you guys like it will be back some other story


Edited by naddiya26 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
aww PERFECT ending nadz..TOTALLY loved this SS...⭐️⭐️⭐️..!!
Edited by Nikki_Titli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
wow loved each n every part of this story love ending ...from here new chapter will start

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