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anodaksgfan

@anodaksgfan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

thank you so much 😊

Have u written anything else?

On ishra or since I can see iqbal-shraddha dp..something on TP?

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: anodaksgfan

Have u written anything else?
On ishra or since I can see iqbal-shraddha dp..something on TP?

I have written a few other things on IshRa the list can be found here in this post compiled by Tanni under my username

**Lists of YHM Fan Fictions, One Shots & Short Stories!**(C 1st pg

and for TP I have written only one OS so far

Quicksand - AnKhi OS.

here are the links 😳

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anodaksgfan

@anodaksgfan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

^thanks for the links..

id love to read them..

il take some time though..coz of the hectic schedule..

developed a new liking for yhm and tp :)

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: anodaksgfan
^thanks for the links..
id love to read them..

il take some time though..coz of the hectic schedule..

developed a new liking for yhm and tp :)

No problem take your time 😳

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Israa.

@Recovery.

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

And I found an OS written by you,again.

Very Emotional Stuff indeed.

I've (since I started commenting on your stories) praised your portrayal of Raman's

emotions with utter perfection, but this time you nailed it with Ishita too.

When one shows something on screen an actor's acting is considered but when you write

the same thing the words and the way you express the emotions of each character matters.

You managed to show us the weak and ever so sensitive side of Raman's "Jhansi Ki Rani"

that we may never see on-screen,Although it is totally different from what we may see on screen,

it is in it's way something original infact something different.

This one is indeed a master piece.

A person like me who always wants to stay away from heart-wrenching emotional stories, you made me read this cause I knew something very good must be in the story.Amazingly Expressive, The story connects you with the character of Ishita and what she may be facing.I'm so Glad that It was you who wrote something on this.

Hats Of to you for being able to write something so deep (in the sense of hurt & fear at the same time)

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Recovery.
And I found an OS written by you,again.
Very Emotional Stuff indeed.
I've (since I started commenting on your stories) praised your portrayal of Raman's
emotions with utter perfection, but this time you nailed it with Ishita too.
When one shows something on screen an actor's acting is considered but when you write
the same thing the words and the way you express the emotions of each character matters.
You managed to show us the weak and ever so sensitive side of Raman's "Jhansi Ki Rani"
that we may never see on-screen,Although it is totally different from what we may see on screen,
it is in it's way something original infact something different.
This one is indeed a master piece.

A person like me who always wants to stay away from heart-wrenching emotional stories, you made me read this cause I knew something very good must be in the story.Amazingly Expressive, The story connects you with the character of Ishita and what she may be facing.I'm so Glad that It was you who wrote something on this.

Hats Of to you for being able to write something so deep (in the sense of hurt & fear at the same time)

Hey Israa thank you so much for taking out the time to read and comment on this, I am stunned speechless by the wonderful things everyone has said about this piece, thank you.

Like I wrote in my note - this is the most difficult thing I have ever written, perhaps ever will too cos the way it drained me was something I cant put into words. As you know Raman is my comfort zone, here Ishita was not just the novelty factor, she was my muse and one who was dealing with the most difficult thing that has happened to her, it makes me immensely proud to say so, even if it may be considered gloating that Ishita' voice, her POV has found so many people to stand by her.

And honest readers like you, who have explored into something they would normally not venture that is a kinda accomplishment for me; to know that this piece has managed to touch everyone so.

Thank you once again for humbling me by sharing your experience. 😳

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Aani i am catching up on a lot of fictions that i missed. Thats my fav pastime during the week end. This is so beautiful n touching.
Loved it!

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu
Aani i am catching up on a lot of fictions that i missed. Thats my fav pastime during the week end. This is so beautiful n touching.
Loved it!

thanks a lot Hema and the weekends are my time to catch up too god I am editing things here and there glad you liked this one 😳

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: andy22
Superb sotry..

thanks Andy 😊

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Arooj

@Arooj.M

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Every emotion was captured beautifully! The show itself failed to show how serious the attempted rape was but you've portrayed everything brilliantly. And the last line where the family is shown the extent of Ishita's suffering, if only the Bhalla family could really understand in the show too. The CVs dismissed it all so quickly!