Haunted by a Nightmare - IshRa OS

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA
Superb OS👏

Thank you Shreya

Quote

Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Maaneet099
every emotion portrayed beautifully. No dialogues still felt characters mouthing assurances. Outstanding Aani!!

Thank you Madhu

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: ishra24
Hey
I'm such a big fan of you because you are one of the few people who really use good language and portray emotions so well. You are just amazing and so was this OS.

I really really desperately want to see this scene in the show. Please contact the CVs and send them this and ask them to include this in the show.

This will make the whole family realize Ishita's trauma and teach Raman to care for her.

You deserve a huge round of applause. 😊😊😊

Thank you so much hon for these kind words and I have no idea about contacting CVs but I have heard they visit the forum so I hope they see this post and read the comments on it 😳

Quote

Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: FieryLioness
OMG literally my body shivered reading this OS...
outstanding...
hopefully bhalla family realize , what Ishu had bin through ...
that fear will be always there...

I am sorry to have scared you and thank you for saying my words affected you so very much, that is the biggest accomplishment for any writer 😳

Quote

Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
brilliant one-shot..very well written...simply superb...👏

thank you dear

Quote

Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus
I don't know what to say. I have no words. I am finding it tough to control my tears. You have a gift Aani! I am so glad to have met someone like you. It is rare to find people put emotions into words in the right manner. I hate Parmeet and the likes of him. Who gave them the right to assume things? To say, I shouldn't have come to you when everyone is home, when Ishita gave him no signal whatsoever suggesting she even wants to be friends with him is down right infuriating. I just don't get the logic of these guys. In what twisted world does this sort of thinking seem legitimate to such men! On top of that, he finds her infertility convenient?

Sneha 🤗

I am so deeply touched by the kind of comments I am reading on this one and thank you for these words, they mean a lot to me considering this OS literally drained me mentally and emotionally, I wanted to cry after I wrote this, to be honest I was scared of posting this but I am glad I went ahead with it, if it means the CVs know we would like the Bhallas should learn the extent of Ishita' fear and pain.

As for the likes of Parmeet - they arent men! Ishita rightly branded him as a monster cos that is what they are and to their filthy mind no one and nothing is off limits - if he could stoop so low as to target a woman who aided him, who is family what stops? Noting and to monsters like these what matters is only their lust and and if he isnt the least bit scared of sexually abusing her, then making a mockery of her infertility the one thing no one has been sensitive to her about ever is the least of his worries.

I hope the show has him duly punished a slap by Ishita is neither the solution nor the befitting punishment for the nature of his crime.

Quote

Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: vidya29
You've rendered me speechless with this heart wrenching piece of Ishita's reality.Its a bit overwhelming,the feeling I get after reading this.I'll stop here.I bow down to your talent.

I'd like to request you to kindling tweet this piece to any of the actors concerned.I don't have a twitter account,else would have done it myself.It needs to be brought to their notice.
Thank you.

Hi Vidya

It is humbling to know the response this piece has generated among my readers, I am in awe of the absolute appreciation and support that I have garnered for posting it, cos quite frankly writing it I was harrowed and disturbed myself - to be in Ishita' head was my personal nightmare here and I was apprehensive about how this would be taken by the members. But the lovely people here have been nothing but good.

As for the tweeting, I am really really not much into the social networks but I might try this thank you for your kind words of appreciation and support.

Quote

Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: gk_09
So heart wrenching! Amazingly written 👍🏼

thanks Gk

Quote

Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: simples28
Oh man..You are SIMPLY FABULOUS👏👏..OUTSTANDING BRILLIANT👍🏼👍🏼..I literally have no words..The turmoil in Ishu's mind.I can really sense it through your story⭐️..So realistic and so wonderfully put yaar👏👏..Amazing..I wish this was an SS..since its an OS I know it ends here..but I would love to read a part written by you where Raman comforts Ishu about this terrible fiasco that has happened with her..You express emotions so BEAUTIFULLY dear..Im a fan of yours..😊😊

Thank you Simple

And as much as I understand that you would love to hear Raman' take - his POV on this at the moment I am still finding it hard enough to disassociate myself from this piece even from Ishita' POV. Like I mentioned this is quite possibly the most difficult thing I have ever written, May be in a few days if I can move on and find a way to channel Raman in this situation in my mind I would do that but at the moment I cant make any promises sorry.

Once again thank you for this comment. 😊