Haunted by a Nightmare - IshRa OS

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: --mancityfan--
Man aani you are on a role

And you write awesome stories

And like I always say quality of your story is so good we can forget what we see on screen

Keep writing

thank you Vyas

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: jc_2312
Superb OS dear.. 👏 it just made me cry out.. Ur way of writing/narrating is really unique.. i literally felt the pain of Ishu.. 😭 Loved it.. 😊

thanks dear, as much as I am sorry you cried its good to know the content touched you so.

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri
simply fabulous
loved it

Thank you dear

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: CavingIn
No one deserves to be violated and no violater deserves to go
scot free. How can anyone be so cruel to another human being?
Just because women are physically the weaker gender we are taken advantage off? How barbaric is that?
I just want to hug your Ishita and let her know that she is not alone.
Excellent piece Aani.

Hey Nidha

I wish I had the answers or the way to stop and abolish this brutality that mankind is infested with but alas I am powerless... all I can do and hope is be aware of the things around me and I hope if any man has read this OS he understands the plight a woman goes through and be sensitive towards her and teach the same to his son - make him realize and learn how to respect women.

So long as monsters exist- mankind will always be faced with crimes like this, the only way to eradicate it is humanity and that is what we have to teach our kids. They have to learn how barbaric is the nature of some of the acts committed - its not a reason to gloat of boost but be aghast and angry.

I wish no woman has to go through what Ishita did and in case she does she fights the best she can.

Thanks Nidha for this comment.

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: serendipity.
OMG. Please tell me i wont cry??
okay. reserved.

Aani, u magiciannn! 🤗 UFFF how heart-wrenching and amazing was this? i LOVED LOVED LOVED it sooo soo much! Gosh! Ek tou you have this wonderful way with words... and then the emotion, agony.,, fear of Ishita... how visible WAS that.
Reading your intro, i thought it would be more like a breakdown from ishita and a confrontation... silent treatment with her pain, but no! This was something else altogether! Ishita's pain! OH MY GOD! too good Aani! The sight that Raman and the family had to see... i was hoping itd be a bit longer... maybe Raman's inner turmoil too, listening to all that?
but all in all, this was beautiful. If not exactly like that... atleast something close, like Ishita remembering, scared and Raman there for her type of thing i really hope DOES happen in the show!

Aamazingly written! :)

Hey Reens 🤗

Thank you so much, to be honest watching that scene I could feel this foul disgust and could not help but write this - a confrontation was the last thing that I could think off. I could only feel the fear Ishita lived through and the inhumanity of that monster, which I wanted the Bhalla clan to see, to learn off. They brushed off (Simi and Toshi) this incident as the filth of Ishita' mind when she came to them first and later hurled words at her - they oughta see what it is like to be on that end .

And as for Raman' end since I could not get my head out of Ishita' POV it didnt happen here - plus this was her voice, and she is hazy at best here and I would love nothing more than for Raman to see how scared Ishita was and is because of this thing.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: -cyndu-
Just Amazing! Loved it! :)

thank you dear

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: jojo1986
Loved it amazing 👏

thanks Jojo

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: luvsagar
Ani
Agreed that Divyanka was FABULOUS!!!

What a beautifully written heart wrenching OS! It depicts the emotions of someone that went through this horrific crime in the aftermath perfectly! I so wish that this is a scene shown in YHM..I think it is necessary to get it to the viewers and who better to portray this than Divz!!!

Love your writing and this one touched the heart!!!

Nina

Hey Nina

thank you for this comment and yep both Divyanka and Anurag were amazing, she could be the victim who could make us cry only because he was so convincing as the monster here.

And I am glad to know this touched your heart 🤗 like already mentioned in all my replies I want them to show her trauma too

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: creativeFF
heart wrenching. hope they show something like this in the show.

thanks dear and I hope so too.

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: ABBY92
This was really scary yet beautiful. Being in such a situation is traumatizing and truly, I really want Raman to see what this has done to Ishita.

Thank you Abby and I agree this sorta situation does need to be explored - it is indeed the most traumatizing thing that could happen to a woman.