Pieces of a puzzle - an IshRa SS| Epilogue - PG 26 - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

mind blowingly awesome :)


thanks Swati 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: florine_20

Wow. It was outstanding. Raman ishu fights have always been my favorite. Because they dont fight. The give us the reason to laugh catching our stomach 😆 😆
and girl did I read an update with raman and ishita discussing lingerie shopping and even her sense of size. And also that he himself will take her to a lingerie boutique for designer ones 😳 😳 and that IT was fabulous again obviously ishita he is not a father of two kids due to biology u know 🤣 🤣 he had to loose IT to get those kids

Girl you are a superb writer I must say that.


thanks Florine 😊

and yes you totally read that 😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan



Chapter 4, 5 - I read them together, so commenting at the same time... and sorry couldnt do it yesterday.

I loved it that you did not stop at chapter 4. Investigation and the exposure part was very subtly done. Chapter 5 gave the entire short-story that extra touch of humour and it was the BEST way to end this story...

And - now that the story is over, I can see you chose the right title😊

BTW, once again... the choice of present tense was apt in this story, and like I said before... you knew how you wanted it to shape up and end... Kudos...

as always, looking forward to more of your work.

I'll stop my Ramayan reply now 😆 see you in the next thread 😊


Thank you Lucky 😃

I am glad you found the title befitting 😳 - it fit as per me for IshRa and the mystery at hand that Raman had to solve - the quintessential puzzle that had his home in chaos 😳 Glad you liked the revelation and the humorous touch 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lourel24

loved it.I was grinning like an idiot reading their talks.ishita's seperation really made raman much bold.He was talking as if he was talking about daily things.really raman u will take her to the shop.


thanks Lourel and glad you had a good time reading this UD 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sai14

Beautiful :D The first 4 parts were emotional and you put a smile on my face in the last part...

if something similar like the last part would happen for real in the show 😆


thanks Sai I am sure that IshRa will have something that has us laughing sometime soon keeping in mind the speed of the episodes almost half of the spoilers for this week were already aired on Saturday as it is 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Epilogue

It was not easy, but he does it anyways. Mihir had brought along enough proof to convince everyone of Parmeet' history as a sexual offender; and with so much evidence no one could anymore question the authenticity of the allegations made against him by Ishita. The police arrested Parmeet on charges of sexual harassment; when they went through his things, a DVD containing a MMS of Sarika was also recovered which he used to threaten and blackmail her into filing a complaint against Ishita. Sarika had finally revealed the entire truth to Raman after his conversation with Ishita letting him know how Parmeet had threatened her with the MMS and also said he would pay for the expenses of her mother' treatment.

Raman had assured Sarika the MMS would never see the light of the day and that he would pay for the entire treatment her mother needs if she speaks the truth and help them reveal Parmeet' true colors to his family and the police. The girl obliged.

The family was shattered but acknowledged they wronged Ishita and had to make amends for that.

It took another week for Mrs. Iyer to finally allow Ishita to return to her marital home, only after numerous pleas made by the Bhalla clan and apologies from Mrs. Bhalla and Simi.

It was ten days after the fiasco, Ishita returned to the Bhalla house.

Simi had filed for a divorce soon after coming to terms with the truth about her monstrous husband and further asked for a solo custody of their six-month-old daughter, while filing for a restraining order against her father at the same time too.

The trip to the boutique Raman had mentioned to her during their conversation in the clinic happens six months later. One week before their upcoming honeymoon trip to the south of France, followed by a week in Milan, Venice & Vienna in Italy.

Raman had ended up buying many things for his wife from the boutique.

However, they mostly remained unused and unopened. The items purchased from high couture boutiques in France and Italy, didn't allow the chance to do so, not until they got back home and decided to make use of them, since things ended up getting shredded and torn on a regular basis until not a single item brought from France or Italy remained viable for use.

Edited by EkPaheli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow you love collecting quotes too? 😛 Thats so cool *hi5* so do I... which again is an open secret here 😆
-Hi5 back at ya 😊 I'm glad you're opening up to me 🤣

Cos I dont know about the amazing part but yes the reserved thing is true😳 - I make friends slowly and am very selective in opening up 😳 as for the creative bits - well I enjoy all form of arts though I am not proficient at all of them - the one that comes naturally to me the easiest is of course writing

-Well, Raman is Kinda Reserved too, and the way you portray his character made me write this 😳 And we have one thing in common even I make friends slowly so yay to that. and ofcourse you're amazing when it comes to writing.

Coming at the update "The Dirty Talk" Well, I love the Quote at the start first of all.
Then Raman's dialogues, so hilarious man 🤣 How do you do that? such humor in such witty lines 😆 and My Favourite thing was Raman' reaction about Simi 🤣
and how Raman told Ishita he will buy a "leeen-guh-raay" for Ishita 🤣
Only I know how much I laughed at that particular point! and yes she was sitting on his lap even I didn't realise when did that happen actually 😆

I loved the humorous update! Something really different than what we normally read in stories. 😊👍🏼

Coming to the Epilogue:
It is very well written! and again saying every needed detail is present in there.

The trip to the boutique Raman had mentioned to her during their conversation in the clinic happens six months later. One week before their upcoming honeymoon trip to the south of France, followed by a week in Milan, Venice & Vienna in Italy.

Raman really took her to the boutique? 🥱 And yes the honeymoon, Milan,Venice ^ Vienna, Raman is finally making some good use of his money. and don't tell me they went to the Honeymoon "Sirif Ruhi ke liye" 😆

And a very Amazing story came to an End. I'm so Glad you choose to write something on this Parmeet track. I'll be waiting for your new stories 👏👏

*bows down* *Claps Claps Claps* *drum rolls*
Edited by Recovery. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful SS Aani Di 😊 Thanks for pm 😃 Sorry for late reply 😭 Pls continue soon & pm Me 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Aani...I dont know what to say...some writers' write ups entertain the readers...some writers touch the readers through their write ups...reader starts feelings the emotions the protagonists are going through..its easy to convey these emotions and situations through visuals ...but its really difficult to make the readers connect to the emotion through a write up...u do that with such perfection ... with this SS u made me go though all the emotions Ishita and Raman are going through..her plight ...his regret ...his efforts to make her feel better ...everything touched me...wonderfully written dear...u r such a gifted writer...keep writing 😳
Edited by _Deepika_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Gracious Lord!
Shredded and torn ☺️ They are one passionate couple I say *chuckles*
A well written end to a traumatic episode in IshRa's life.

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