Pieces of a puzzle - an IshRa SS| Epilogue - PG 26 - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks Jojo 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Recovery.

wow you love collecting quotes too? 😛 Thats so cool *hi5* so do I... which again is an open secret here 😆

-Hi5 back at ya 😊 I'm glad you're opening up to me 🤣

Hey Issra 😃 the pleasure' mine 😆

Cos I dont know about the amazing part but yes the reserved thing is true😳 - I make friends slowly and am very selective in opening up 😳 as for the creative bits - well I enjoy all form of arts though I am not proficient at all of them - the one that comes naturally to me the easiest is of course writing

-Well, Raman is Kinda Reserved too, and the way you portray his character made me write this 😳 And we have one thing in common even I make friends slowly so yay to that. and ofcourse you're amazing when it comes to writing.

Yep he is and I must say this again I am stunned by your observations, I guess thats a trait people like us have in common too - we say less and notice more 😳 - all kinds of stuff like Ishita learned recently when ahem certain things were discussed 😉😆

Coming at the update "The Dirty Talk" Well, I love the Quote at the start first of all.

😆😆 glad to know of it... I just hope Ms. Bronte isnt rolling in her grave right now🤔 with because of the way I have adapted it here with my chapter 😆


Then Raman's dialogues, so hilarious man 🤣 How do you do that? such humor in such witty lines 😆

LOL... like I said Raman is somewhat similar to me and you too, and isnt this a trait among us reserved ppl 🤔 we do have a great sense of humor (yep totally blowing my own trumpet here 😆) 😎only one has to be patient enough to know that about us - my close friends can vouch for this - it takes time for me to open up, so a person has to be patient enough first to know me and then to tolerate me 😆 cos I have a hard time shutting up once I am comfortable enough with someone LOL

and My Favourite thing was Raman' reaction about Simi 🤣



🤣🤣 that was my fav bit too I can bet you anything if this does happen on the show and Ishu opens up to him about what exactly Simi had mentioned to her before their SR, RKB would sooo squirm he would wish the earth would open up and swallow him whole there and then 🤣


and how Raman told Ishita he will buy a "leeen-guh-raay" for Ishita 🤣
Only I know how much I laughed at that particular point! and yes she was sitting on his lap even I didn't realise when did that happen actually 😆


😆😆 how she landed in his lap creative liberty 🤣 but I guess when he took her in his arms when she fell it more or less had her on his lap and she was crying so much it dint occur to her 😆 and of course RKB has to have the upperhand in any argument 😆 the man cant quit so he would volunteer to take her there just to enjoy the expressions on her face, also post the dress scene we know he is capable of saying that to her totally!!! 🤣

I loved the humorous update! Something really different than what we normally read in stories. 😊👍🏼

Credit due to IshRa and their hilarious SR which inspired this UD 😳

Coming to the Epilogue:
It is very well written! and again saying every needed detail is present in there.

thank you 😳

The trip to the boutique Raman had mentioned to her during their conversation in the clinic happens six months later. One week before their upcoming honeymoon trip to the south of France, followed by a week in Milan, Venice & Vienna in Italy.

Raman really took her to the boutique? 🥱 And yes the honeymoon, Milan,Venice ^ Vienna, Raman is finally making some good use of his money. and don't tell me they went to the Honeymoon "Sirif Ruhi ke liye" 😆

LOL this def isnt Sirf Ruhi ke liye in any way 🤣 the leeng-uh-ray would not have been able to see the light of the day in that case 🤣🤣 and I have got it shredded and torn ☺️😈😆

And a very Amazing story came to an End. I'm so Glad you choose to write something on this Parmeet track. I'll be waiting for your new stories 👏👏

*bows down* *Claps Claps Claps* *drum rolls*


thank you thank you* takes a bow * ☺️

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Posted: 11 years ago
RES

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This isnt fair Aani😉... I was ready for the story to have finished in the last chapter. Your epilogue is NOT an epilogue. Could it be a prologue please? Your last paragraph tells me you can surely come up with a more passionate follow-up 😆

Jokes apart - the epilogue did tie up the loose ends of what happens in the Bhalla family after the whole exposure part.. very well written, as always😊
Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks Dhristi 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Wonderful SS Aani Di 😊 Thanks for pm 😃 Sorry for late reply 😭 Pls continue soon & pm Me 😳


thanks Lipi 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _Deepika_

Hey Aani...I dont know what to say...some writers' write ups entertain the readers...some writers touch the readers through their write ups...reader starts feelings the emotions the protagonists are going through..its easy to convey these emotions and situations through visuals ...but its really difficult to make the readers connect to the emotion through a write up...u do that with such perfection ... with this SS u made me go though all the emotions Ishita and Raman are going through..her plight ...his regret ...his efforts to make her feel better ...everything touched me...wonderfully written dear...u r such a gifted writer...keep writing 😳


Hey Deepika thank you so much 😃

Your words humble me as they inspire me to try and write more new stories the appreciation you guys have shown for my work is the greatest reward I could have asked for it 😳

I am really touched that you think I am doing justice to IshRa the best I can and that you connect with what I write as it touches you, that is all the reward I need and its worth it because of comments like these 😃🤗

thank you once again😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CavingIn

Gracious Lord!

Shredded and torn ☺️ They are one passionate couple I say *chuckles*
A well written end to a traumatic episode in IshRa's life.


☺️ 😆😆

Yep I somehow have that idea of them, especially Raman ☺️

thanks Nidha 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

RES

will read the epilogue tonight... and post comments


Sure Lucky take your time 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ahh, I think I just found my new favourite writer on IF!
This SS was everything I expect from the show and much more! You have an amazing way with words, wording everything so poignantly. With some writers, there's often either too much or too little, but with you, it all just flows so wonderfully! 👏

The way you've presented these characters as well is amazing - you've managed to stick true to the IshRa we all know and love from the show, yet at the same time, you've also managed to put them across as your own.. if that even makes sense? (which it probably doesn't.. but y'know 😆)

I absolutely loved all of it, and two parts most especially; the first was Ishita's dialogue in the beginning when she explains that all she expected from him was a little trust 😭 this is exactly what I want to see in the show.. not her silently accepting Raman's apology, if and when it comes.

The second part is where he gives her his justification about how the father in him had always believed her, but the husband who has gone through many traumas himself was still a little hesitant.. I think that that dialogue was written beautifully 👏

I loved it so much, thank you for writing such a wonderful piece! 😃

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