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Naughty_n_nice thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

ya take all the tareef, but post too! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey everyone... here's the next half chapter of my story...
like i said previously, im kinda stuck so i need to work on a few things
but i felt bad abt keeping everyone waiting so here's a little something till
then... hope you guys enjoy it and please please please leave ur
comments/reviews/suggestions...



The Crab Shack was a great place for a night out. It wasn't a classy,
expensive restaurant but it wasn't a fast-food joint either. It was the
perfect place for a bunch of friends to go to if they wanted to "chill". The
wooden floors were always scrubbed and shined and the red, brick walls
gave the place a nice warmth.

It was only five minutes away from where they lived and they could
have easily walked there but they chose not to. They arrived at the
restaurant in no time at all and Johnny parked his red convertible in the
parking space closest to the entrance of the restaurant. All four them got
out of the car and made their way to the restaurant.

As they were walking to the doors, Veronica couldn't help but notice
how attractive Michael looked in his pink t-shirt which was paired with
dark, denim jeans and a black hoodie jacket which completed his "surfer-
dude" image. She felt a slight warmth creep up her face but decided to
shake it away.

"Good evening. Table for 4?" asked a cheery waitress as they
stepped into the restaurant.

"Yup." answered Johnny with a smile on his face.

"Right this way." said the waitress and led them to a table.

All four of them took a seat and the waitress handed them the
menus. "I'll be back to take your order." she said before she walked away.

After a while, the waitress came back and took their orders. When
the waitress left, an awkward silence fell on the table. It had been a long
time since Veronica had gone out with her friends and all of them wanted
to make sure they didn't say anything that would upset her.

"This is a really great place. I'm glad all of us came here before we
went off to college." said Meg, breaking the silence and trying to keep the
conversation as safe as possible.

"Yeah, it really is. And I'm glad Johnny's uncle let us use his place."
added Michael.

"His beach house is always locked up anyway. He just bought it to
show-off. No one ever really uses it." said Johnny.

"How do you like it here Ronnie?" asked Meg.

"Oh... It's a beautiful place indeed." answered Veronica with a smile
that didn't reach her sad eyes.
~Sirius*Ysh~ thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
something really HUGE must hav happened for her to be So depressed!!!!!!

nd im waiting to see wht it is 😛

good chapter nd haan my usual complaint - too short!!!!

bt i knw how its lyk to be in a block... im there too, but not with Lyf@16, dont worry 😛

so yea update sooner 😛 or im gonna get tanu on ur case 😛😛😛

luv

❤️Ysh❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww ...he wore pink shirt black jacket..tht too hooded...im goin gaga here 😆 neone looks hot in black n with mike im sure he looks os mch better in a black jacket ...8->
neways gr8 chap do continue soon 😳
evn im way curious to kno wht made ron sad :-?
n i hav to say i luv d title too way to go ysh 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awww Rashmi! Sorry I took so long to review. Great chapter, but I wish it were longer. But atleast Veronica seems to be taking some interest in Michael. I'm really curious how Mark betrayed her. It must have been awful! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ~Sirius*Ysh~

something really HUGE must
hav happened for her to be So depressed!!!!!!

nd im waiting to see wht it is 😛

good chapter nd haan my usual complaint - too short!!!!

bt i knw how its lyk to be in a block... im there too, but not with Lyf@16,
dont worry 😛

so yea update sooner 😛 or im gonna get tanu on ur case 😛😛😛

luv

❤️Ysh❤️



thanks for the comments ysh! i dont think you'll have to wait that long... i
just need to figure out this one tiny thing and then everything else will fall
into place and i can post... hehe
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: coolniyu

awww ...he wore pink shirt black jacket..tht too
hooded...im goin gaga here 😆 neone looks hot in black n with mike im
sure he looks os mch better in a black jacket ...8->
neways gr8 chap do continue soon 😳
evn im way curious to kno wht made ron sad :-?
n i hav to say i luv d title too way to go ysh 😉




thanks niyu! like i told ysh, i just need to figure out this one thing and then
everything falls into place and i'll update... i've also been quite busy cuz i
have dance class and i need to choreograph and dance for my friend's
brother's wedding so that's taking up a lot of my time... but i'll try to update
as soon as i can! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: .:.Suhana.:.

Awww Rashmi! Sorry I took so long to review. Great
chapter, but I wish it were longer. But atleast Veronica seems to be taking
some interest in Michael. I'm really curious how Mark betrayed her. It must
have been awful! Can't wait for the next chapter!



thanks! its no problem, at least you did review! 😃 working on the details of
the next chapter... can't promise when i'll have it tho
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks horia... like i said, im quite bust ryt now so i barely have time to
write... i'm trying my best tho... no promises
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Posted: 18 years ago
no hurry darling... take ur own time... but u knw our comittee may just have some duty... that is IF putturani doesnt update...

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