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A jack in the box

A life on the line

A broken heart💔

The helpless die

Impossible it may seem

Daring it may sound

Hard to understand

Amazing to wonder

Shocking it may be

Tremendously surprising

I love you❤️

My first hug

My first kiss

My first love

A hunger

A passion

A heartbreak

Too much to ask for

Too much to give

A love that was meant to be broken

Is a love lost in the midst

A heartbreak💔

A stumble

A fall

Crying limited tears for all

I'll never forget

The first time I fell in love

But I'll always remember

The first time love falls. (That should be fails but I went I with falls)

What do you Guys think????????????

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Melodious... the flow is really good I was singing it... Nice one truly melodious.
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Originally posted by: silent.desire

Melodious... the flow is really good I was singing it... Nice one truly melodious.


thank you😳
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Originally posted by: Princess.S786

Really nice poem 😊

thank you.😳
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thank you😳
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Thank You...😳

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