OS - Another Chance - Page 4

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey

I simply love the way you write Neha! Your write ups have that flawless continuity which hooks the reader to the story and makes him/her crave to read more. I seriously didnt want it to end! The best element about this story was that you wrote this according to the Girl's point of view! An orphan girl, what she tends to think when she comes to know that she is nothing but a burden on the people who are the closest to her after her parents' death, is perfectly written here!
I really adore the way you wrote the conversation between Vrinda and Amar! And the fact that the guy was going to the wedding wearing a shirt and a pair of shorts, cracked me up! 😆
I loved the part when Amar asked Vrinda to stay at his place until she finds a place to live in! 😳 A cute OS Neha! Lovely one! Keep writing!

Wow Shivangi Thanks sooo much ! This is really a huge compliment ! I'm really glad you enjoyed it !! Once again, Thanks sooo much !!

Originally posted by: PRASSI

Awesome OS Neha...!!!!

I loved the way u wrote it...!!!

All the feelings n all...It was amazing!!!😊

Thank You Dii, Really Happy you liked it !

Originally posted by: khyati2000

Pls continue this os... PLEASE

Aww sweetie ! I really don't know how I w😊ould continue this ... Really sorry but I am glad you liked it

Originally posted by: nikkypal

simply nice... thnx 4 pm

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: tareyfan

nys OS dear...

i luvd d part wen she realizes dat he was actually goin to hr wedding 4m where she had run away 😛

Thank You ! I'm glad you enjoyed !

Originally posted by: --taareylove---

aww such a awesome os dear haye vrimar so amazing I love it so much keep writing

Thanks Yashi Dii ! Really appreciate it !

Originally posted by: DlovesTaarey

awww so cute os
u wrote 4rm vrindas pov it is so hard to write 4rm som1s pov
i liked d way u descrbed vrindas feeling on seeing amar
nice os and do write more
wilo comment on ur ff soon...

Thank You Dear, It really means a lot to me !😃

Originally posted by: kriti094

Amazing os
luv vrimar :-)

Thanks !!! 😊

Gosh ... just loved it sooo much🤗
U wrote it sooo damn amazingly neha!!!
I really dont hav words to express it... n d scene where amar was wiping her tears!!
Just wanna request u one thing...pls pls pls continue it!!! Really want u to cont dis!! It will be d best one!!
Pls do if possible... n outstanding os!!😊

Originally posted by: shikha_taarey

Gosh ... just loved it sooo much🤗
U wrote it sooo damn amazingly neha!!!
I really dont hav words to express it... n d scene where amar was wiping her tears!!
Just wanna request u one thing...pls pls pls continue it!!! Really want u to cont dis!! It will be d best one!!
Pls do if possible... n outstanding os!!😊

Thank You sooo much !!!!!!!!! It's really great to know you liked my work. I seriously don't know how I would continue this ... Sorry but Thank You for this lovely comment !