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I simply love the way you write Neha! Your write ups have that flawless continuity which hooks the reader to the story and makes him/her crave to read more. I seriously didnt want it to end! The best element about this story was that you wrote this according to the Girl's point of view! An orphan girl, what she tends to think when she comes to know that she is nothing but a burden on the people who are the closest to her after her parents' death, is perfectly written here!
I really adore the way you wrote the conversation between Vrinda and Amar! And the fact that the guy was going to the wedding wearing a shirt and a pair of shorts, cracked me up! 😆
I loved the part when Amar asked Vrinda to stay at his place until she finds a place to live in! 😳 A cute OS Neha! Lovely one! Keep writing!
I really adore the way you wrote the conversation between Vrinda and Amar! And the fact that the guy was going to the wedding wearing a shirt and a pair of shorts, cracked me up! 😆
I loved the part when Amar asked Vrinda to stay at his place until she finds a place to live in! 😳 A cute OS Neha! Lovely one! Keep writing!
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