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dua

@dua22

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

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hey kanks

again u have written something very beautiful.....u described pain really well...

well whatever u write i always find it alluring.....

" lid her swollen eyes".....claps for this....its only u who can write like this

one more thing u always write from a girls pov.....i just request u to write something from a guys pov plz.....only if u want to otherwise its ok

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Anu

@DulceAmor

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Hey Kanky, sorry my comment is late, was busy with xmas stuff.... You write very emotionally. I hope this isn't autobiographical in anyway cause the level of anguish in this OS is intense. It makes for powerful reading. You should be proud of being able to write something like this. 👏

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natashu

@natashu

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Kanks, I gotta say...brilliant work done!

I could literally picture all those emotions. Your writing elicits strong visual imagery!

...I am not much of a writer, but it's always nice to see other's excel at it =D

The title, Set Me Free was very apt.

Like I saw somebody else suggest, maybe you could do an OS similar in theme from a boy's POV?

I would like to see how you handle that one!

And that poem - it was awesometastic!😃

Like I said already, you're one heck of a writer!

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Aishwarya

@-Aish-

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Girl, you're improving like crazy! It's been ages since I commented on any OS or FF. And I'm thankful for starting with this one.

The brilliance can OBVIOUSLY be seen, miss prodigy. All I wanna know is what next you're going to come up with.

With love,

Aishwarya

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

hey kanky..congo on the gallery..

the poem was really nice..it described the agony of the woman quite well..

the one-shot was really cute. He was going to leave her and she couldn't do anything about it, she had to accept it. He was always there for her, and now she had to do without him. Must've been hard! She still waits for him to call, and still misses him, their bond is really cute.

thnx 4 d pm

do write more