|My Archive of Emotions| ~ K! . . - Page 3

Originally posted by: jeflkjfkljfkj

⭐️ |-Reserved-| 😆

Sorry, I need sleep! Kal exam hai 😉😆

Btw, classy name huh! love it. And the picture you have pasted...totally classic!! I went wow looking at it!! 😊

Poem par comments later on, kay?

Sorry again.

Ciao.

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Hello!! :D Sorry for the late editing of my comment (You know me....😛 lol...😆) And plus, my exams are still going on...🥱

Hmmm chuck that! 😆 The poem, about that..I had read it on the day itself. It was just that I dint comment, coz it was late 😳 Sorry! 😃

Urm, Oh my goodness..it was deep, really deep..

Thunderous sounds echo in her ears,

She mourns, she screams, she fears,

My my...this is seriously good!! Loved this line...I mean the way you have put it with the thunderous sounds and she mourns screams and fears...I literally went 👏

That definitely shows how well your write...:)

The winds chill her to the marrow,

Though her heart continues to burn in sorrow,

Again, whoa. ⭐️ How do you fit in words perfectly? I mean chills her to marrow...just perfect. No no!! 😆 Its beyond perfection. 👏

Plus, the contrast here is bravo!! ⭐️ Can totally understand she must be going through. 😛

The sky starts to get unruffled,

This time, the winds leave her a trifle soothed,

She figures out she could make up a bit through freshening up and a stroll,

The dreariness of her life was immortal to stay, after all!

Even if I go searching with a microscope also na...😆 I wont get an ending better than this one!! 👏

It makes me ponder about some stuffs in my life too 😕 and trust me, none of the poets are able to do that till now 😆

Hmmm...lemme explain! 😳 I don't really like poetry and stuffs...😳 I never read them or understand them...too much of depth for me 😆 (PS. Not that I'm too shallow huh!! I'm just a science student...I know you will get me....😆😆 Well, hope so! 😃) Anyways so, yeah..I never bother to read poems..😃 Buh I read yours, coz i knew it'd be brilliant!! And I'm glad you dint let me down...:) Infact, you raised my expectations a lots more 😃 Badhe chalo!! 😆....

-touched- 😊

Your poem conveys a hell lot to me...😃 thank you for such a wonderful piece. I'm honored to read it, seriously. Do write more...😊

Ahem...who else....😳

Deby....🤗❤️

Originally posted by: achoose

beautiful..............

Originally posted by: ruexangel

hey kanky, beautiful words, great poem

"clouds unruffled" was my favourite metaphor here

the poem is really long but critically i'd say the rhyming changes na half way? it effects the way the reader reads the poem slightly, because of the rhythm...was there a particular reason for the change in the pattern or were you just going with whatever felt right :)

very deep, keep it up! :)

Originally posted by: brainychild92

the story of everyone's life!lol

i really liked this cuz i could relate to it on the diff situations i have to through everyday(starting with just waking up)lol

pm me to lemme know hwen u add something!

Originally posted by: .Divya.

Kanky.. Congrats on opening your new gallery.. and the Poem.. Deep feelings conveyed beautifully.

Originally posted by: -Sharmila-

Res!!

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Hiya Kankz!! 😊

My Archive of emotions. . . . Whoa. . . kya naam hai!. . . Perfect!. . You are so good with titles ya!. . . Main lakh koshish karu toh bhi dhang ke titles nhn rakh pathi. . .

Good you opened a single thread .. . this is more manageable. . i'm doing the same at present!. .😆

Coming to the poem. . .

Its Awesome!. . . And this is the reason I get inspired!. . Samjhi?? !! 😆

I love the way you've written. . . it has such a deep imprint on you when u read it. . . Wonderful!! . ..

I'm always in awe of your work. . and this is no different!. . .

Great job Kankz!. . .👏

-Sharmila

Originally posted by: -Jess-

Hi Kanky!

Congratulations on your new gallery! I loved the title 'My Archieve of Emotions'.... seems like my kinda title....😳

I love reading some FFs on IF... but I have a special love for poems... and so this poem naturally captured my attention.

Beautiful poem!!!

I loved the flow of the poem... it was like a small story... first describing the deep burried pain and tears that are forming... emotions that are ready to come out....the cry that no one able to hear... and then the loud thunder rumbling in the background... inviting her to get up and take a stroll.... and so she decides to go out in the foggy night.

I loved the contrast that you used here...

The winds chill her to the marrow,

Though her heart continues to burn in sorrow,

The wind chill gets to the bones... yet it does not seize the burning fire in her heart.... amazing!!

She thinks over the mistakes which are rectified and yer some remain...She wants to escape from the emptiness surrounding her.... however as the sky starts clearing up, the same bone chilling wind soothes her pain.... and tells her...some pains are there to stay with you for life... some sorrows are immortal.

Awsome poem Kanky. Do write more. I love to read anything thats written with emotions.

Love

Archana

Originally posted by: dua_adil

Hey kanky

i am already very much impressed by your FFs and now this. You are so talented. You have used each and every word brilliantly.

Originally posted by: DulceAmor

You are really talented Kanky. You can write beautifully in any style you choose, which is actually a rare gift to have. The poem is just amazing. I liked the fact you alternated the ryhme scheme across different stanzas. Must congratulate you on finding ryhmes, cause that can be very tricky. It really is very good and you should be very proud of it. 👏

Originally posted by: -Aish-

So, Ms. Kankshita. I'm sorry, again. All my posts start this way, don't they? 😆

I've HEARD you hate hugs, but you didn't tell me about that. So, 🤗

How are you, Kanks? I'm missing you so much. You're a wonderful writer, girl. God bless you for that.

Coming to the poem, it's deep, profound, and surely leaves a deep impact on the mind of the reader. I'm not exaggerating, really. The flow in your works, the story in your poem, the writer's feelings, everything is so seemingly real. THAT is the mark of a good writer.

All in all, I loved the poem and I LOVE your gallery name, 'Archive of Emotions'. Cool!!

Only one thing, though. If possible, give me this poem's rhyme scheme, if you had thought of any, that is.

God bless you and your talent.

With love,

Aishwarya